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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
finally maneet became one...
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Please don't let Geet get hurt so soon, they have just come close..
Please give a twist but nit awful one...
Good update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very good update..please no breaking Geets heart...
Love the way they are coming close to each other...
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 27
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
amezing part
finally maaneet becme one after long
precap is scary maan geet ka dil kaise todega .plz update soon cant wait for twist
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 27

lovedit..superb

maaneet scene were lovely

precap seems scary

continue soon


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Posted: 12 years ago



sorry guys became quite busy with other personal things, an way back again to day is tues day going update the story
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART-28

He remembered their intense love making ….. , with left hand he took the hairs strand which are falling on her face, he kissed her on her forehead….he felt very happy seeing geet like this……his hands automatically went around her waist…..hugging her tightly ,, she is deep sleep… may do now how many days she did not sleep…. now geet has become his….in every nature, he will guard her from every difficulties ….

HIS TRAIL OF TOUGHtS WERE AGAIN DISTURBED BY THE CELL PHONE RING, HEARING THOSE RINGS GEET WAS MOVING,

Seeing this he immediately took the cell

Where are you I was trying from the last 1 week please come back.. vicky is crying for you,,, I cannot handle… he is having slight fever….

At once maan shocked hearing those words ……

He got irritated with this

Wrong number saying that he cut the phone….\

What is itni subha subha pura mood kharaba kardiya is wrong number,.. saying that he again started to pat on the geet head who slight waking up with the phone sound….he tried to make her sleep

At the same time again the phone rang….

Hearing those rings… maan immediately took it and went inside the balcony… he do not want to disturb geet sleep …

geet what happened to your voice… you are not coming here .. from last 1 week .. vicky was crying for you… yesterday he got fever also…. He is asking your name please come back…

what happened geet you are not talking any thing.. are you okay

okay try to come here soon, saying she cut the call….

Hearing those words… maan understood that the previous call was alo made by her. and it is not a wrong number… he could find out that who is this vicky, why this lady so much worried about this vicky ..


at once second.. he could not understand what he should do …. He immediately called the detective and gave geet no and told him to trace the no

After 10 min his phone rang…, he immediately took the call a if he was waiting for that …

The call location came from a gokul orphanage center……..

Is this correct address …yes….

IT WAS ALMOST 20 KM FROM THE CITY.. WHEN CAR STOPPED THE AT THE PLACE …

MAAN GOT DOWN FROM THE CAR AND WAS CHECKING THE ADRESS…..

GOKUL.. HE SAW THE NAME OF THE ORPHANAGE… CENTER

His steps… stopped, in dilemma whether to go inside or not.. at the same time

Beta andar nahi avogye …

He saw the elderly person asking him to come inside

When he entered the premises, the whole atmosphere has changed, there was quite peaceful .. fresh air is coming because of the big landscape garden he saw, there is a small play zone.. there.. kids playing slides, sea saw….

..one boy caught his attention.. the same blue color eyes…., same hair style,.. the way he kept his hands on his small waist, and fighting with the older kids , same like him…

His legs automatically went there… he wants to see that kid…., at the same time some one called him and the kid ran inside, maan too walked fast to catch the glimpse of the kid…

App… koun hai…

At one second he do not know what to answer,

Oh… he remembered that he came here to meet mayuri who has called geet

Oh I want to meet mayuri

Oh.. for what ..

He is getting irritation for this questions answers section…

Why ,I cannot see her now..he said in slightly irritated tone

Seeing his behavior, immediately the lady tried to be calm.. vo actually she went how… she will come in 10 min you wait in her cabin, saying that she made him to sit in mayuri cabin

Masi …masi...maan heard a shrill voice of kid who was running into the cabin..

Masi.. app adi ko scold karo… vo muje ..teasu karahahai…

The kids was about fall .. maan immediately tried to catch him before he was about to fall

Thanku.. maan came from his thoughts with the kids words..

App ka nam kya hai beta …

.. first you…

Maan was lost in his blue eyes

There are lot resembles.. of dev in him , if any one would see dev childhood photos, at one second everyone think about dev

Keeping his hands on his tiny waist he is just behaving just like dev.. the same attitude …

Iam maan singh khurnana…

Khulana… even my name is Khulna hia..

I told my name you tell me your name..

My name.. vicky khulna…

Hearing the name vicky at one second.. maan was shocked ..

Getting from the shock…he asked apka mumy ka naam..

Geet khulana

..hearing those names, he will felt down at any moment…

At the same time he heard some foot steps.. she saw one lady coming inside

Seeing her the kid immediately hugged her…

Vicky why you are running here and there, see, you are having fever, if your run like this…your fever will increase….

But masi.. see app.. adi ko scold karo.. vo muje .. tesasuuu kara rahi hai…….ha…

Masi you told mama come….when come…..

See vicky you are good boy no.. mumy is having some office work, she went out side .. she will come tomorrow..

Prmochiee….

Ha baba promise …see now take your medicine.. and take rest other wise your fever will increase….

But adi.. ko dato..

Ha baba I will now take this medicine…

App..

She saw maan standing there, she was so lost in vicky that she did not see him

The past came before maan

The way geet and dev wants to marry in hurry…when dev told not even to tell to dadima.. and how geet was behaving that day, as if she is not at all interested in this marriage ..aur dev he was maintain g so secrecy, and that why dev has given shares to geet who is mother of his kid, who is having every right on dev and dev property , and before dying he did not understand.. dev uttered about vicky , at that time he did not understand,

At the same time mayuri saw maan

App

I want to meet mayuri

Iam mayuri.. care taker of this orphanage

…..iam maan singh khurnana…

Hearing those words.. mayuri…was shocked …..

Seeing her expression.. maan could guess that she knows about him…

App idhar….kaise.

Who is vicky..

Vo…is he geet and dev son……

He is dev son…….

.you are telling as if he is not geet son

Please listen to my words….

What is there to listen miss mayuri , now you and geet has done enough damages, now I do not want my brother son living in this orphanage… as if he is not having any one …

He went near vicky… vicky do you want to come with me..

Where..

Your house..

Kya v..maa is there ..

He lost in his cute talks…

he hugged vicky … ha a slight tear escaped from his eyes


precape: maan reaction towards geet

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