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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one
good at least mohinder came to know their intentions



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---DOR---

s t r i n g s o f r e l a t i o n s

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PART 14


She shied and run from there.Maan gained his lost sense. " ye mai kya kar raha tha .. maan tu iis larki se dur rah' he cursed him self when he heard a "Dharrmmm" sound from downstairs.. he run to there and found , geet was sitting on last stair, holding her feet, making wired faces. " ye larki thik se chal bhi nahi sakti " maan shakes his head and went to her. He sit beside her " kya hua" asked.



Dikh nahi raha.. mai gir gayi " geet said irritated.



Wo toh dikh raha hai..per gir kaise gayi .. dekh ke nahi chal sakti"



mai to dekh hi rahi thi "



achha.. aur kaha dekh rahi thi



" piche " geet meekly said bending her head down



Good.. ab tum mujhe ye bataogi..ki tum piche kyu dekh rahi thi.. jaha tak mai jaanta hu ..sahi dimaag waale log aage dekh kar chalte hai "



Toh mai kya karti.. who aap... " she bit her lip"jhalli kya kahne jaa rahi thi "



maan smiled.. kya mai geet



kuch nahi.. she tried to stand but her ankle pained. Ahh'



geet wait.. maan bend and lifted her in his arm. She shivered first with his sudden touch on her body but she felt it so good. She looked his face. It was so stern yet soft emotions were wondering on it. She unknowingly tightened her hold on his neck. Maan was shaking inwardly with her little touch and now she was making it hard to bear with touching more area of him around neck.



He took her to her room. Made her sit on bed. "geet tum ruko mai medicine leke ata hu " geet dint hear anything as she was in her dreamland, maan came and sat on floor. He saw her for permission but she was daydreaming, without blinking looking him. maan smiled. He took her leg and kept on his thigh. She shivered with this touch but still dint blink. She was assuming it as her illusion. Maan raised her salwaar up and applied balm on ankle , massaging slowly. He was having hard time to control his inner emotion , her soft leg felt so good below his palm. He looked her face. She was still in trance. He looked in her eyes and lost. He dint know now he was not massaging but touching her leg unknowingly. They were lost. Maan raised salwaar upward till her knee. She shuddered suddenly and came back. She looked him now he was dreaming. She looked where his hand was. It was on her knee. She felt uncomfortable. And removed his hand from her. Her movement brought back his sense. He looked away feeling embarrassed as so was she. Both were feeling heavy. Maan stepped first to break this silence



"geet..tum jaldi se ready ho jaao.. we are getting late for collage." saying he left her room



geet nodded and went to get ready. Maan was thinking what happened little before. .. " ye mujhe kya ho raha hai..mai asa behave kyu kar raha hu" he was thinking when she came all prepared. They were to left house when maan got call from mohindar . Maan told him that geet is fine. Mohindar thanked him and requested to be with her till he back. Maan agreed as he too, dint want to leave her alone. Dont know why but he felt that it was his responsibility to take care her.

They both sat on jeep and left to collage. Both were quite. Maan was lost in his own thought and geet was shy. After some time geet heard a loud horn. She looked back and shocked. She shake maan and said "maan bhagoo..jaldi"



maan shocked with her sudden act. " kya hua geet..



aree maan baat baad me karna pahle bhagoo jaldi..police humaare piche hai



kya???



he turned back and found his bodyguards were following them." ohoo toh miss geet guards ko police samjh rahi hai " he smiled.



"geet ye tumne kya kar diya..." maan said worriedly



maine kya kiya" she looked him confused



"geet..sach sach bolo tumne kiska khoon kiya hai "



"kyaaa.. maan aap pagal ho gaye ho kya ..maine kisi ka khoon nahi kiya hai.



