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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part

liked it

thnx for pm

cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely
i loved the update
the story has taken an interesting turn and it's getting irresistibly awesome
waiting for the next part dear

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Posted: 12 years ago

PART-18

Geet you are my wife..

See these are credit cards, and pass book you can use them I will not ask any thing how much you are spending HE LEFT THE PLACE LEAVING THE CREDIT CARDS AND CHECK BOOK ON THE TABLE.WIHT NO OPTION LEFT GEET TOOK THEM AND SAFELY KEPT THEM IN THE CUPBOARD

In the night dinner , time, maan was staring at geet, she was quietly eating her food,

Maan I want to work,


Geet how many times I have tell that my money is also yours,

But I had to work and earn money why cannot you understand me'.this money is yours and I cannot take any thing from you,

She heard a glass breaking sound , the

Dammit it'..

Why cannot you understand a simple thing, ..

First time geet saw maan who was hell angry with her

Geet this last final warnig I am giving to you,

Job karne ka irada apni kyalo se nikaldo

Why.. a slight whisper came from her mouth

Why.. do you asking that question geet..

You do not know your life is in trouble'. I do not who are are they who are against your life'.

They are have already attacked you before marriage' luckily my body guards saved you, and now hell asking me to give permission to work, just think about that saying these words he quietly went to his room

Geet quietly sat three thinking about what all maan has told

Is that real that some again attacked her , that means that .. the man tried to kidnap her, the stranger who helped her is maan body guard '..

Oh god.. what I have to do '.now'

How can I take the responsibility which dev has given me '.

How can I fulfil his last wish and the charity organization which dev has started and I have take care that one .. how many days I can stop going there '

I am getting calls from the organization '.

If I tell these to maan will he help me , ' even though if he help will he share the responsibility which dev has given, will he believe my words , my story'

Im not able understand what to do and that dev, how he thought that I will use his money '.he knows about my character '.

Geet saw maan has not gone to office he is still in his study room doing his work'

How to approach him'.

She went in to kitchen

She saw kali di is preparing something

Geet beta tum,

do not think bad maan , I know he is little angry person, but he is very good person..

Hmmm' geet slightly nodded her head'.

Take this coffee'.give to maan ..

maan was working on his lap top'

he could understand by the sound of payal that geet has come into the room

but he did not try to look up..

geet tried to gain his attention'

ravan.. why cannot he see me..

geet I can hear'

ya I know that that is why iam calling out name so that you can hear me'.

geet '..

geet what you are doing to yourself.. you came here to make a understanding with him , why are you fighting with him, try to control yourself and talk with him nicely

oh..

geet I do not have full day with you' what you want tell tell me fast

see they are some one who are depend on me ,I want to work and earn , so can you tell me without going out, how can i work tell me

hearing those words maan looked up,

so you want to work.. any work you will do

ha I will do any type work'.i believe dignity of labor

nice then'one post is already there' there is a naughty smile on his lips

what I have to do

simple you have to look after me, that is sab kuch like mere shoes polish karna , mere khana banana 'mere cloths arrange karna 'mere khyal rakhan see this is post of wife

seeing is smirk face'.geet got angry ,

controlling her anger.. okay then'.saying that she left the place stampine her foot'

see your coffee is already on the table' without turning back she told him and left the place

maan smiled hearing those words


next day

what the hell is ramu kaka who has done polish my shoes'..

ramu kaka came there with shivering

ohhh'..

how will I will go to the office, see is this way to do the polish ..

sir geet madam has done this, I told her I will do that , but she did not listened to me

maan smiled hearing those'..

so geet wants to work'..

okay kaka you go I will look after this '.

Ramu kaka was surprised seeing first time maan has not scolded for the work

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG
Geet actually polished his shoes
lovely update
rsusmita thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

Wow di amazing update


hai dear
waiting for your updates
geet_9713 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
😉👏not getting ur pms yaaarrr
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: geet_9713

😉👏not getting ur pms yaaarrr


pllaning to update another sotry , will pm both of them
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part..
geet asking permission n maans naughty answers..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update. I wonder how long it will take before Maan actually agrees to let Geet work (if he does at all). Looking forward to your next update. Beautifully written as well.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
fantastic update
liked a lot dear
continue soon
waiting for more
waiting
Happy Basant Panchmi

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