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GUYSSS...REALLLY...REALLYYY REALLLY SORRY FOR BEING GAYAB WITHOUT INFORMING... FOR ALMOST A MONTH.. I HAD MY UNIVERSITY EXAMS, AND BEING ITS A NEW COLLEGE IT GETTING TOO TOUGH FOR ME TO COPE UP WITH THINGS...BUT NOW..ANOTHER MAJOR PROBLEM.. 16HRS POWERCUT IN MY AREA...SO I TYPED THIS UPDATE BIT BY BIT...DONT KNOW IF I CUD PUT IN THE FLAVOURS OF KMP LIKE BEFORE..IF NOT..PLEASE DO FORGIVE ME...NEXT TIME..WILL COME WITH A BANG UPDATE AND THE PRECAP WILL DEFINITELY MAKE U HAPPY :) AND I DIDNT REPLY TO ANY COMMENTS...AM SOOO SORRY FOR TAT..NO TIME NOR POWER HERE, NEXT TIME I WILL TRY TO DO IT ...FOR SURE..AND 193 LIKES...OMG..OMG...LOVE U ALL..AM JUST OVERWHELMED..*AG wiping kushi ki aasoon*...here u go..next part...!!!

Part 15:

Maan: Mein hoona...isko Zindagi baar keliye dictionary banne keliye...

Everybody looked at him confused, when Maan walked to Geet and stood near her...the next moment, Geet felt his rough hands, slipping on her waist and holding her tightly...she turned and looked at him shocked...while he said to Rano...

Maan: Toh Momma...When Are u Gonna make me and This English Pressure Cookware get Married...???

He asked ever so casually yet, there was a strange grip in his Voice..
Everything Tat was quite suddenly became chirpy... All Hooted and Whistled irrespective of the Surrounding, for his sudden question out of the blue...

Dadi stared at Him in disbelief, while Rano had a pool of happy tears running down her face... She tried to move her hands and Join it before her Soon-To-B Son-In-Law...who nodded in Denial with a genuine smile on his face...

While Everyone's eyes was glowing with happiness... Maan could feel a Pair of eyes, oogling on to him... He didnt turn.. He didnt have the capacity to see those questioning eyes...

Geet: MMaaan...he heard a faint whimper, yet serious... Only Thing he did was to Hug her more close to his side and almost dig his hands on to her bare waist, to stop her emotional revolution... She gasped with the Authority tat is seldom expected from tis man..Maan.. The one thing She still Coudnt deny the fact tat...She felt a comfort in this grip...it said...Everything will be alright soon...

She stood there numb by the sudden change of the events...

That First Time When..She Took A Decision...

She Didnt Know.. Its Gonna Create an Impact On their
Lives...

This First Time..HE Took a Decision...

She Knows... It is Gonna Change Both Of their Lives..COMPLETELY...
The naked truth was so haunting her...which didnt get unnoticed by the Person beside her... Maan knows, not once he thought about her mind set...but he also knows..This lady is a jack fruit of his life...harder the outer...Sweeter the inside..he didnt move, nor didnt budge...he doesn't want her to break the bubbles, which may result in many heart breaks around...

The Peer tension among the two was so getting tougher and tougher... her coldness scared him for his impending death.. he closed his eyes and let out a silent pray : lagta hain..aaj chudail ki asli roop bahar aajayega...babaji raksha karna... he declared himself and stood patiently tugging her close to him...

Not a moment later of his prayers, he felt a heavy tug on his other hand...Phasgaya...he murmured and saw her in a great fuming session.. he made a baby face , yet her sarcastic smile gave him better answers... Maan Peeped around for some escape, desperately waiting for someone's attention, so that he can escape from the deadly encounted, while he heard a scary whisper...

Geet: Dont U Dare...U are Not Gonna Escape... She gave a dangerous smile and Dragged him slowly out of the room...

Maan nodded his head vigorously almost on the verge of crying...Daaadddiimmm he was about to shout, but her cursed hands covered his mouth, she stomped her foot on his and dragged him forcefully out of the room...

Mmm...Mmm... he struggled, but she has successfully pushed him into a deserted corridor and she took her hands out...

Kidnap...Kidnap...he shouted enough to receive a deadly glare from her...

She looked at him pantingly and took slow yet dangerous steps, which quite obviously made him realise tat, he is gonna be getting strangled...

Tat's it... he turned and made a run...

