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Posted: 12 years ago
WHY DID MAAN PULL HER INTO THE ROOM LIKE THAT AND CLOSE HER MOUTH
FOR A MINUTE I THOUGHT IT WAS RAGHAV
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
maneet started feeling fr each other...

continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
As always great update dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it
maan is so possessive
sorry for replying late
continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago


PART 16


Maan held her tight and dragged her to his jeep. He was actually lifting her genuinely from side as her leg was not even touching ground. He made her seat in jeep and started in a race. He was driving fast, very furious with all those what happened in collage. He looked her. His anger came down looking her quite and stressed face. She was sitting very quite bending down her head. He dint like it. She should not take any worry his heart said.



" geet kya hua" maan asked.she dint reply.. he again asked " geet what happened.. geet are you tensed about all those what happened in collage..geet mere hote hue tumhe chinta karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai . " she looked him. Her eyes had many questions.. he wanted to give her all answers. " bolo geet.. please tell me" his eyes pleaded her...



"maan" she said meekly



"hmm"



"maan wo..."



"bolo geet .. " he was eagerly waiting for her talk



"maan wo.. mai reporters se puchna bhul gayi ki mai tv pe kab aaungi "



"What ??? he stopped jeep shocked" ..geett you wanted to ask reporters that when they will telecast your interview???? " he barked irritated



she nodded innocently .. haa maan...wo kya hai its first time I had given my interview na .so m little excited... " she said jumping on seat like some kid..



Maan held his head.. he wanted to run from there and bang his head some where.. " here I am worry about her that she would be tensed and she.. omg she is tensed about when she will be seen on tv.. she is mad..she is totally Mad!!!!!



"maan kya hua.. maan you know how tensed and nervous I was there.. I was shivering but when you held me, my hand..my every fear vanished.. " he looked her instantly … " haa maan.. then I thought what need to be worried when you are with me ..hai na.. " she said smiling, her heart without thinking once. Maan looked in her eyes.. it was so naive and innocent.. she was not joking or faking but it was her heart voice and maan could see this.. he smiled. She trusted me this much he never realized. He touched her cheek lovingly.. caressed it.. feeling her untouched soul.



Geet looked him . He was smiling .. she smiled too " maan .. aap na ..hamesha smile kiya karo.. you know how good you look when you smile.. but no..you always either scold on someone or make wired faces.. why are you like this ha..." she said puffing her face .



"you know geet.. you are soo cute " maad pulled her cheek and laughed for the first time... she felt happy.. she too laughed..maan started jeep and dropped her home



At night



Man was standing side of window in his guest house.. cool breeze was blowing outside. He were thinking about what happened in these few days.. since I have come here something has changed.. my life is changed.. that geet... thinking about her brought a sweet smile on his face.. she is mad.. she is totally mad but still she is perfect.. her stupid talks, her weird logic, her kiddish acts are something ..something i like, something I can see and hear whole day... Today how easily she said.. she said those words which I never dared to tell to my heart even but she said that she trusts me.. she believe me without knowing what I am.. who I am .. and now, I promise geet I will never brake your faith your trust upon me.. I promise.. " he was in thought when his phone rang. He picked and a loud scold burst his eardrum..



" maan ye sab kya hai haa... "



" dadimaa???



Haa dadimaa.. do you remember me or forget that you have a old , helpless grandmother also haa"



maan rolled his eyes.. "lohh geet senior... " nahi dadimaa ..how can I forget you.. you are my sweet dadi na



"haa haa hum toh sweet hai isiliye aapne hume bataya bhi nahi aur shadi bhi kar li



"what??? what are you talking dadi?? mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha



"maan didnt you see today's news.. everywhere in all newspaper, in all channels are showing your fiance news and you saying you dont even have any idea about it. .. hume banaiye mat maan



"no dadi.. I really know nothing about it … aap meri baat to...



"i dont want to listen anything maan.. I am coming there tomorrow " and she cut



" ek musibat khatam hoti nahi aur dusri aa jati hai.. ab mai dadi ko kaise samjhau... " he thought for some time then his mind and body gave up and he slept.




Next Morning



A car was coming toward xyz place (geet place). "driver car rokiye" savitri devi said to driver. The car stopped. She slides down car window and looked toward two girls who were busy in eating golgappa.. SD looked a paper and then to both girl .. " ye to wahi larki hai ..hmm .. toh plan one begins " she thought and smiled.



dadi(savitri devi)- zara suniye .." she called geet and meera who were busy eating golgappa.. geet went to dadi.. " ji kahiye. Dadi asked a address to them. This was near geet house. Geet told her address. Then dadi requested them to come with her as it was new place . Both agreed and seat in car. After some time dadi started conversation



Dadi- aapka naam kya hai beta



geet- ji..i am geet and she is my friend meera



dadi (ST)- dekhne me toh bahut sunder hai.. aawaz bhi achi hai ".. Bhut pyara naam hai "she said



Geet- aapka naam kya hai anty



dadi-hume dadi kahiye beta.. aur humara naam savitri devi hai



Geet- bahut pyara naam hai ..kisne rakha " asked cutely



Meera hit her elbow " chup kar ". geet sat straight twisting lip to meera. Dadi smiled at thier innocent talk. After going some far meera came down saying her home was near. Now geet and dadi were alone in car...



" dadima.. aapka address aa gaya.." geet said. Dadi looked around. Suddenly she felt dizzy.. she held her head groaning.. geet shocked and held her " what happened dadi..are you ok??"



dadi- wo hume chakkar (faint) aa raha hai " she said.



Geet- ohh .. fir toh aapka akela rahna thik nahi hoga.. aap aisa kariye mere ghar chaliye.. mere papaji doctor hai.. aap kuch der aaram kar lijiye fir chali jaaiyega.. thik hai " she said worried



"dadi smiled and nodded and they left to geet home...



Precap : Dadi In Geet Home 😃

Now Maan Ka Kya Hoga 😆


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Posted: 12 years ago
hehehehehehe lovuuu mindblowing 😆...sorry lovu again like button is not working ...so super like😉...ab toh senior geet bhi aagayi .ab kya hoga maan babu😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet is just impossible...
omg dadi in town...dat 2 on a mission...
msk is so dead...
lol
geet toh sambhalti nahi abt dadi bhi...dat 2 in same house...
god help d soul of maan...hehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
hahahhahaha sooo funyyy geet is so innocent nd maan bechara phass gaya,,,nd dadi toh dadi hai par dadi geet ke ghar jaa kar kya karegi...luvvveddd ittt
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow amazing update
dadi is so naughty
and maan was so right
dadi is senior geet ahahhaaa
both dadi and geet r together
poor maan
wht will happen now?

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