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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh dear...from the beginning..I didn't predict the end...
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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In begining reading abt maans excitment was exilarating but ending was heart wrenching...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Jazz how could u...
nice one dear but the last scene really broke me...
i demand a happy OS now...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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He wanted to see his wife geet and his child...but dadi gave only mannat in his hand...what happened to geet...
Sounds interesting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The way you portrayed the scenes is awesome.I could imagine clearly the bus and its crowd,the conductor.Then,Maan running off to his home.
All in all it was amazing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi thanks 4 da pm n emotional OS! Starts happy n ends on a sad note! Beautifully written !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was amazing! I am in love with this song now! The OS... Bittersweet. Thank you for the PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome dear
but wat do d last lines mean??
does he lost his wife??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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chamba is one of d beautiful place . U beautifully brought nature picturesque of valley's . I loved the starting ,full of life but at last u had given me moan of cry . loved it 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lol!
I always said I am not a writer; it stands proven now.
Anyway, before my sakhis shower me with juttis for the statement above, let me clear the doubts most of you have regarding the story.
First of all I am not writing a two-part OS on one song. I am writing two entirely different OS-s on this one song.
As Soon As I Could was a one-shot about a soldier who is going back home to his expecting wife. He is rushing to his valley with hopes and expectations of a jubilant event only to face a bitter reality. A reality where his wife made sure to give him his daughter even if she could not survive the birth.
Chamba embraced the grief of its son, a man who lost his love and has been left behind to nurture the symbol of that love.
This was the meloncholy that this song exudes at times to me. I also saw a serene celebration of life in it. That is subject of the other OS on this song. So, yes Deepa(spvd), you will get a happy OS too. Hopefully, on Sunday :)
Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago

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