Geet: Maan Stoppp... she shouted from behind in sheer anger...
He simply kept his fingers in his ear holes and started walking even more
faster...

Geet: MR. KHURANA I SAID STOP RIGHT THERE... her Scary Voice ehoed even more lethal in the deserted corridor, his legs stopped just right there... that is it...he knows there is no escape..he has to answer for something he has pulled her into along with him.. but what answer he is going to give her, when he himself is unaware... he stood there fidgeting with his hands, when he felt her hands turning him towards her...

She Turned him harshly and looked directly into his eyes...

Her eyes was asking too many questions...it had shock, fear,anger and Helplessness...

He found his tongue tied and stared back into her blankly...

Geet : What the heck was that...???? She yelled..Y did u tell them like that When u in the first place know what is the truth behind our relationship...???

Maan stood there still like a hard rock...he couldn't fathom words to reply her...

She got even more furious with his silence... her angry tears made its way, she clutched his collar and screamed for the last time.. everything of this drama needs to be ended...its not gonna fetch any good for both of them...she knew it...

Geet: Enough Maan...Im not going to continue this play anymore...u understood it..Not anymore...!!! she released his clutched collar and was about to walk away , when he held her hands...

Maan: Ok...Go and Say anything... But before that Promise Me one thing.. he answered simply, yet there was some unknown determination in his voice...

Geet looked at him Puzzled, when he held her arms and dragged her near the room in which Rano was in...They could hear the excitement of everybody happily planning for the marriage ...They saw Dadima calling some one on the phone, Annie and Payal Making list, Rano who was still now bed ridden, was without her oxygen mask..there was a certain change of things, full of life and happiness, happened just with their news of getting married...Everyone had tat smile on their faces, and the excitement, which was worth watching for eternity..

Maan: Promise me...even after hearing the truth.. They will Still have this smile on their lips and glow on their faces...If U can Do Tat...U can Go and say anything...I m not bothered...
He backed out, locking his hands over his chest, with his eyes fixed inside the room...

Geet stood rooted, for the first time in her life, not having the heart to wipe the smile on their faces...yes, its difficult for her to do tis... difficult for her to endure this... but They are now put in crossroads of their lives, they cant move anywhere without each other's company...

Everything about these two is contradicting, except one thing... They Cant see anyone's sad faces...may be..Geet got that trait from the man before her...

Isse kehthe hain...Sangat ka Asar *Wink*

She unknowingly moved near him and her eyes followed his... a faint smile adorned her lips...

They have come so much towards this fake play... but this time, its not gonna be a fake play anymore, but a life's game of tying both down till eternity.. an Atoot Rishta..

Her hands invariably moved near his , her fingers laced his and filled the void between his fingers, locking it softly yet tightly... his heart stopped a moment, he turned slightly towards his so called fiance... his eyes stalled a moment, as it gathered an yes from her eyes, with tears flowing down... her lips quivering into an assuring smile.. he looked at her shocked, he moved his hands upwards which was locked with hers to view it clearly... IT SAID IT ALL...THEY ARE INTO THIS LIFE LONG EXPEDITION...!!! he mocked a smile, while she snorted her nose, both back into their real forms...

Maan: So Ready to Endure This Cool Guy..Throught Ur life??? He asked raising his collar, still not taking his hands off her...

Geet: When U Dont have any problem to Endure a Witch Through out ur Life...I dont have any problem to Endure An Idiot Called Mr.Maan Singh Khurana.. She spoke with a naughty glint in her eyes, making Maan look at her shocked with his mouth wide opened...

Geet mocked a smile..: What U Tat, Iam a Deaf, not to hear The Innovative names U Give me?? She Raised her eyes brows, when he smiled weakly...

Maan (ST): Kahin...isko chudail ki meaning bhi pata chalgaya... he mumbled with utter fear, when he heard her counter..
Geet: But Still, Am Yet To Know the Meaning Of One Name U call with that "C" thing... she tried to recollect the word, when Maan sighed...

Maan(ST): Bless her Memory Power...

Geet: Haaan...its some..Chu...Chu...she was about to get caught, when she heard a scream...

Maan: Anjii...Meri bachi... Maan was trying for a situation to escape, when he found Anji trying to open the Room's door with her tiny hands, thats it he made a dash...

Geet grunted: Weird creature he is...argghhh!!!

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It Was late night, Things were clear from Outer, but not from inside..they know it.. Unaware of Maan, who was making Puppy faces just with an imagination of spending A FULL LIFE with his chudail..the situation between, Geet and her Mother seemed to be tensed...

