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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow amazing start...
Srry like button s not wrkng
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Posted: 12 years ago
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phenomenol start
i loved it...though Geet is just 15...well...but never the less...just awesome. I loved Maan and Rano characters a lot...waitign for Dadi to be out of comma...i love her a lot as well
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wow lovely update...and lovely start...te way my maan's entry was lovely...bechare tat cook, but maan dont act too much,..u hav to eat from ur geet's hands and u hav to bear wat ever she cooks for u...at tat time u can throw like tis, then she will dance on u...lovely, in u me maan married to 18 years girl and drinking lots of water ,..anf in tis 25 and 15 nice,..my maan will be always in te bath tub,..bechare maan...i thought, tat padmini and malik is nice pair but u made them as a couple,..lovely...i love te update so much...
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Lovely Start šŸ‘šŸ¼
Loved the concept, Prologue, CS,,... Everything...

Waiting for the story to move on...


N yeah Do Update Part 2 šŸ˜


Waiting for it
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teaser pictures of todays update...

















Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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awesome start continue soon.loved it
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hi friends!!!!!!!!!!!! here u go next update...enjoy

PART 2

Its was been 6 months rano staying in mansionwith maan.. she maintained distance but maan gets emotionally attach with her due to her dedication towards him and dadi...one day he get to know he had to leave for London for some project...in last ten years..he never left dadi alone.. if work is really very urgent he also takes dadi along with him with all medical facility because he doesn't trust anyone in matter of dadi.. but this time..he came to the mansion's living room and called rano and nakul..

Maan sat in sofa while both were standing in front of maan...

Maan - nakul kaka i have to go to London .there is some work which needs my importance

Nakul knows if he is going then it means dadi is also going with him..rano was unaware of this...

Nakul- ok maan baba I'll also pack maaji's stuff.. u are going that means she is also coming with u na??????

Before maan say anything rano interrupts..

Rano - beta aap maaji ko aapne sath kyu leja rahe ho..wo bhi is condition mein ..unke liye travel karna tik nahi hoga..

Nakul par rano, maan baba tho humesha maaji ko aapne sath lekar jate hain...wo kabhi maaji ko akele nahi chodte..

Rano - maan bte, mein samajh sakti hu maaji aapke liye bahut precious hain. lekin unka is condition mein traval karna shayad tik na rahe... aur mein aapko vishwas dilate hu...nothing going to happen to maaji i will look after her... but i m not forcing you .last decision is only yours whatever u want let me know .so I'll do preparation according to that..till then I'll pack ur stuff...

Maan thought for a while , its true that he believes rano and nakul...and also knows that dadi will be safe and its not good for health to travel..but his inner insecurities not let him leave dadi alone.. he remember his dads last words...

rajbeer - champ atleast save my mom...

how can he disobey his dad's last word... he will save his dadi from every evil eyes... but it is also true ,he somewhere started trusting rano maa...maan atlast decide to leave dadi with rano maa...and nakul kaka..and he also arranged extra security around mansion for dadi..

maan went to dadis room..the nurse left the room seeing him..he sat next to her..n took her hand in his..he used to talk to her like she can hear him

maan-dadi,im leaving to London..rano maa will be here to take care of u..aap naraaj math hoye..that im leaving u alone..i'll be back soon..

he caressed her head n kissed her forehead..

every time he sees her,his blood boiled..

maan-dadi.,mom n dad ki kasam,if I found that b* dev,I'll make his life hell..mei usei tadpa tadpa kar maarunga'I promise..

dadi's eyes fixed on the ceiling'but her heart was crying in pain..seeing maan drowning himself to take revenge..maan never hide things from her..she is like a diary for him..his in n outs she know..how he turned ruthless n arrogant n a screwed business men she know..she is not active physically..but she can hear him..

maan looked at her again n went to London half heartedly..

maan went to his office n looked after his works..he kept tabs on her every an hr..n made nakul keep phone in her ears n talked to her..hearing her breathe gave him satisfaction'

At evening..he had a party arranged by his client..he came to his pent house n got ready 'maan entered the party n he was welcomed by his client..he took his drinks n chatted with him..thats when his eyes fell on the entrance..there came his prey Dev Chopra..smiling at the girls..who were on either sides..his smile fired him..the revenge started to flame with fires..maan wanted to know what he is doing there..?

maan - who is he?

