~U R My Favourite Crime~ -On Hold

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- FALLING INLOVE AGAIN ISN'T ILLEGAL YET!!! 😉
"new Maaneet SS"

oK...nO...Jutttiiisss...I know...I know...U ppl must be thinking 2 FFs isko properly update karna nahi aata...now starting an SS...lol...But guys...I couldnt stop myself, cos this concept was creeping my Mind for so long...!!! So...please bare with me...This SS is a little sensitive Concept, which was grooved from a Real Incident which I read it from a Newspaper...though the Story which I improvised is completely different...I have taken a little risk to write this concept...Hope U ppl support with me in this anokha Love story :)

I will continue this SS, only based on the response I get...and will not give the Character Sketch, as it spoils the suspense in the story...let me stop my Ramkatha...and give u a mini prologue:)

PROLOGUE:

Kwaaanggg...kwaannggg...

Maan Stirred in his sleep, hearing a faint noise of something like Kittens moaning...
He wrapped the spread over his head and closed his ears, and pulled his peacefully sleeping Wife nearby and dipped his head inside her fragrant hair and slept again...

Lolalaoloala...laoalaolaoala...

He heard another sound like someone gobbling and made a frowning face, he was about to sleep again, when the noise began to increase little by little, tat wen it hit Maan, he opened his eyes widened...Oh boy..how can he forget tat??? He slowly withdrew from his wife, without disturbing her and crawled out of the bed slowly...

He looked at the time and whispered : Perfect...!!! Akhir beta kiska hain...he doesn't even need an alarm... he smiled and moved towards the crib kept a little away from the master bed in their bedroom and tiptoeing he peeped inside it only to see the beautiful sight infront of him...

There was his cute prince, brightly awake at 2 am in the midnight, playing with his small bunny , probing his small pink tongue out and making funny wobbling noises...

Maan rolled his eyes at his small treasure and slowly bent down to take him in his arms...

The baby immediately recognised his daddy's touch and giggled cutely...

Maan: Awww...Mera beta utgaya?? He kissed his chubby cheeks and rubbed his nose with his...

Blablahablaha blahablaablaa...the baby again made noise with his saliva,as if replying his dad...

Maan: Shhss!!! Sachu...Mamma sorahi hain...Ssshh!!!! he tried to calm the baby, who got more enthusiastic hearing the word Momma...

He gave a gummy smile and jumped to the direction where his mom is sleeping, indicating Maan to take there...

Maan nodded his head in negative: Na baba...Mommy ko disturb mat karna...tu bhi sojaa....he patted his over active son, to make him sleep at this hour, but he was as stubborn as his dad...

Kwaaannggg kwwaannnggg...

Sachin Singh Khurana Wailed struggling to get rid of his father, to go to his Mother, when Maan made a puppy face...

Maan: Sssh!!! Nahi beta...aise nahi rote... he rocked him but he cried even more... Maan got confused Y he was crying and caressed him helplessy, only to hear his small stomach growling in hunger...

He made a pity face and kissed his son: baby ko bhoog lagi hain...???he sighed and turned around towards his Wife... Tik hain... Tum chup rehna...I will make u get fed ...

He took his stubborn son and rolled on the bed , with Sachu in his hands...The baby looked at his dad, amusingly and kept quiet, while Maan slowly kept him near his Wife...No..No..his Life...

Maan slowly removed the hairs that was covering her angelic face and stared for a while...She was indeed his angel, His everything...His Pari... he bent his head below and slowly pecked her forehead ever lovingly , which brought a small smile on her rosy lips... he so much wanted to capture those inviting luscious lips...but he felt a small kick on his chest, only to see two fuming eyes looking at him murderously... he sighed and smiled lightly looking at his obstinate son...

Maan: Tik hain baba...gussa mat hona... he shook his head, he removed the comforter from her body and slowly opened few buttons of her Nighty... she stirred feeling cold airconditioner on her body, while Maan immediately increased the temperature... he took her one curve out and placed the baby near...

Like a hungry cub, Sachin latched his Mother's curves by grabbing it with his small hands...while she unknowingly tugged her son so closely feeling heavenly...

Maan laid beside his two world under one roof...he looked at the beautiful sight infront of him...people Must have thought He has everything Perfect...A Perfect life, with a Perfect family and a Perfect jeevan Sathi and now a Beautiful gift their Son... But did he get everything easily??? Never...their life was not made of bed of roses, but with thorns at every step...

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He casually turned to his right, only to see two pair of hazel eyes looking at him with pure Love...

He gave her a hearty smile and carssed her forehead when she said...
Aapne mujhe utaya kyun nahi??? Bahot tang kiya Sachu ne??? She asked making a worried face, when he nodded his head in negative fastly and smiled at his cute wife...GEET jaan...U have to take rest...This boy has never given u an inch of sleep all these four months...all the time Bhook hi rehtha hain... he frowned, when
Geet hit head chest glaring at him...

Geet: Maan...bache hain yeh...he will get hungry anytime and I dont feel any tiredness to feed my baby...Dare u say anything about my Son...she bent and kissed her Son and held him protectively...

