MG FF DEMON'S ANGEL Last Pt&Epilogue28/1/2013 P-98 - Page 18

**DEMON'S ANGEL**
PART - 15

MAAN gt diamond bt he was injured badly in grabbing dis. Aditya bandaged hs wound,bt it still bleeds. Aditya suggest he shuld take rest 4 few hours. Bt time dosnt allowed hm 2 do so coz already 7days hd passd nd dey need alest 1 mor day 2 reach 2 ashram whch means 1 less day 4 next target. He ws happy bt worried 2.

MAAN:Aditya hm pehle hi 1din pichhe chal rahe hai ab agar aaram krne ruke to na jane or kitne din brbad ho jayenge. Isliye ab hume bina ruke ashrm lutna hai.

Both ran deir horses 2wrds aashrm nd nxt day in evng dey arrived in ashram. Maan handover d diamond 2 Mahaguru. Mahaguru praise hm 4 hs intelligence nd bravery. Mahaguru noticed blood oozing frm hs wounds. He wanna ask hm 4 medi.attention bt widout listining hm he ran 2wrds Geetakshi's room where she laid like a dead body. She ws in bad condition since d day dey came deir bt 2day she luks more paler. Maan sit near her nd scared more. Hecaress her cheek nd bend oved hr face. His blood drop falls on hr face.

MAAN felt pain seeing hr condition,hs own injuries r vry much painful nd he ignores all. Bt Geetakshi's paler face trembled hs soul.

MAAN:Geetakshi tume kuchh nai hoga main tume kuchh nai hone dunga or tum fikar mat karo tumhare theek hote hi main khud tume tumhare baba k pass chhodkar aaunga wo b pure samman k sath. Geetakshi bhgwan k liye is trah mera imtehan mat lo.tum baut himmat wali ho or main ye janta hu tume itni jaldi himmat nai har skti.main kuchh nai hone dunga tume.

Meantime Mahaguru ji came here wid vaidji(doc)

Vaidji:yuvraj ap idhar aaiye mujhe apke ghavo pe lep lagna hai.

But Maan is no mood 2 hear ny1 he cant undrstnds wat happn 2 hr suddnly. Though he kno she is nt well bt 2dy hr condition made hm restless.

MAHAGURU:vats vaidji ki baat mano or upchar(treatment) krwa lo.

Maan ran 2 Mahaguru:aap meri chinta mat kariye bas mujhe ye btaiye ki Geetakshi ko chanak hua kya hai?iski halat itni khrab pichle saptah(week) tk to nai thi.

MAHAGURU:shnt ho jao vats.

MAAN:nai ho skta main shant.nai dekh skta main Geetakshi ko is halat me.iski ye halat meri wajh se hi hui hai. Aap mujhe jaldi se batiye ki ab mujhe kya lana hai main abi niklunga use lane.

MAHAGURU:lekin putr is samy nikalna theek nai hai or fir tum buri tarah ghayal ho. Isliye kal subah...

MAAN:kal subah tak to bahut der ho jayegi.har shan Geetakshi k liye maut ka sbab bn raha hai or main ye hone nahi dunga.aap mujhe btaiye ki 3 konsi cheez lani hai?

MAHAGURU:or tumhare ghavo ka kya?inka upchar nai kiya to..

MAAN:is jaan pe ab sirf Geetakshi ka adhikar hai.use bachane k liye mujhe deni b padi to b main pichhe nai hatunga.bas ab or der na kare Mahaguru mujhe aage ki rah dikhayiye.

MAHAGURU:theek hai to suno ab tume sirf 1 hi vastu hai jo lani hai or wo hai prandayni shkti,jo ki tume uttar disha me milegi.kintu us tak pahunchanne ka marg tume Dakshin disha me milega.

MAAN:mtlab?

MAHAGURU:mtlb ye ki prandayni shkti hai to uttar disha me.lekin use hasil kaise kiya jaye ye janne k liye tume daksin disha me jana hoga. Wahi pe tume use hasil krne ka marg milega or main isse zada tumhari koi sahayta nai kr skta.

MAAN:theek hai main abi niklunga.

Mahaguru blessd hm nd moved frm deir. Maan went 2 Geetakshi again.

