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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start... can i get the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice teaser... waiting for update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: maansee

nice start... can i get the pm


ofcourse ull!!! added ya dear 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 18mypride

nice teaser... waiting for update :)



updating dear 10 more mins😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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MUJHE HAQ HAI

PART 2:


PAST:


FOUR YEARS AGO!!!


Maan was busy checking out the shirts wen a women passed by carrying a small baby in her arms. Baby was so cute with chubby chubby cheeks that maan started to stare at the baby and soon the baby too started to watch him, he stopped his process of selection and pouted his lips giving flying kisses to the baby to which the baby laughed showing her milky white teeth, just then the women who was holding the baby moved away, bt geet who stood behind the women raised her head to look at the man infront of her. She thought maan was giving her flying kisses as still his lips were pouted, she opened her mouth making a big O. Maan was shocked, he understood that he is gone now. How will he explain to this girl that he was not teasing her bt just playing with the baby. Geet stomped towards him, held his coller tight with both her hands looking ever so angry.



Geet: abbey!!! Kya kar raha tha? Khubsoorat ladki dekhi nahi ki u started to kiss me, tum jaante nahi ho main kaun hoon? Geet singhania, Mere college ki beauty queen samjhe tum? Mere bulane par itne saare line lagadenge tumhe peetne ke liye {wat were u doing? U started to kiss me finding me beautiful, u do not know who I am geet singhania, beauty queen of my college got it? One glance of me enuf for u to get beated up}


Maan is shocked listening to this girl, the confidence with which she is praising herself yes!!! She is a beauty, bt the accusion?? Kissing her?


Maan: maine tumhe kiss kab kiya? How dare u speak to me this way? He walked towards her, she walked back till she got sandwitched between him and wall. Maan held her waist sealing the distance between their bodies


Wat is he? Zubaan peh kuch? Kaam aur kuch? He is warning her and also behaving like a cheapo?


Geet: yeh kya kare ho tum? Leave me she wriggled out trying to free herself from his iron grip


Maan: kyun? U can hold my collar bt I cant hold u? he winked at her to which geet gave an angry glare


Their sweet sweet fight got disturbed wen a girl in a miniskirt entered. She was so so beautliful. Sameera kapoor!!! Maan's childhood frnd looking at maaneet she yelled yeh kya ho raha hai? maan left geet listening to sam.


Maan: dekha!!! Beautiful isse kehte hai he said pointing at sam


God sam was so dead. Neva in life did maan praise her beauty and all of a sudden now??


Geet: oh hello!!! Yeh miniskirt pehenne se koi beautiful nahi ban jaata. I understand ur prblm actually the fact is that u want to praise me. Its ok bhagwan ne mujhe itni khubsoorati di hai toh main kya karongi? She smirked looking at sam


Maan is really surprised now so was sam.

Maan: oh toh miss beauty queen!!! Tumne bhi kuch jyada kapde nahi pehne''.. Before maan cud continue the manager of the store arrived there. Using the oppourtunity sam complained abt geet that's it. Geet tried explaining him bt in vain


Manager: MISS GEET!!! U ARE FIRED PLZ LEAVE. Tum nahi jaanti tumne kiske saath jhagda kiya maan singh khurana!!! The son of business tycoon arnab singh khurana


Sam dragged maan out of the shop. She is a sales girl? And she says she is a student? Wat is she? That was too much he felt. She lost her job coz of him he felt bad bt then he cant let his frnd down saying that it was just a MU and there is no need for the manager to fire her.


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GEET!!!


GEET!!!!


A lady shouted to find her, bt she is found nowhere. It was a random ladies function of somebody and geet is the event manager here. She wore a beautiful saree with heavy work, her hair tied into a plat, her makeup and make up complemented her beauty. She is running here and there checking out the buffet arrangements.


Pinky: geet!!! Geet!!! Tera phone yaar. God u got ur money baby!!! Geet!!! she ran holding geet's phone in her hand who was busy serving the guests. Soon geet handled the work to somebody else and came out to check out the message. She jumped in joy


Geet: yes!!! Yes!!! Yes!!! I got the money yaar pata hai pinky I am so happy''' in the mrng wen I lost the job I felt so bad soch rahi thi kaise dongi house rent bt now I don't even need to work anymore. Ill pay the college fees. Nani toh chal basi lekin iske liye maine kitna wait kiya pinky atlast I got the money thanks to dev!!! Kal se college hai I am damn excited. She hugged pinky tightly


Pinky: geet its very late leave yaar go home kal college hai na pata nahi kaise hoga first day of our engineering!!! Take my car adi aayega mujhe pick up karne in 10mins u take care.


Geet: ya pinky before she cud continue the lady came to geet to give her the money for orgainising the event in a grand way. Geet looked at the cheque happily thanked her and left in pinky's car



Geet singhania!! A self made girl who has started her career as a model at a very tender age at the age of 16. She did her modeling assignments just to support her education. Since her 10th class she is in this field of modeling. She is so thankful to her uncle who cud help her out all the while in getting those assignments. Geet completed her 11th and 12th too this way and now she got admission into the reputated college XYZ engineering college in the department of civil engineering. How much she hated that field of modeling bt she had to do it for money slowly she started to work as an event organizer so that she can avoid modeling. Even then her uncle persuades her as he too gets the money for sending geet as he is an agent.