The kids had fallen asleep on Payal , even Annie was damn sleepy, as it was too late, Arjun opted to take them to Payal's mayka, as its nearby the hospital...while Raj and Dadima preferred to stay for the ladies, incase of any need, irrespective of the high protests of Rano...

Maan: *yawn* Papa..Bhoog lagi hain...he rubbed his stomach looking at his Father, who rolled his eyes... Can anyone say, tis guy is gonna get married in a Week's time.. he sighed...he once again pitied Geet, his Future Daughter-in-law and took him out, to get food for all those who stayed here...

Now the situation had gone worse, Sharda was literally biting her nails, seeing Geet's furious face towards Rano... her gripping her saree and plastered lips seemed ready to broke out... Dadima understood, about the Mother Daughter Talk is needed ..she took Sharda out pretending to use
Washroom...

The room was tensed, none spoke a word... There she sat near her mother, with her puckered lips, ready to let out a smouldering torrent, her eyes just full of pain...

Geet: Happy??? She asked with a painful smile on her face, which had a little sarcasm too..

Rano: G-e-e-t..she stuttered, finally letting her tears flow away...
Geet rubbed her mother's tears roughly and spoke again... : Everything happend is happened, but Doesnt atleast My Would-Be husband has the Rights to Know about the butchered past of his Soon-To-be-wife??? She asked out of blue, making Rano jerk a moment... She expected her daughter to scream like before,but this is beyond imagination...

Rano: Geet..Wo.. she was gathering her words to say, when they both heard another Voice...

NO..HE WILL NEVER NO... The Voice was Firm, Geet looked shocked, its none other than Dadima...

Geet: Dadima.. U?? she muttered in admonish, while she smiled and clutched Geet's hands...

Dadi: yes, Beta... its Me.. I know Everything and Promise Me Maan Will Not know anything... she replied firmly, when Rano nodded in acceptance...

Geet stood dumbfounded...this piece of information was too shocking that the elder lady of the house, knows everything, yet she is prepared to marry off her Grandson to such a Girl Like her...

Geet: How Can U Dadima...?? she asked painfully... How Can U??? Even after knowing everything about Me, how Can U even think of making That Innocent Marry Me...??? Maan Deserves Some One More Better... Not Me...she shrilled in agony...after knowing about the play in which she is stuck...

Dadima Gathered the shattered Girl in her arms, she patted her back who was now clinging to her life, a struggle between her past and future...

Dadima: Its because the heart Which u have in here, she pointed towards' Geet's heart, who looked at her confusingly... U could have easily brushed off Ur past and Married anyone and Live happily Geet, But nor U , or ur mother wanted to start ur new life on false things, she said me the day , when we met u in our house... When U had the Hundred Chances to Move with the Proposal Very Easily and Settle in Here, U Still Cared About Maan, U Still Cared about Us... Isnt it a Great Thing Tat I Found In U, to make My Grandson Married to U... for a girl with a Golden heart...

She said wiping the Tears of Geet's eyes...who looked at the old lady before her amazingly...

Geet: But Dadima...she protested..

Dadima: See Geet, She cupped Geet's face... Geet beta...u r still 22, young and have a life to live,u should move on and forget ur past beta... dont let the bitter thing overpower ur present life... And Im Sure, Ur Life With Maan will Be interesting Right??? She winked, For some unknown reasons, Geet smiled and even blushed a little...

Dadima patted her cheecks, Chal Get up, now my ever annoying Grandson is gonna come and will start a James Bond session, if he sees us like tat..

Geet got up, still Looking restless... when Dadima spoke her heart..

Dadima: I know...U must be thinking about Maan.. Promise Me, Geet...He is Not Gonna Know anything about Ur Past, I Want to See My both Grandchildren, live a Happy life, with no stains of the useless past...

Geet shook her head in denial... she still cannot fail that innocent eyes of Maan...how could she let him in dark ... she cried in denial..while Dadima placed her last trump card...

Dadima: Geet beta...if u have even a single percent of respect towards me...then promise Me, that U will Not say anything to Maan for now...please..

Geet shriekd, she held on to Dadima immediately, she couldn't see
Dadima like tat, her respect for this old woman is n' folds, she cant express it... she mutely nodded in acceptance getting helpless, while
Dadima kissed her forehead blessing her with a beautiful life with Maan...

