MORE PIYA- part 40 Page 45 (THE END)

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

@FireSafireFiree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: love4all
Awesome part dear

loved maan's possessiveness for geet

well there is no mater how much he want to hide

but geet can see it

and wow our geet is really awesome

how she tell him bout her feelings

and what is the precap

u are writing again and again will maan go

what's the mean of this

are u saying that maan will not go with geet

please esa na krna

love u
seher

hay thanks yar.. oh the precap... it will change i think after next lol..
and thank you.. you loving our geet and maan hehe..

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PREET SANDHU

@sweetiepie

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

aweosome update
plz continue the early updates

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

You deserve all the comments for bc to bc comments dear ...

lovely dialogues,although the pace of the story is slow but its firey ...

I m waitng eagerly to see the this firey spark turns into erupted Lava:)

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RaDMG25

@RaDMG25

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

nice update maan such ego wow he is blatantly jealous and angry of james presence but he has to be the leader and dominator lol loved geet's claim on him and their convo awesome update 😊

best bit geet waking up think maan is carressing her face only to find sam stroking her cheek asking what cream she uses 🤣