Client:dev chopra..my partners friend.and his girl friend Aarti...he must have invited him..


Maan wanted to break devs bones on spot,but the client kept him busy..

When he was busy,maan neared dev..

Maan-dev..

He called him in full anger..if looks can kill ,by this time dev must have been in ashes..but dev was not able to see his face due to darkness

Dev-yes..who are u?..have we met before..

Dev was busy again with the girls smooching them, not even bothering to see his face..

Maan-u cant forget me maamu'

Dev-what?but why?

Maan-bcoz im ur god..

Dev-what rubbish.. he tried to see maan's face but couldn't succeed

Maan-u may have forgot ur sins,but im the witness..n I'll make u beg to death..

Maan took his gun pointing at him..

Dev was now sweating badly..they were in dark so,others didn't notice them..even he was not able to see face of the man who is standing pointing gun on him..

Dev-wh..who..r..u..

Maan-I said na..tumhara muth..u didn't recognize me..ok..let me remember u..

Maan kept his hands on his necks n pressed his throat..aarti n the others who accompanied him ran away

Dev tried to push n take away maans hands..but maan was too strong for him..

Dev:l..ea ve me'

Maan:when my dad n mom begged u to leave them did u leave them'

Now it striked dev,maan calling him maamu n the way he is clutching his neck like his father..

Dev:m..mma..aa..n..

Maan:hmm..nice memory..

Maan smiled sarcastically n hit dev with back of gun..blood oozed out from his head..

Dev:wat r u doing..leave me..

Maan:kese jaane doon tumhei..i was searching u like mad..now u r here..till I kill u ..nor my parents soul will rest in peace nor I'll be peaceful..

Maans tone sent shiver inside dev..it meant how serious he was..

Dev suddenly pushed maan with all his force..maan stumbled n let his grip loose..dev took the opportunity n ran from there..maan started to chase..devs luck,he vanished in air..maan punched the wall in anger..

Maan smirked..

Maan-now when I know u r in London,I wont let u escape from me dev chopra..ur death is written in my hands..count ur days from now..

he called the detectives n asked them to find about dev n his background'

he came back to his pent house..he broke all thing in his house in frustration of loosing his hold on dev ...he roared loud...DEV..

maan - aaa i'll make ur life living hell dev chopra... i will make u beg for death and i 'll snatch that too from u...

he composed himself n took his parents photo..

maan(gritted his teeth)-mama,today I saw him..dad,I promised u na..i'll keep it..now see dad,I'll suck his every inch of blood..

he called home n asked nakul to keep phone in dadis ears..

maan-dadi,I found him..that killer of my parents n who is responsible for ur this state..dadi,I'll be the most happiest person when I teach him lesson for his deeds..

maan was so lost in his revenge..he was saying things how he will torture him when he founds dev..

daadi had tears in her eyes'thinking about maan..who is not thinking about his happiness..

rano who came inside saw this..this is the first time she is seeing some emotions in dadis face..

rano-nurse,nurse..

she called so loudly that maan too heared n panicked

maan - kya hua..

nakul-maanbaba..dadi ma is having tears..

nurse-its gud sign,she is coming out of coma..i'll call dr..

maan too heared it..

maan was so happy..he has never felt like this before..

maan-dadi,I know u r happy hearing I found dev..im coming now..

he planned of staying in London till he finds dev..now dadis reaction gave him urge to see her..till detectives find dev,he can return back he thought..

maan cancelled all his appointments n took his private jet to see dadi.. for his bad luck the weather did not support n he stayed back n came to delhi the next day..

that day rano was to go to shimla to take her gudia back..her exams have finished. already

she got permission from maan also..the last minute,dadis progress changed her plan..rano called hostel n asked to send gudia with her friend pinki parents..n she gave the address..where she should be dropped..

pinki parents with pinki n gudia started their journey to delhi..the journey full was fun n telling stories..gudia always fond of stories started with prince n princess ,king n queen or raj kumar rajkumari..


pinki -y r u fond of stories like these?

Gudia:bcoz,the king will be handsome n powerful..he will have a bbbiiiggg raj mahal..many servants'u know what'there will be different types of dresses to wear n different types of food will be served for him..

pinki-I think u wish to have those for ur own..

Gudia-such mei thodi na hotha hai..

pinki-if u got..what will u do..

Gudia scratched her heads-I don't know what I 'll do..