MAAN(hold hr soft palm in hs rough hands. D blood oozing frm hs arm now reach 2 her hands. Although she is laid unconcious bt she able 2 hear and sence all things going around her. Even she can able 2 hear evrything which Maan said 2 her):Geetakshi bas kuchh dinn or,uske bad tum apne baba k pas hogi pehle jaise.

Maan drop her hand nd left d room. She was all alone nd helpless. Tear drops falling frm her closed eyes.
Maan ws reached 2 hs horse nd about 2 leave d ashram wen he stopped by Aditya.

ADITYA:ruk jao Maan aise akele kaha ja rae ho?

MAAN:tume chot aai hai or tume aram ki zarurat hai.

ADITYA:chot to tume b lagi hai or wo b mujhse zada.firr b tm ja rae ho na?

MAAN:ye ladai meri hai.pehle hi main Geetakshi ko maut k muh me dhakel chuka hu lekin ab or nai.

ADITYA:itna kamzor smjha hai mujhe?

MAAN:nai Aditya,pichhli baar do baar tumhari jaan khtre me padi hai.main ab or koi khtra uthna nai chahta.

ADITYA:ye safar sath me shuru kia tha to manzil tak b sath hi pahunchenge. Mana main pehle tumhare sath nai aana chahta tha.lekin ab tume akele nai chhod skta.

MAAN:achha ab aisa kya ho gaya hai?

ADITYA:ab tumhari aankho me Geetakshi k liye jo vasna thi na uski jagah pyar ne le li hai.or sacha pyar ka sath to uparwala b deta hai firr main tum dono ko kaise akela chhod skta hu.ab to chahe aaandhi aaye ya tufan lekin main tumhara sath nai chhodunga. Chale humare pas ab samye bahut kam hai.

Maan hugged him. Both's frndship grew stronger more. Both tuk deir horses nd ran 2wrds d south direction. This journey ws nt easy as both have no clue...


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...CONTINUE...
MAAN & ADITYA both reached 2 d south direction. Dey ran deir horses cluelessly. As in both reaced 2 village wich is very wired. Dey notice smthng unusual deir. All kids beteen d age of 12 - 16 wre seems vry old. All children hv white hairs nd many wrnkle on deir faces. Som of den even cant walk nd talk properly. Both forund dis very strange. All people's faces seems scared. Dey all r afraid of somthng. Dey trying 2 enquired whats going on deir bt no1 ans dem nd closed deir door.

ADITYA:Maan ye kaisi jagh hai koi seedhe muh bat hi nai krta.

MAAN:sb lgta hai tumhare rishtedar hai,seedhe muh baat hi nahi krte.(ADITYA glared hm) are main to mazak kr raha hu.

Meantime an old man cm 2 dem.hs name is Bindari.

BINDARI:beta kyu apna samy nasht kr rae ho yaha koi tume kuchh nai btayega.

MAAN:lekin baba ye bachhe aise budde kyu ho rae hai.ye kaisa rog hai yaha par?

BINDARI:ye rog nai hai.ye sab us jadugar Kaya kalap ka jadu hai.

ADITYA curiously:jadugar Kaya kalp?

BINDARI:ha jadugar Kayakalp,jo kisi ki b kaya ko badal skta hai. Ye bacche jo tum dekh rahe ho humesha se aise nai the.humara gau b kushhal tha.magar pata nahi ye jadugar 1 dinn kaha se aa gaya or us dinn se wo lagatar is gau k bachho ko apna shikar bana raha hai.

MAAN:wo krta kya hai in bachho k sath?

BINDARI:wo aaye din 12 se 16 sal k bachho ko utha kr le jata hai or unka youvan cheen leta hai isse uski jwani or jaduo shaktiya 2 bad rahe hai.

MAAN:baba in bachho ko theek krne ka koi upaye nai hai?

BINDARI:upaye to hai par beta kisi praye k liye tum 2 kyu apni jaan khatre me dalte ho?

ADITYA:ap humari chinta mat keejiye bas hume ye bataiye ki in bachho ko pehle jaisa bnane k liye kya krna hoga hume.

BINDARI:us jadugar ki maut hi in bachho ko inka alsi roop dila skti hai wrna aise hi budde hohokar ye marr jayenge.

MAAN:nai baba ab or koi bachha nai marega. Hum us Kayakalp ko uske kiye ki saza avashye denge.bas ap ye batayie wo milega kaha.

BINDARI:yaha se seedhe jane par 1 kali pahari milegi,usi ki guffa me uska thikana hai.bhagwan tum dono ki raksha kare.