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Geet wore the burka as advised by pinky as her saree and blouse she wore were revealing. She wore them as it is a ladies function and pinky being protective of geet gave her car to get back home. Soon she reached a deserted place wat seemed like a forest. She stopped the car as sudden gush of wind started to flow around making her beaming. She is truly happy today as the sudden news of getting money was making her loose her senses. She can now complete her graduation. The sudden change in the climate added to her soothing senses.


It was almost mid night maan's car broke down. He came out of the car to check it out and found the tyre flat god!!! Dammit iss gaadi ko bhi abhi kharab hona tha? He hit the car trye with frustration. As the air was flowing badly hefting all dust and dry leaves he sat back in the car wen suddenly he heard a sweet voice. It started to rain heavily


Geet came out of the car slamming the door back.She first removed her burkha trying to feel the rain drops which were falling as if the sky is also trying to make her thrilled Khayalon mein bhi... Hai khaabon mein bhi


He looked around to find the girl, he came out of the car, there she is!! Her car parked just infront of his. He ran towards a tree nearby hid himself finding the sexiest sight ever ...Koi aane laga, hai yaadon mein bhi .....Aye dil mere mehsoos kar inn aahaton ko...Dhadkan ne jo seene mein lee unn karwaton ko


Geet sat down removing her payal, threw them on the road followed by her heels. Maan saw her beautiful feet and toes water dripping down them, they were so soft and tender. He cudnt see her face as it was dark bt the sudden lightening made her hide her face. She ran towards the trees where he is hiding, she was too scared of the thunder


Aye Khuda... aye Khuda...Main hui mujh se juda...Khayalon mein bhi...Hai khaabon mein bhi...Koi aane laga hai yaadon mein bhi



She got back to the road where her car is parked. She is completely drenched and the saree she wore was already revealing and now he cud make out her every contour of her body.


Din mein bhi wahi saans lene laga... She slowly, sensuously got on to the car climbing on it as if snaking, writhing Raaton mein bhi meri wo hi toh basa hai... she blushed with those words wat if she really feels as such for a man in her life?? Palko pe rehne ki dhoondta hai jagah... she looked around as if trying to find her man!!{ur man is watching u already😉}



Khayalon mein bhi
Hai khaabon mein bhi
Koi aane laga hai yaadon mein bhi



She got down the car, she forwarded both her hands, looked at her wrists intently removed them one by one


Dil jise mera pyaar karne laga...Aankhein bhi uski hi raah mein ruki hai.. she now moved again back to the thick trees dancing to the tune of the song she is singing....Kaun hai woh magar yeh nahi pata... How she wish somebody enter her life Khayalon mein bhi...Hai khaabon mein bhi...O koi aane laga hai yaadon mein bhi


Maan lost her track as she was going into the forest. He ran behind her trying to find her and there she is near the tree, he moved towards it, bt he still cudnt make out her face. Her back was visible to him and the saree which was carelessly wrapped on her was presenting her bare back and waist completely. The lil light was making her skin glow in the dark night. His gaze travelled all around her, the rain drops which were falling on her skin were making him go insane. Aye dil mere mehsoos kar in aahaton ko...Dhadkan ne jo seene mein lee'..unn karwaton ko...Aye Khuda... aye Khuda...Main hui mujh se juda



Wat was she doing there? singing songs dancing, roaming around he thought . Again a thunder this time even more dangerous than the earlier one and also this time frightening her. She sreamed out loud, trying to move towards the road bt her waist band got entrapped with the thorn of a tree. The thorn got piecered into her skin near the waist, blood started to ooze out.Then geet heard the hissing sound of a snake, she stopped in her tracks all scared



Precap: Tum???

Tum???

How dare u??? idiot u kissed me in the mrng and now u are following me in this forest too

HE KISSED HER!!!!


Socho maan ne kiss kyun kiya?? valli has already guessed reason already tried by remya thanks girls

i donno how this part is bt then plz hit the like button 100+ likes for next update so plz do it!!! love u all

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SONG IS FROM RAAZ3 SUNG BY SHREYA GOSHAL i am loving the song so much

PREVIOUS PART:
PART 1


NEXT PART:

PART 3

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG ye kya hua

geet itni khush fired hone pe 😆

loved it yaar.. cont soon 😃
Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Wow!awesum update..!!!
Geet s happy that she got fired!!!she s so different..
Loved the way geet praised herself in front of sam...
so she s an engg student...
Maan s already blown by her beauty and he s going to kiss her again..!!
haye..Loved the song a lot..
my guess s rt??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Why maan kissed her??? pretty obvious buddy -she's so kissable...2ndly she accused him 2 times so out munda may hv thot y not give her a shot...Anyways superb update

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