Just then Geet wiped her tears, they heard the Two Men entering... Geet turned away to hide her red nose, while she heard a weird munching noise...followed with a strange language...

Maan: Mm'Daaimmaaa'aaysss aaaiiyeee... (Dadima..Lays Chaiye...)

Geet's eyes popped out seeing her Fiance, God he looked like a kindergarten, with his mouth filled with crisps, his hands holding three various coloured Chips packets...

He cutely forwarded a packet to Rano asking her to take one, to which she denied smilingly...

Geet's mouth was opened wide, when she felt a red packet stretching before her..

Maan: Yeyyy Waann??? He asked muffling a little more into his mouth...

Geet: What??? She asked not understanding his weird language...
Maan gulped and cleared his throat: U want??? He asked clearly...

Geet smiled looking at him and was about to extend her hands to take a bite, when winked and moved the packet away...Na na na Naa na,,, he showed his tongue and ran away...

Geet: Stupid..duffer...idiot.. Geet muttered fumingly, when he started laughing...

Their nhok-jhok was going on in full stretch..when they heard an atom bomb being dropped directly...

Dadima: Maan... its getting too late... me and Raj are gonna stay here, u take Geet to Our house and give her Annie's clothes to change, bechari..how many hours she is gonna sit with this saree... she suggested...

Maan+Geet: Nooo... they said chorously when Dadima rolled her eyes...

Geet: Wo..Dadima..i will go to my house... no problem..she explained...

Dadima: Geet beta... i have sent ur driver for getting Rano's clothes and moreover we may need a car for emergency purposes,ur house is too far...so Maan will take u home today and u can stay in Annie's room...she replied sternly yet clearly...glaring at Maan, who by now understood, he is stuck ..again with his lady hitler...

Maan sighed (ST): Beta..Mann mein Atom Bomb phoota... grrr...'

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The Haunted Parking lot had only one noise, the grinding sound of Maan's teeth, along with the the poor crisps, while Geet's followed him irritatingly...

Her eyes popped out seeing a Race Bike standing before her ..its almost looked like a horse,with an elevated seat at the back... she cringed her eyes and muttered profanities at Maan, who was walking ahead of her uninterestingly..

He shrugged and mouted on his bike and waited for her to climb...
1...2..3...4...5..6... the minutes were flying by, still she was standing biting her nails.. how to sit on this weird thing.. she tried to remember how other ppl sat behind the bike... now with saree its too difficult..she scratched her head, yet her ego intact to ask Maan the solution, when he heard a voice...

Maan: Madam Princess.. U Need an Invitation To Sit??? He mocked and stuffed some crisps in to his mouth..

Geet snorted her nose.. No other go..she is stuck with this insane insaan..sighing... she clutched her saree and made her way towards the bike..

Maan was glaring at her through the rear view mirror almost shrieked and dropped his jaw opened...

Maan: Hey wait..What are U doing... ??? he asked with his big eyes, looking at his stupid Fiance, who has by now lifted her saree till her knee to climb the bike..he gulped hard to see her porcelain legs shining in the bright light of the parking lot , her smooth limbs with adjoining knees'

Geet: What??? Am trying to climb the bike... she answered irritatedly...

Maan : Chi..Chi Babaji.. he looked here and there to check as if somebody is seeing them..and sighed... he immediately pushed her saree down and glared at her...

Maan: I said to Climb on the Bike...Not to display a fashion show of ur waxed legs' he grunted'.

Geet lost it..: Idiot...how am i to climb on this thing with a Saree... she screamed making him get scared a bit...

Maan thought for a while...So toh hain... Wait... he parked the bike by putting a double stand and came near her...

Maan: Hold tis.. he gave the Lays packet to her ..aur haan...Dont Eat..its Mine... he warned her gaining a murderous glare...

Geet: Arghhh.. she felt like strangling his neck, yet controlled herself'
Thinking a while he clutched her pallu and came around.. she looked at him carefully, while a gasp escaped from her lips, when he moved her anchal off her stomach...

Geet: WWWhhaat rrr Uu dddoinnn??? She muttered, when he tucked her pallu direcly between inside her stomach... That moment, which seemed to be casual, became suddenly sensual as his hands laid more than needed at the place unknowingly... her soft skin earned a slight carass from him..her already display of legs was spoiling his poor mind'.the throbbing unknown desire was very new to his own... his long thumb pressed near her belly button, while he felt her hands clutching his shoulders for support... before the moment could turn intimate, they heard some breaking sound, making them move away instantly...