Maan nd Aditya moved 2 d directiom showed by d old man. Aditya insist Maan dat he allowed hm 2 go inside nd find out d conditin. Maan dont want bt ageed soon. Aditya trned hmself in2 a rat nd go inside. He saw a long thin man was doing somthng in a large bowl,somthng magical activity. White smoke was cm out of dat bowl. He must b kayakalp who was standing with a long snake head stick in hs hand. Den Aditya saw some kids were locked in a magical cage whch placed at sm far place. He wnt 2 deir nd trned hmslf in human again. All children scared more. Dey thot may b he is also wid hm dey strt crying.

ADITYA:Shhh bachho daro nahi main tume yaha se chhudane aaya hu.

1 elder kid:lekin ap kon hai?

ADITYA:wo sb bad me pehle main tum sbko khol du.

Elder boy:lekin ap iska darwaja nai khol skte ispe jo tala laga hua hai wo kisi chabi se nahi balki Kayakalp ki us jadui chhadi se khulta hai.

ADITYA:fir to use marna hoga pehle.

BOY:aap use nai maar skte?

ADITYA:kyu?

BOY:kyunki use sirf us jadui khanjar(knief) se hi mara ja skta hai jo usne is pahari ki kisi gufa me chhupa rakha hai.

ADITYA:theek hai tum log ghbrana mat sab theek ho jyega.

Aditya came out safly nd told Maan evrythng. Maan decide 2 search dat den in whch he hide dat magical knief. After crossing sevral hurdels he found dat den whch seems very scary. Maan decided 2 go alone inside. He entered nd sevral small bats attack on hm. As he get rid of dem he steps forwrd nd found very scary animal who was like a guard of dat knief. He attacks on Maan but made a quick move nd save himslf. Dat animal through his long tongue on Maan nd wrapped hm tightly. Maan unable 2 move as his grip was vry tight. He slowly slowly dragged hm in hs mouth. Maan wriggle conti.nd finally he able 2 free hs arms. As he went near hs mouth Maan stabbed his sword in hs 4head 3-4 times quicly. Due 2 whch dat scary animal died on d spot nd Maan freed frm hm. Suddnly dat animal's dead body turned in2 d knief. Maan ot it dat it was dat magical knief which he wants 2 kill Kaya kalp. He tuk nd cm out. Now both made a plan 2 kill Kaya kalp. Maan secreatly went inside but Kayakalp sw hm. He attack on him again and again wid his magical stick. Maan injured 2. Aditya cm nd threw a stone on hs stick. Stick falls far awy frm hs reach. Maan jump nd kick on hs face. Kaya kalp falls. Aditya grab hs stick nd broke it. All cages opens as it broked. Aditya safly tuk all d childern out of d den. Maan put hs sword on hm. He pleads 4 mercy.

MAAN:tmne un masom bachho pe daya dikhai thi?pr main tumhari trah kayar nai hu jo 1 nihathe pe war karu. Maan thre 1 sword 2 hm nd gave hm equal chance. Kayakalp tryng 2 threw mud in hs eyes luckily Maan moves nd safe. Dat was enough of dis Maan threw dat magical knief straight in hs heart due 2 whch dat magician died. As he died hs body blasts nd light balls cm out of it. All lite beams ran outside...

wow very interesting dear...and loved maan's love to geet..lovely updates shona...

vats tumharraa kalyaan ho

wow !!! maan in love with geetakshi...maan has changed ...superb update

nice part...
omg maan said dat he wil tk her to her baba... wooo...
aditya is right his lust is vanished n love hs blossomed...
good job maan n aditya... dat magician is no more

devrjiii...
yeh update bada hi uttam tha...
mera mann atyant prasann (HAppy ) hua...
meko aadi b pasand aaya yeh aadi bina spects wala bada hi cute ahi...
i wish maann jaldi se iss xm mein b paass ho jayeee...
ab jaldi se maaneett milan dikhaoo ...
THANKUUU...😛😛😛😛😛😛😛

HAYEEE YEH AADIII kya mast hai yaarrr.kabhi chuha kabhi aadmi ...
I LYK IT...

gr8 update
geetkshi ne maan ki awaz sun li
n dosti b gehri ho gayi aditya aur maan ki
loved the update

amazing update
hats off 2 u 4 such a flawless story
waiting 4 next update