Chamba - MG Songfics [Updated]

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hopehot

@hopehot

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

oh dear...from the beginning..I didn't predict the end...

thanks for the PM

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awesomepooja

@awesomepooja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

In begining reading abt maans excitment was exilarating but ending was heart wrenching...

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Jazz how could u...
nice one dear but the last scene really broke me...
i demand a happy OS now...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

He wanted to see his wife geet and his child...but dadi gave only mannat in his hand...what happened to geet...

Sounds interesting

Cont soon

T4pm

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Saams

@Saams

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

The way you portrayed the scenes is awesome.I could imagine clearly the bus and its crowd,the conductor.Then,Maan running off to his home.
All in all it was amazing.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Hi thanks 4 da pm n emotional OS! Starts happy n ends on a sad note! Beautifully written !

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

That was amazing! I am in love with this song now! The OS... Bittersweet. Thank you for the PM!

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

awsome dear
but wat do d last lines mean??
does he lost his wife??

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

chamba is one of d beautiful place . U beautifully brought nature picturesque of valley's . I loved the starting ,full of life but at last u had given me moan of cry . loved it 👍🏼

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Lol!

I always said I am not a writer; it stands proven now.

Anyway, before my sakhis shower me with juttis for the statement above, let me clear the doubts most of you have regarding the story.

First of all I am not writing a two-part OS on one song. I am writing two entirely different OS-s on this one song.

As Soon As I Could was a one-shot about a soldier who is going back home to his expecting wife. He is rushing to his valley with hopes and expectations of a jubilant event only to face a bitter reality. A reality where his wife made sure to give him his daughter even if she could not survive the birth.

Chamba embraced the grief of its son, a man who lost his love and has been left behind to nurture the symbol of that love.

This was the meloncholy that this song exudes at times to me. I also saw a serene celebration of life in it. That is subject of the other OS on this song. So, yes Deepa(spvd), you will get a happy OS too. Hopefully, on Sunday :)

Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago