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Posted: 13 years ago
'I beg you pardon, surly not miss geet handa. Let me remind you You are not any attractive rose that would Successes to lose my sense, and let me assure you-you never will be.' he looked at geet's red embarrassing face. She abruptly spines around, hating his mere presence. She lost words, unable to reply anything in return. ' push-cat, shall I add wet, one seems to be the perfect match for you, not a lion.' maan adds, which increased geets temper further.

'I hope you are not displaying your self as a lion.' geet pushed her eye brow up. 'lion,' she mocked. 'surly the state I have found you, showed no sign of lions den.'

Maan came close, gently glides his hand across her waist. 'I don't need to to openly display my strength!' he came forward, almost whispering in geets ear, 'do you know why?'
Geet's heart almost stopped beating, heaving maan so close. She nodes slightly, for a no.
'that's because, it's something for my other half to see, and surly I can't expose my self in front of a stranger.' he teased.
Geet widens her eyes in shock. Her heart started to beat abnormally, drinking the lurking saliva in her mouth.
'don't challenge my affection maan.' she replied in slow, yet tenses manner. 'I can go to any extent to find you, go beyond my will to have you, and I know you would do the same, therefor perhaps the false ego you posses, tell them to disappear, because I am not those typical girl, who was under your influence once, and accepted broken heart easily. I can assure you that, my affection like no other, I may not openly display, however I know how to claim it behind the close door.' she finished.







I loved the above line. Really well explained had goosebump
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb when maan geet will confess their love ???????
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: J.Rahman

amazing update.
uff maan's anger.
love to see maan' possessiveness & jealousy. but alas he will never accept that.
and sam something is fishy about her.



thank you it means allot
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: preeti.1

superb when maan geet will confess their love ???????



u have to wait and see lol
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

Lovely part..
poor james got a mini heart attack..!
loved maan's cute jealousy.




thank you 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan

ossum dear

loved it
wow geet claims msk great
waiting for his claim dear



i really wonder how that will b lol..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
'don't challenge my affection maan👍🏼 loved it plz cont...dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dhamigeet

'don't challenge my affection maan👍🏼 loved it plz cont...dear



thanks yar.. i never thought about quote this much untill this ff.. lol... hopefully its coming out good
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Jacob

'I beg you pardon, surly not miss geet handa. Let me remind you You are not any attractive rose that would Successes to lose my sense, and let me assure you-you never will be.' he looked at geet's red embarrassing face. She abruptly spines around, hating his mere presence. She lost words, unable to reply anything in return. ' push-cat, shall I add wet, one seems to be the perfect match for you, not a lion.' maan adds, which increased geets temper further.

'I hope you are not displaying your self as a lion.' geet pushed her eye brow up. 'lion,' she mocked. 'surly the state I have found you, showed no sign of lions den.'

Maan came close, gently glides his hand across her waist. 'I don't need to to openly display my strength!' he came forward, almost whispering in geets ear, 'do you know why?'
Geet's heart almost stopped beating, heaving maan so close. She nodes slightly, for a no.
'that's because, it's something for my other half to see, and surly I can't expose my self in front of a stranger.' he teased.
Geet widens her eyes in shock. Her heart started to beat abnormally, drinking the lurking saliva in her mouth.
'don't challenge my affection maan.' she replied in slow, yet tenses manner. 'I can go to any extent to find you, go beyond my will to have you, and I know you would do the same, therefor perhaps the false ego you posses, tell them to disappear, because I am not those typical girl, who was under your influence once, and accepted broken heart easily. I can assure you that, my affection like no other, I may not openly display, however I know how to claim it behind the close door.' she finished.








I loved the above line. Really well explained had goosebump





thank you.. i am glad you enjoying there conversatation
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part dear

loved maan's possessiveness for geet

well there is no mater how much he want to hide

but geet can see it

and wow our geet is really awesome

how she tell him bout her feelings

and what is the precap

u are writing again and again will maan go

what's the mean of this

are u saying that maan will not go with geet

please esa na krna

love u
seher

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