~U R My Favourite Crime~ -On Hold - Page 18

loved the update...

simply awsum update luvd it

😊 nice part geet ki masti its gonna b interseting. waiting for next. sometimes try to show the present also maaneet & sacchu ki kahani.

oh so cute 😊 well i love this story 😊
it is so nice 😊

hmm loved geet and the precap was awesome 😊

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Well, welcome me people *take a proper bow down* *lazy ass*. I am new to you but not new to IF or MANEETians *grinning like fools*. Sara, the name is Sara Thomas Khanna *raising invisible collors*. Read the 2 parts along with the prologue in one go *phew*. Girl, you impressed me *folding arms in front just like the MSK*. It was breath taking beautiful, for sure *sigh*. Well, let me tell you something about me before pouncing on comment. Me not that active here these days as firstly me stuck with my academic and personal work than i am not on my dreamy PC but on my horrible phone with 'ghatiya' web browser speed. I am not able to view videos and pics clearly plus can't hit like coz of this *grrr*. Do send me buddy rqst and update PMs *wink*.

Get, set and go...
It was BEAUTIFUL, indeed. Their scene with the junior Maan was the BEST. The way you described both the KHURANAs was amazing. Every bit of it was wonderful. But the name was common *well, Sara love to be honest and genuine*. But mind it, i read the prologue part 5 times itself. I can still recall each and every ounce of it. Haye, jhappis for that. Loved it, to the core. Now, the 2 parts. Maan's vunerable state is what Sara can't stand. Hate that bitc* for that. The way you described his state and mystery in 1st part was awesome. Really speechless. Geet intro scene and her untold past was also superb. Together, the 1st part was a hit too. Than comes the mind blowing 2nd part. Gosh, another set of fab dialouges and scenes. Loved shasha for the first time. Sara had read numerous work till date. I love MANEET, a simple yet powerful fact. Beside them, only dadima and adi impressed me. But other character from random works gain my attetion, shasha from your work is one of that. And the cherry on the cake, Geet threatning the Maan Singh Khurana. Love the precap too. Overall, 'ought to read' story. Me really enjoyed it.

Beware, Sara is known for 'threats'. Even loving the pace and length. Keep it in future also. Don't make it in a haste. A piece of advise, post full words and try to put translation too. If got time, do put font colour and next part link too.

Finally done *taaliya*
Do cont soon and do PM me.