Yes..this is gudia,who lives in fantasy world ..n never cares for reality..

The car stopped before khurana mansion n rolly n her mom with gudia stepped out'

The security looked at the girl'who was standing shocked with her jaws opened..

pinki tapped her shoulder ..she did not nudge..then she shook both her shoulders n she came out of her shock..

pinki-geet,ur mom works here'

Geet-dono..

pinki-this house is huge na

(picture taken from karamchethu keerthana's collection)

Geet dreamingly-like a raj mahal were king lives..

Pinki chuckled..she is matured than geet'

pinki's mom neared the security n asked if that is khurana mansion..n he said yes..

pinki's mom came -Beta..go..this is the address ..i confirmed..

pinki -haan geet..now go..ur raj kumar will be waiting for u..

She teased..then bid bye to her n left..

Geet took her school bag n her suitcase n not to forget,hugging her teddy tito reached the gate..

She tried to enter but the security stopped..

Sec-who r u?

Geet-mei geet..

Sec-jo bi ho..i cant send u in..

Geet-kyun..

Sec-its order

Geets face brightened

Geet-order..u obey kings order..

The security looked at her like she is talking some alien language..

He looked at her from top to bottom..

She was wearing a Blue n white chudidar..looked like school uniform'two plats tied by white ribbon..she was looking like a cute kinder garden kid with teddy in her hands..

geets teddy tito

Security thought she came to wrong address..

Sec-beta,tum kiski beti ho..

Geet giggled.

geet:.aapko nehi patha..mei tho mama ki beti hoon..kyunki papa tho babaji ke pass haina..

Her face fell down..

Security felt pity on her..more than that her innocence..

Sec-tumhare maa kahaan hai..

Geet-yahi hai..

She suddenly felt a fear,mama told not to talk to strangers..but im talking to him..

She started to cry..muje maa se milna hai..muje maa se milna hai'aaah aaah..

Her fat tears rolled down her cheeks n few other securities came there..

They asked her in many ways n she said she wants her mother... whenever she sniffed n lifted her hand to wipe tears the dupatta lifted up over her forming curves, some looked at her lustfully..

Sec- Beta pehle ye tho bathao tumhara mama kaun hai..

Geet -Meri mama meri mama hi haina..

Sec - Ufff..Whats ur mamas name?

Geet - geet ki mama..

Sec - ye geet kaun

Geet - mei hoon geet..

Sec - haan ab bathao geet ki mama kaun?

Geet - Rano..geet ki mama rano..muje maa ke pass jana hai..

Then they called rano n she took geet with her inside..after she left all securities laughed..

Sec-such mei bachi ki bachi hai..she is not like what she looks..

They went back to their work..

Rano took geet inside made her freshup..geet changed n started her questions.

Geet-maa,this is kings palace na..

She looked around with her big hazel eyes..wondering the works'n furniture which showed the class of extreme luxury..

Knowing her nature of questions rano said

Rano-yes..

Geet-where is the king

Rano-he has gone abroad..n haan..listen to me carefully..this is not our house..behave properly..that too before maan beta..

Geet-who is it?

Rano-mei bi kise samjaraha hoon..tumhare shabd mei king..

It was 6pm

Rano gave her milk..n then took her to dadis room'n made her take blessings..

Geet sat beside dadi..

dadi looked at the small girl who was filled with naughtiness n joy..n innocence

Geet-dadi maa..u don't worry..geet is now herena..u will be fine soon'I'll pray to my babaji..n will say to papa also..papa never denies my word..aap bilkul teek hojayenge..phir hum dono khelenge..khoob masti kharenge..u will play with me na'

Geets presence made the room chirpy..the happiness in her voice filled inside dadi also..her antics were so cute..dadis eyes were fixed on her only'

Dadi (st)- kitni pyari bachi hain , agar aisi ladki mere maan ki life mein aajaye to he may also learn to live happy..not like this dark life

Rano-ok..now go n play in garden..but be careful..dont break things..

Geet-ok maa..bye dadi..she kissed dai's cheeks n went out..

Dadi felt her body light for first time..it was not like a rock now..

Rano-maa,don't mistake her.she is still behaving like a child..

Rano had tears..

For the first time she thought to share her inner feelings as dadi is also a women..

