MISHTY DOLL-mg-ff UPT Part 4/pg 8

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KasiKasi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

AWESOME CONT. SOON PLZ SEND ME PM DEAR

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Desigirls12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

wow lovely start dear ,...very interesting dear...

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Mitu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

part-2

she is so scared bcoz everyone gazing at her she dont no where to go

geet thought - hey babaji ye sab mujhe asie kyu dekha rahe hai abb main kya karu kise puchu interview khaha ho rahe hai.then she see adi iagata hai he is nice guy maain inse puchti hu.

geet -exuseme sir can u plz tell me where is interview going on.

adi is like-huh

geet - sir

adi- ( come into sence ) yes maa"m this room thanku sir

geet - thanku sir

she is gone to that room side everyone come to sannce everybody is talking o my god she is angel or human

other man-no yaar she is a pure divine song

some man seeing her with lust some seelike she is miracl of nature

here in interview room

maan- i dont understand dad no one situable for post every candidate is waste

maan dad -com down son sab thik ho jaye ga hume koi jur milgei jo msk se jadha kaam me interested ho and laugh

maan -in angry mood dadd yeha me itna pareshan ho aur apko mazak suahe rahe hai

maan dad - kya kare aab bate itne kadhos ho to kisi ko to hasne padage

maan - daddd griting his teeth

maan dad to maan chachu - yaar veer ye sach me mera beta hai mera matalab hai itna kados

maan cachu &maan same time - daddd ,bhaiii

maan dad - ok ok yaar maie kuch nahi kahe rahe interview le

maan - that batter maan takr phone told pinky (maan floor manger) next candidate ko ander bajho pinky

pinky- yes sir -rr-rr

there geet knok on the md cabin

a voice come from inside come in

precape-maan geet first meeting

thanks every one who comment and like😛 yaar mager itne cam like yaar if u dont like story plz tell me me likhne baand kar dungi😕

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Sonia KN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Its really a great start...and huge number of characters I thing we gonna be used to them soon as story ll progress.Hop u will try to update soon so to get flow.

Best of luck for ur first work hop in future u ll giv us what we all want...Maaneet...waiting for more

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Jass😃

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago

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Mitu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Jass.KN
Its really a great start...and huge number of characters I thing we gonna be used to them soon as story ll progress.Hop u will try to update soon so to get flow.

Best of luck for ur first work hop in future u ll giv us what we all want...Maaneet...waiting for more

Lov

Jass😃

thanks jass yes they will use in future kya kare ghar ke army hai

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love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

waiting fr d maan n geet face to face n deir reaction fr each other mainy i want to see maan's reaction...

lovely starting...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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KasiKasi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

SUPERB UPDATE LOVED IT. HEY PLZ LIKHNA BAND MAT KARNA YAAR I LOVE UR STORY. JAISE JAISE STORY AAGE BADHEGI LIKE OR COMMENT BHI BADH JAYEGE

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MonaSWrites

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Wonderful start bulbul ... Congrats dear
& please dont stop writing dear. give urself and ur readers some time to accept ur story. once thy ll be attached with it, likes will automatically increase ..just keep ur hope and hard work with ur ..rest all leave on others

Edited by geet.lover - 13 years ago

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

congrats 4 ur new ff
u didnt say me u r writing too..

coming to ff
lots of cs..
hope we will get many knok jokes by them
as its family..
all will be pulling legs..
maneets first meet.w8ing..

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Desigirls12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Wow lovely update dear..my maan is khados,love u maan..geet looking like a painting cute geet..now my maaneet meeting,wow im waiting dear wat wil be my maan's reaction wen he see his geet.