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but I really hated the dialogue something like I want u behind close doors n not outside...
it was way too much

it's like u r just my body pleasure n nothing more ...don't show geet too weak n useless dear..Let her b strong..till now it's like he is talking very low about her n she was calm n only thinking in terms of love...

part 37

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

:D
how r u firstly... yes.. back maybe little.. but there are not enough reder.. me getting all upset... however..
i am looking for some strong storyline.. i will finish this quick.. letting u alll know that i am bc.. and with animosity and heartbeat... than hopefully i get good reader for my new one...
lol
what do u think..
i dont now.. do u even like this story?
x

Pls do continue n thanx for back to back updates...😊

thank u so much for ur updates.

Thanks for updating and waiting to see Maan taking charge of the situation...

Thanks for the lovely updates... why maan is behaving with geet ? he should love n respect her...

Originally posted by: gudmeet

thank u so much for ur updates.

after a long time so many updates from u

but it seems ur writing in a hurry.

though the updates are very good but they are not up to the mark as it used to be.

why so much hurry

i really like ur works

thanks any way for ur updates

i thought no one like this ff... so trying to tell all the storyline soon as pos...
but if i see good respone.. i sure will slow down ;)

Originally posted by: Dilsay

I m fine :D

How are you dear?Missed you a lot here on this forum...are you on holidays now ?how is your Med.studies going on ?

The eternal Maneet and the FF writers who are keeping them and their love alive in our hearts thanks to you for doing this ...

Waiting eagerly for you to finish the rest of your FFs.

Yes I know you don't have lot of readers on this forum now but ...Jaani I m here to read your stories no matter what 😉

You have your own fan following... they are supporting you and your stories 😊

You need not to worry keep writing for them ...

:)

xxx

that i s so sweet i will keep that in my mind and start typing..
just fixing the blog.. it looks messy..
lol
so putting all the updates in one page like a book...

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