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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
part 6
nice...
why this disappearing act?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72



Maan tried to find Geet...

Geet also tried to meet him but everything failed...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
nice part...
bt m confused.. agar geet ne maan ko office mai milne k.liye bola den y she went home???
yaar wat is the suspence??? jaldi revile karna
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Happy ganesh chaturti..
Just read all the 6parts ,loved it...
When maaneet meet hope all the doubts will be cleared...
Waiting for the next update...pls pm when u update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
toh geet was nowhere b4...nw d alliance...its really puzzling...

beautiful
update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
amazing update...
waiting fr geet mystery to be solved...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
guys i had forgotten that today is Tuesday
i am typing will try to update by night
sorry
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

PART:7

AT PRESENT



His thoughts came back to present

He do not when he went into the past seeing the photo,

After seeing the photo , he was shocked

He never imagined that he will see geet like this… like this situation

How could geet could agree to this alliance…. How…

How could she ..…

He wants to meets her, wants to talk to her

he has to wait until for the next day to get the answers for his questions

THE NEXT DAY HE ALONG WITH THE DADIMA WENT TO PLACE WHERE GEET WAS STAYING

He came to know that geet was staying one distant relative of her chachi chachi

He was received by them

Seated in the living room he was waiting for the geet, he was some what not liking this alliance and seeing geet like this she is dev would be…..

Do not know how much would dev would loved her and geet may dev was her first love…

How could get forget all this, and accepted this proposal when when knowing that dev is his cousin

He was restlessly waiting for geet to come but still she did not came

Here her so called cahchi and chachi had started their interrogation ,

Beta appto jyada din app camps bahut jate hai, dadima ne batya hai …..shadi ke baad bhi aise jate hai kya

He glared at dadima hearing these question

Savitri devi gulped her saliva seeing maan face

To geet bhi apke saat Mumbai me rahegi ye, dadima me ke saat

Hearing these question maan was geeting irritation,

He was moving restlessly on the sofa

Seeing him moving restlessly on the sofa

He saw geet uncle was coming towards

Beta you want to use washroom, do not feel shy you can go

What …

Maan first did not understand what he is telling ., when he understood , he glared at the dadima as if

You are reason for all these

Dadima was stunned, she tried to avoid to see maan and looking here and there

At the same she saw her cell has beeped

She saw one meesage

Dadima ab bhaut hogya hai ye natak , I am going

Reading maan message she shouted loudly

Nahi…..

Seeing dadima shouting all were surprised

What happened savitri ji,,your heatlh is okay

Ha..ha…

Kya haina , it is becoming late. You bring geet

Hearing geet name maan became bit relaxed

Actually he is not liking this drama

At the same he saw chachi was calling someone to bring geet

Suddenly there was quietness in the room, geet slowely entered the room. He saw her

Quietly coming down from the steps.





Geet …



A slight whisper came out from his mouth

A maan geet dekhona geet itna pyara name hai, aur geet bhi itni khoobsurat hai

You look like a perfect coupel

Listening to her words

Geet immediately raised her head and saw maan

He has completely changed





he used to maintain clean shave but now in that place small beard came making more handsome

maan was seeing geet She was looking little bit nervous, but there was lot of change when he first saw her and now

she became more thin, there were dark circles under her eyes, she is looking as if she has not slept for ages,

Savitri made geet to sit besides her

She was asking questions

Geet your chachi told that you want to do some job

Suddenly maan looked her

Hearing that question

Ha aunty I want to do job

Though her voice is calm , there was determination in her voice that she wants to do the job

Maan could not understand why geet is so particular about the job

He want to talk with geet

He wants to shout at there and tell her to stop this drama

He wants take her from this place and ask her

Why she is doing all this how could she agree to this marriage knowing everything

He could not control no more ,

Dadima muje geet se baat karna hai akele me

Thhek hai beta, as wish

Geet beta take maan to your room

Geet was is this all this nonesese

Hearing his anger voice , geet immediately closed the room door , she was afraid if any one listens to his voice

Maan please

Dheere boliye

Geet how could you do like , how could you agree all this even after you know that who iam, what the relation I have with dev

Maan please dhera bholiye, please anyone can hear voice

Maan was trying to contro his anger

Geet here I came here because I want to meet you and talk to you, and now you are telling to control my anger

Maan , I want to talk to you,

Geet you come out side we will talk somewhere not here

But where,

Geet there is one temple in the outskirts of the village Krishna ka mandir, you come around evening 5 I will be waiting for you there

Saying that he immediately opened the door , he saw everyone were staring at him

Dadima I have to attend some urgent meeting I have to go, without making her making further discussion he quietly went and sat in the car

Okay paami ji hum log phone karte hai

Saying that dadima quietly went near to the car

precape: geet maan talks



guys thanks a lot for your supports and giving comments and likes

okay then bye good night

sweet dreams


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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

excellent update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Nice part...
Finally geet n maan aamne samne... Was waiting for this...
Nw waiting for their talk n also truth...

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