Mommmieee... Geet heard a shriek and looked down to see Maan's accusing eyes...

Maan: Mera Chips... he gritted his teeth and looked at her fumingly as if she has crushed his million dollar posession, while she felt like banging her head on the wall...

She stood there helplessly, when he came furiously to her...before she could say anything, he dragged her near the bike and lifted her placing her on the elevated back seat and moved front...

Geet was terrified...she looked down, the thin material of her saree was so slippery, tat she felt like she will fall of the bike... before she could adjust, she found the bike already started...

Geet: Oh..My God..Oh My..God..Stop.. she screamed closing her eyes...when he took the bike at a full speed...

Maan shrugged his shoulders and Cared a less'

Geet: Stupid U'Cant U hear' Stop the Bike..Am Gonna Fall..Am Gonna Die..this Thing is So Tall.. she shrieked in horror clutching his shoulders'

Maan: then Die' he said casually , but please stop screaming , I have only Two poor Ears.. he kept on raising the speed, while she closed her eyes tightly.. fear luring the pit of her stomach'after sometime she felt the bike slowing' before she could react, she felt her hands being pulled front,,, he locked her hands around his waist , while she snuggled closer to him in sheer fear'. he smiled looking at her pale face '

He knows her'she pretends like she can handle anything'
but least she knows..he is the one who could understand her even before she says'

he started the bike'This time..not too fast, little slow,,,with her torso plastering on his back, her curves pressed and her face crooked into his broad shoulders'. creating a new sensation of warmth in both hearts'.

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The small journey seemed so nice'with the blazing wind scratching their skin, yet each other's warmth creating a new spell.. the night bestowing a beautiful back drop'.

the Bike screeched and halted before Khurana house.. yet Maan stayed still, not having heart to break her from his'his hands moved slowly over her locked hands on his waist and caressed it, in the attempt of breaking free ..while Geet jolted suddenly realising the bike had stopped and backed out jumping off the bike..

Aaah'she screamed closing her eyes, fearing she would fall as the floor was too slippery cos of the preivious rains, when she felt herself still intact with a pair of arms hovering her'

Maan: If u wanna Try Superwoman tricks, At Ur Home Lady'Not infront of My house.. he retorted making her steady, while cursed him the umpteenth time'

He took the house keys and opened it'.the house was dark, with a single light from the living room' Geet felt so unspooky and literally hid behind
Maan, when he shouted Hutccchhh!!!!! Hutchhh!!!

She jolted a Second, then sighed recognising its His Voice'

Maan: Hutchhh' Hutchhh' he again screamed making her more confused'

Geet: U Even Sneeze Weirdly??? she asked out of the blue, with his instalment sneezing or say screaming'

Before he could answer, she felt Maan pushing on the nearby couch embracing something tightly'

Geet: What The Heck'??? she shouted when, her eyes opened wide looking at a creature Maa was hugging'

Maan: Huttchiie Babieee'I misss u Chooo Much' he showered kisses on ITS face and hugged it close'

Geet: Ewww'That Was Gross' she felt like puking, when the Creature Licked Maan's face in return'

Their Lovey dovey Moment was disturbed, when Geet stomped her foot '.
Maan looked at her irritatingly, whe she spoke..

Geet: Mr. Romeo...if U are Over Romancing With This Creature, Can u please show Annie's Room..??? I wanna Change... she said with an disgusting face...

Maan: Oye..Dont Call her Creature.. She is My Hutch.. My cute doggie...haina babieee...he nuzzled his nose to Hutch's face, to
which it wagged its tails...

Geet: Hutch??? What kinda name is this??? She said absurdly...

Maan: Haina...Maan Singh Khurana The Cleverest..he raised his collar, when Geet glared.. See She looks like tat Hutch Dog.. and she comes wherever I Go...haina Babieee... he asked the dog again...

Geet felt like hitting her head..: Wah.. What an Invention Maan... she said sarcastically...Btw.. The Hutch Dog is a Pug,, and Ur Juliet is a Boxer.. she retorted...

Maan fumed: So What.. she looks the same.. shakkal toh milthi hain.. Just My Hutchiee is Tall..Haina Babieee.. he ruffled its hair and kissed it...while the dog made a moaning sound... it turned towards Geet and looked at her from top to bottom... it happily wagged its tail and was about to move, when it heard a voice..