Maan rolled his eyes and hugged his angry wife...Geet tujhe pata hain...whenever u get angry...tum angry bird video game ki tarah dikthi ho... Geet hit his chest playfully , while She felt Sachu rolling and playing by making bubbles with the milk, having his stomach full...
Geet cooed him and burped him putting on her shoulders...

Geet: Ab soja bacha...raat bahot hogayi hain... Maan wo nappy dena...let me change him...

Maan passed her the nappy, when Sachu kicked his legs in the air playfully not letting her to change him...

Geet: Sachu...no badmashi...sleep...chalo...its too late... she tried to control him...but he wailed and giggled making big sound...

Maan sighed: Ab bhool jao neend ko...he is in full mood to play, he will not sleep... he laid beside Sachu, who pulled his Dad's Vest and made cute noises...

Geet got angry: Aisa kaisa chalega...Sachu...u are getting notorious day by day...Sojao...She showed her big big eyes, When the baby glared at her in return...

Maan laughed holding his stomach,while Geet murmured : Puri ki Puri apne baap pe gaya hain...

It was almost going to be 4am, Maaneet were now exhausted... The baby seemed to be more active , he crawled here and there in the bed...but really being stubborn to close his eyes...

Maan: Geet abh ek hi raasta hain...he declared...

Geet: Kya hain??? She made an irritating face...

Maan: Tu isko kahani sunao...he will sleep for sure..

Geet's eyes brightened with a smile...: Arrey...mein toh bhool hi gayi...Maan Y didnt u make me remember before itself??? She chided and took Sachin in her laps...

Geet: Mamma aapko kahani sunao???

Sachu kicked his feet in the air and clapped happily...Maan smiled at his excitement and he kept his hands on Geet's shoulder, eager to listen his wife's story...

Geet: Kaise kahani sunao..??? Haan...wo Lion The King wali???
Sachin made a big frown and turned his face away uninterestedly...Geet sighed...

Geet: tik hain Mr.Junior Khurana... Hmm...Wo duck wali kahani...???

Sachin made an irritating face, when Maan chuckled...

Maan: Geet even am bored of all these stories, kuch aur batao na...different sa...Romantic sa... he said dreamily...

Geet waked his shoulders...

Geet: Maan...apne bte ko Love stories sunao mein...sharam kijiye...Wo bahot chota hain... she made a puppy face...
Maan: Geet Jaan tum bhi na...as if he understands...Tell na..please...mujhe bhi neend nahi aarahi hain...Tell me some beautiful Love story...

Geet sighed and thought for a while and told: Maan if u ask me for a beautiful Love story...then I have only one story to remember, to tell and to cherish always!!! She said getting lost ...

Maan: Aisa kya kahani hain jaan???

Geet: Humari Kahani Maan...Humari prem kahani... she looked into his eyes and told softly...

Maan stiffened a bit and sat straight... he held her shoulders and nodded in negative...: Jaan...thought its beautiful with U...but its Painful one...I dont want u to go to those memories again...Mujhe nahi sunna hain...I cant see the pain in ur eyes anymore Geet... he said with his eyes teary a little...

Geet: Maan how can u say something like that...??? Manaki it was Painful...but the those Pains gave me U...its not at all a memory to regret for me...when it had U...infact...Tats the beautiful Pain tat I have endured in my life, Which brought me into ur Shattered life... kya humari hassen yadon bhi aapko acha nahi lagta??? She asked him expectantly, when Maan hugged her tightly...

Maan: Nahi Jaan...even that pain was worthy cos of U!!! I never want to forget it... ab tum sunao humari kahani...i want to hear it from Ur Mouth... he cupped her face and kissed her forehead...when he continued suddenly

Maan : Par Geet...Wo "A" wali scenes ko Censor kardena...haan..I dont want to spoil my beta...he said with a naughty smile on his face...

Geet: Maan...she blushed and hit him lovingly and turned to Sachu, who was curiously looking at his parents...

Geet smiled and took Sachin in her arms and looked into his face: Now I will tell U Papa and Momma Ki story...tik hain...???

Sachin smiled excitedly, while Geet leaned onto Maan's arms to relive those Moments Of their Pain filled Love Story...A Story which made them Make their Favourite Crime...A story which made them to find their soulmate in each other..!!!
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Awww finally Keeping My Fingers Crossed...!!! Guys be free to give ur POV...

Bless me with Ur likes and Comments...
It gives me Motivation and Big strength!!!

Edited by alwayzzgurti - 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by alwayzzgurti - 12 years ago
vrinda22 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me first yipppeee🥳
maans cute family
sachin..are they fans of sachin tendulkar
cute family
loving husband n wife
geet telling their painful love story to their son..
awesome part
Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AG wow dear new ss thanx dear...and its party time...🥳
Ag the prologue was really awesome dear maaneet cute moments with their son was really cute now waiting for their love story

allibr thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love it graphics.
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maanluver thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
awesome start
cont soon
waiting eagerly
Edited by maanluver - 12 years ago
doublecross thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
super cute
loved the it
continue soon
will wait for an update
AayaTohModiJi thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#8
congratulation for new MG SS
awesome start
continue soon
nishnal thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
The story is diffrnt gurti so plz continue...n a gr8 thought of postng ur new s...waitng i update...:-) update soon... 😊 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
wow!lovely start..
even i want to hear the story...
i m also cribbing...

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