MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 6 - Page 15

I want hope to be back to maan.

Nice one!

part 39 ...
loved maan geet understanding...

part 40
like it...

Originally posted by: ritzy09

are yaar, even i want it. But if i send them on a date na, it will be a total waste. They will just say sorry and thank you😆😆

thoda wait karo...phir holding hands, moonlight., bike ride etc etc...😉

realy loved ur story sooo much nd read it in one go ...ur writting style is superb ...i realy loved geet in dis ff she is just perfect .. d way she handle all thngs is brilliant ...u r indeed wonderful writter...

Part 40:

New morning, new beginning, Aasha ki nayi kiran'' renewed energy and hope' it brought the beautiful Cat Stevens number "Morning has Broken'" to my mind.

Balle! Balle! Balle! In the current Olympic spirit, I have reserved my ringside seat to watch the delicious romance of this awesome couple unfold slowly, slowly, slowly with all the delicacy and deftness that your writing will undoubtedly craft! None of the slam, bam, here is the negligee maam routine for me or for Maaneet. It has to be a rich, extended, memorable mating dance for this unbelievable couple. Reading your update will be like watching "makkaane ki kheer" being cooked in a solar cooker ' slow but incredibly sweet at the end!

Although you did not give a real precap, there were enough hints that you dropped in your responses to messages from your fans that made me die and go up to la la land!!!! Your following comments have notched up my expectation and anticipation to stratospheric levels.

- dono taraf aag barabar ki lagi hai...time for Maan to payback Geet for all her cheeky and naughty moments with his own charm and wit...along with interest.

- thoda wait karo...phir holding hands, moonlight., bike ride etc etc...

- going by Geet's track record for how long she will be able to maintain this distance

- ab dekhte hain kitne din Maan sleeps on the bed with unwashed sheet

- are he is inspired by Geet...did she listen to him when he said no holi...no coffee...no swimming...no site visit...nahi na...toh woh kyon sunega!! WOW! And WOW!

Loved the way Geet restored calm and a sense of hope amongst her dejected parents and her "gada dhari Bheem" of a brother at the breakfast table.

Maan slipping under the duvet of their bed to breathe in her smell and essence - -that was THE MOST romantic, achingly non-contact update in your episode.

Eagerly waiting to read "Maan's first steps towards wooing his darling wifey"! Maan Babu -- this is your BIG CHANCE to prove your real mettle and show whether you are truly deserving of a wife like Geet. Geet ka sachi Meet banana itna aasan kaaam nahi hai; woh ser hain to aap sava ser banke dikhao.

Ritzy: yes, in one of my weaker moments, I did ask for a Maha episode once you reached 400 "likes" but didn't say that you shouldn't give one before you reached that 400 milestone or give us more frequent ones. Uuf! Itni bechaini hai ki by the time I start, it is almost over and the mind keeps drumming away' hai rabba! Kab next update ayega'.

Congrats on the new thread. And of course, like always an awesome update. Waiting for the next part.

Bookmarking...hope to read it soon.