MORE PIYA- part 40 Page 45 (THE END) - Page 23

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

but I really hated the dialogue something like I want u behind close doors n not outside...
it was way too much

it's like u r just my body pleasure n nothing more ...don't show geet too weak n useless dear..Let her b strong..till now it's like he is talking very low about her n she was calm n only thinking in terms of love...

yep.. also you can think as.. he dosnt like anyone butting in to his business. geet, yes have strong affection however, he dont want to share everything with her

Originally posted by: shaili_Mg

superb update loved it
finally maaneet is one body one soul.
it was super hot and passionate part. MSK is all ready to take over khurana's eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz..

thank you for the sweet coment ;D
i hope it was satisfying

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Part 37 ' maan kissed her only to tease her'poor sam 'confessed her feelings and make realize him that he also loves geet '.at last they are boarding the flight

hehehe.. i dodnt knwo lol.. i thought if i carry her on she will create nuseance

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

that i s so sweet i will keep that in my mind and start typing..
just fixing the blog.. it looks messy..
lol
so putting all the updates in one page like a book...

Originally posted by: Dilsay

Should we expect your next update now😉 ...

Planning to sleep for a while lol😆

go to sleep.. lol it will take me while.. to type another 4 parts haha

awesome & raining updates safi loved them...hayee so maaneet are finally together but soo many unresolved emotionals lurking around poor geet and now maan on a bid to take over the khurana business nice liking it 😊

Superb updates dr,

superb updates..


loved each 1 of them

waiting for the next 4 updates