'Destined To Be' # 4 Note on Page 151/3rd Sept

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#781

awesome update loved it

this vidyut needs a good slap from geet

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aali

@18mypride

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#782

ek duke ke waaste...dono tadaprahe gain

lovely update...

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crazydream

@crazydream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#783

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

A sad part tough.
Maan in immense guilt. He can't come
To the fact that how cud he accuse Geet
For no fault of her. He is in remorse n
Is trying to talk to Geet.

Geet on the other hand giving him a cold
Shoulder. But however hard she tries she
Can't give Maan pain. But also can't let her
Heart loose.

Maan sad that Geet didn't make breakfast.
N left widout having it.
Geet can't see n prepares lunch for him.
Maan by smellimg it can tell she has done it.
It shows how much they luv each other.

Hope that next part is light hearted. Can't see
Maaneet in pain.
Continue soon.

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#784

Hey Aakriti, Good Morning.
We r on Page 147. Time for new thread and next update.😊

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Gudiyalovesguru

@Gudiyalovesguru

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#785

lovely part...
i luvd it...
i can feel the pain of geet...
continue soon...

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#786

Awesome...superb part
Loved it alot
Maan ws feeling guilty
feel bad for maaneet
wornding hw ll maan monify geet
waiting for next...continue soon
thankx for pm

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#787

part 21
lovely...
good let Maan brood for some time...
he hurt her so much that shes so insecure and down...
but still after seeing him reacting like this she sent him lunch...
and this Vidyut is gonna get nicely...
cont soon dear...