MISHTY DOLL-mg-ff UPT Part 4/pg 8 - Page 3

lovely update

awsome ff

both the parts r awsome

awesome update and long characteristics
please give long update

I was able to read only half of the characters...later got bored of such a huge family...please try to concentrate more on Maan-Geet...some masti-mazaak is ok...

Geet has come to KC for interview...u didn't give Geet's family CS...

awesome update...

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congrats for ur first ff

Part -3

Geet come in cabin and just stand their everyone is so shocked to see her sabki bolti band ho gayi they just niharoying her she is look at them like deer so much scared why they are staring her like that geet thought ' aaj sabko ho kya gyae hai sab hi mujhe dekhe ja rahe hai she make a baby face to see her babaji she put a brave face and call

Geet ' sir sir------sirrr

Maan dad and other come to sense ' oh sorry come beta sit

Here our maan still in his dreamland ;

Maan dad see this and smirked and think aab aaye utha phad ke niche

Maan dad come near maan ear and shout maan maan come to sanse

Maan 'oh ha ha ha to hum kaha the feeling embaraess

Maan dad ' hume to yahi the aap kaha tha and smirked

Maan 'daddd

Maan dad to geet ' beta to interview suru kare

Geet- (in very sweet voice ) yes 'yes sir

Maan dad-what ur name beta

Geet- ji geet rathore

Maan think wow geet what a wonderful name ye to kud hi ek divine song jaasie hai aise lagtha hai jasie roz milkbath lati ho yaar koi itne khoobsurt kaie ho sakte hai amnd chide minself mantelly maan ye to kya soch rahe hai ye tu maan singh kurana hai business tycoone .

Maan dad to maan ' I like her for this post what is ur opinion

Maam ' I don't think so, dad just look at her so small for this office she does not handle the pressure she only 17 she has to consternate on her study.

Geet ' sorry sir but I can handle any pressure aur rahi baat chote hone ki to u r also just 22yr but u handle md post very well plz sir select me or reject me on my telent base not from my age.

Maan- hmm I like it but overconfidence is not good miss mere sath kaam karne is very difficult.

Geet- thankfor information but mujhe katro se kalne ka shuk bachpan se hai and realise what she said and bit her tongue make a baby face say babaji plz help

Geet teri job to gayi dekhe kise ghoor rahe hai rakhash

Maan dad think kya ladki hai phele to maan iost in her beauty than maan ko chup kara diya aura abb usce maan ko khatartak bulaya vo bhi uske same hi hey bhagwan is bachi ki raksha karne mere khados bte se .

geet painting

ye to just ek painting hai jo bata rahi hai geet kitni chancal natkhat hai geet apni dd hi hai

Precape ' maan reaction

Thank u very much for comment

Late update main I am so upset but now u made my day with ur lovely comment they give me strength to write bas mujhe laga tha I am a bad writer that why I am upset but now I am happy

Once again thanks to make me ur part

so Geet ne interview mein hi sher ke muh mein hath daal diya...

waiting for Maan's reaction...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

so Geet ne interview mein hisher ke muh mein hath daal diya...

waiting for Maan's reaction...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

AWESOME WAITING FOR MAAN'S REACTION

Fantastic update...
It was mindblowing interview...
Amazed by geets audicity now wondering 4 maans reply...