Rano-im only worried about her..all girls of her age had attend puberty..but geet did not..she still remains child by heart'n behaves like a child also..so only we keep her in hostel..im waiting for the day she will behave matured ..

Geet took her tito with her n went to the garden..she was so lost in the beauty of nature..there were all kinds of plants n trees with a big swimming pool..the big lawn, fountain in middle'different kinds of flowers'geet sat on the swing enjoying the surrounding talking to her teddy titto..


It was 7pm when maan reached mansion'he straightly went to dadis room..the nurse said the details what dr.said she will soon be out of bed..

Maan-dadi..dadi'u know I'm happy..

He looked at her face n saw a new glow of happiness..

Maans st:dadi,I know u r happy bcoz I found ur son n dil's culprit..

After spending quite time with her,he kissed her forehead n cheeks,where geet kissed..he felt something different..he shrugged n went to his room..he took a shower n moved to his balcony..its his favourite place..he used to sit there n watch the whole garden n the swing..his mom is very fond of both...when he used to play in garden, his mom n dad will sit n watch him from the swing' so,he still maintained it.

Maan was so lost in his past'he saw a shadow in the garden..

he rubbed his eyes n saw it again'

He saw a girl wearing a colorful frock upto her knees..

her hair tied in two ponies..she was holding a teddy in one hand..she looked like an angel in that dark night..she was competing her beauty with moon..she was following something n trying to catch it..every time it escaped ,she made a cute frown..this made maan smile'

Beautiful girl'

She jumped in joy when she caught it..maan looked at her legs which was slim n creamy as her dress lifted in air..

Maan came out of his thoughts..he looked at the garden she was not there..

Maan-u r hallucinating..girl in ur house..no chance..

Note:'.Maan may be rude n violent..but he never had attraction to girls..he has seen many beautiful girls ..many have proposed him straight n to marry or for a night..but maans only aim was revenge..so he did not let any one near him..n thought a girls presence may divert him from his goal'the one gud character in him'no girls..n one more..he drinks only in parties..he don't want to visit dadi in drunken state..

Nakul came with his dinner..

Nakul-maan baba..ur food..

Maan-ji kaka..maa kahaan hai..

Nakul-wo dadimaa ki kamrei mei..

Maan finished his dinner..

Maan-teek hai..im tired..im going to sleep..

Nakul:ok..

Nakul closed the door n went down..rano also came down..

Rano-bhaiya,maan beta sogayi hai kya..

Nakul-haan..he said he is tired..kyun rano..

Rano-wo..i want to introduce geet to him...teek hai..i'll introduce in morning..

All had their dinner..nakul went to his quarters with other servants'geet n rano slept in kitchen..

At midnight maan was thirsty..he saw the jug empty..he moved to the kitchen..he stopped seeing the scene'

Geet was hugging rano in her sleep'her one hand n leg over hers..maan felt jealous seeing someone hugging his rano maa..she is his maa now..

He neared them slowly without making noise'he moved the strands of hair covering geets full face..

Maan was bowled by the beauty..seeing her so close he stood stunned'her round face, perfect nose, chubby cheeks n dimpled chin'her lips'it was perfectly shaped n pink in colour..her bare neck..a small curve of her softness'her slim waist..his gaze moved down'..her spread was long away gone n she was in deep slumber that she did not feel her frock was not in its place..as her legs were on her moms'maan touched her legs..he can feel it..she was so soft'

so,It was not imagination..

maan moved his hands till her knees..geet giggled feeling ticklish..

he jerked..what I am doing..

his hands trembled..he took the edge of her frock n placed it correctly..he took the spread n covered her..still he was not convinced..he rolled the extra portion of spread in her foot..so the spread will not go away even if she tossed in sleep..feeling satisfied, he moved out to his room silently..taking the water bottle'



precap:maans rules in mansion..n devs whereabouts..


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Edited by ruvalmaaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yepiii me again first šŸ˜†

ok as i dont like aarti aunty at all😈
so i put her as dev girlfriend šŸ˜†

plz do tell me u all like this idea or not me😊

waiting with finger crossed😳

Edited by rubykatariya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome ! Loved it ! Waiting for geet n maan confront !
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Posted: 12 years ago
i m in love wid dis ff..awsome update...maan trust rano nd left dadi wid her..now maan finds dev..nd geet hayeee.totally bubbly nd cute finally get in km..nd dadi is happyyy...going interesting precap seems interesting update soon

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