Maan's Juliet... Hutch...aka Hutchie.. (Thanks to Gurti abi..For giving this idea..Thank u darlinggg )



Geet: Stop Right There.. she showed her fingers, dangerously..making the poor dog scare and hide behind Maan..

Maan: hmphh... Kutte ko bhi darathi hain chudail.. he murmured... How Do U Manage to Scare Every living creatures on earth?? He asked out of the blue, just to get knocked by a cushion thrown by Geet..

Geet: Will U Show Annie's room or not... She asked threatening him, while he stomped and showed her the direction...
He saw the poor dog was still hiding behind the couch...

Maan: Chalo Baby, woh chudail hain... uske paas mat jaa... he scooped his Hutchiee and walked into his room...

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Geet Sighed locking Annie's room... A typical gal room with a pink and pink..she smiled and took out a Salwar to her size and removed all her jewellery... with a Great Difficulty she changed into a salwar and moved to the living room, only to see giggling sounds...

Her eyes popped out, seeing him rolling with Hutchiee and tickling it on the couch...

Geet: Eww...Are U by anychance, Making Out with a DOG??? She asked controlling her laughter, gaining a frown from Maan...

Maan: Oye...its out Private Moment..Dont disturb..he said sternly patting Hutchie..who hid behind Geet getting Scared...
Geet couldn't take anymore and clutched her stomach rolling laughing...

Geet: Private Moment??? Hahaha...Enjoy...by the way.. I pity
ur Family Members..They have to Endure Two Dogs in the same house... with the she made a run and closed the door, shouting
Good Night Romeo and Juliet...

Maan fumed in anger... he looked at Hutchie seriously..: Yeh Chudail toh humein haad se zyaada insult kardiya..haina..
Hutchiee nodded her head like a goody dog.. while Maan smiled with a beam...

Maan: Revenge Time.. he clasped his hands and waited for her to sleep...

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It was half past 12, Geet was turning unable to sleep properly due to the change of place... she closed herself fully with a blanket, but a noise, made her jolt...

OOo!!!!!!! Ooo!!!!!

Geet: Omg..What Was Tat, she sat up straight sweating... The Sound seemed so scary like a Fox's howl... she looked here and there , then laid down again covering herself head to toe...

Maan frowned at Hutchie.. : agar tum zor se aawaz nahi diya toh...kalse tumhari pedigree cut... he warned the poor dog and it howled again...

Ooo!!! Ooo...

Geet jolted again... She was damn scared... she have read in story books, only if there is some evil forces lurking around the animal give such sounds, she dropped her resolution and decided to go to Maan...

Maan: Hutchieee..Bhagggooo... he screamed in a whisper, while Both ran from the Window steps and settled themselves on the living room couch, acted like sleeping...

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She took one step front, one back...

Gosh..I hate My Ego..she mumbled, standing near the room's door step...seeing Maan and Hutchie..cuddled up in a sound sleep... They both actually slept awaiting for Geet, anyways' their revenge is over... Geet didnt sleep..

Finally Geet broke her resolution and walked over to the Couch, as she felt so uncanny over in the room...

Her lips automatically turned into a smile seeing Maan's cute face which a slight frown... he scratched his stubbles and slept again...

The moment was Cute...no Awkwardness.. she kept on staring at his face in the dim light... a pain appeared on her heart...she stood on her knees and slightly caressed his face with her soft fingers...he smiled in sleep instantly...her eyes melted into silent tears...

Geet: Do U Even know... Y am so Afraid??? Its cos of U Maan... Ur Innocence Scares me.. Ur Childish hearts makes me guilty that, one day...I should not be the reason for butchering it... Am Even more Afraid how to handle Such a Pure Person Like U...who is not prone to any Pain in life..unlike Me.. she cried with whispering the words softly...stroking his hairs... I just want One thing From U... When U Come to know about My Past.. Please Dont Hate Me... I can endure anything But Not ur Hatred... she wiped her overflowing tears and pecked his forehead slightly...

The night though long...seemed lighter to her... She slept near his legs , keeping her face on his feet , like she is clinging to him for her every minute of her life in future...off course, it depends on him!!!!

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Edited by alwayzzgurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
fab update dear
bike journey was very cute
love the maan hutch dog
liked the last scene where geet confessed her , feelings
to maan
did maan heard her talking
but maan is the only person who can make
geet to forgot her past
dadima was correct
loved the update dear
but try to update soon please

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago

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