"toh fir police tumhaare piche kyu hai ..he was enjoying





"mujhe kya pata maan" she was scared. She was saying him to speed up. He speed up and took turn . jeep jerked with some road breakers.. She was not ready for this sudden turn and was going to fall out when he held her arm and pulled toward him. She fell on his chest. Maan stopped jeep. " tum thik ho na" he asked. Her heartbeats were fast. She could nod only. He covered her with his arm and hugged. He was also shaking thinking what could have happened if he did not hold her hand. They were hugging each other which turned into losing their sense. He started caressing her back. Geet nuzzled her face in his chest and made herself more comfortable, when they heard passing vehicles sound. Thank god they were in roofed jeep so no body could see them. They parted embarrassed. Geet looked back to see where was those police. Maan said it was not police but his bodyguard.



"bodyguard kyu " ohh geet was back '



"body ke guard ke liye geet.." maan started his jeep.



"per aapko bodyguard ki kya jarurat hai maan.. aap larki ho kya " she asked innocently



kyaa??? geet ye tumse kisne kaha ki bodyguard sirf girls ke liye hote hai " he was amused with her strange question



kyu..aap ne suna nahi.. akeli larki khuli hui tijori jase hoti hai.. aapne kabhi ye suna hai..ki akela larka khula hua store room jesa hota hai " she gave her weird logic



"Kyaa... " iis larki ka mai kya karu " he closed his eyes .



Geet ..tum thori der chup baithogi..please " he said like begging



"haan thik hai..baithti hu na.. aap bhik kyu maang rahe ho " she casually said. Maan rolled his eyes.



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After half n hour they reached collage. There princi was standing with some staffs to welcome maan.they took maan to stage where geet went to her friends. maan was on stage. All girls were eying him. But they know now they had no chance as geet was his gf. They all were jealous with her and glaring her now and then. Geet did not understand why they were looking her like this. Today geet had to perform a dance. She got ready and was looking memorized, like bride in red lahanga.



Maan was talking with some teachers but his eyes were searching for geet. He was very restless, dont know why, but was feeling something was going to wrong. He wanted to be her with him . He was was sitting when suddenly his eyes caught a man. His all senses got alerted. That strange man was covered with long shawl. His eyes were wandering among crowd for someone. Maan mind said he had seen him somewhere but could not put finger on right. After some time function started. All welcomed maan and then dance. Then comes geet, dressed in red lahanga, looking Dazzlingly beautiful. Maan saw her and kept looking. He could not move his eyes. A slight smile curved his lips when she danced. He was lost in her so could not know that same man's target was geet...


Precap : Same Continues 😛


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Edited by geet.lover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yipeee me first

superb update

loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aowww I Just love the update

hehehe Maaneet lost lost in whole update mauka chahie bass 😆 ooppsseee ankl pe lagi thi na chot knee pe kab n kaise shift ho gayi, heheh wifi technology use kari kya 😆

aowww bodygaurd wala part was tooo good police n gauds main diff ni pata kya iss jhalli ko
aowww again lost lost hehehe jab tak Maan hai Geet ko kya hoga?? Kuch b to nahi aowww i just loved the part where Geet says that JWM wali line

ladki to khuli tijori n ladka store room 😆 ladko to store room bnaa dala isne to mast thaa yaar

aowww entry b clasic thi mereko he dint let her down sab classmated burning in J...hehehe badaa maza aata hai na if ur BF is super hwt, flaunt kar sakte ho 😆

ooo teri di yeh kon aa gaya, shittt maan to lost in Geet ab kya hoga??

Update soon this tym plz u take losts of tym :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 14
awesome part...
is that the same rogue?
and Geet's antics are so funny...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovu block bluster update...hehehhehehe...akela ladka khola hua store room jaisa hota hai...🤣...awesome...
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Posted: 13 years ago


wow lovely update...my baby geet and bechare my maan...i love te update so much dear..geet is drooling on my maan and my maan is also started to feel for his gete..bodyguards for only girls?.geet were u get just ideas?...tat man is raghv's father...?...
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Posted: 13 years ago
akela larka khula hua store room jesa hota hai...hayeee meri maan khula hua store room hai ????? kash mein uss store room mein ghus jaau aur andar se lock kar lu...fir mein aur meri maan gayenge "HUM TUM STORE ROOM MEIN BAND HAI"...hehehehehe...

mind blowing update lovuuu...😃👏👏

muaahhh...😉😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
Love is in the air.. Nice update.. Waiting for next part...

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