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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: valli22

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nice part



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

part 3
awesome part...
OMG that was too funny...
loved it...
cont soon dear...



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, brilliant part
loved it
loved maaneet fighting aww so cute both r like kid
continue soon



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: soma.gurti

mind blowing update...❤️



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Part 4

Both were showing eye to eye without looking each other.. But both could feel it.

"geeet..geet beta" mohindar called geet from downstairs. Geet run to him skipping some stair.

"sambhal ke beta. Gir jaayegi. Ase kyu bhag rahi hai "

Geet dint say anything. She run and hugged him tight. She was scared,

Mohindar- geet kya hua beta. Itni dari hui kyu hai. Bol toh

Geet ' aap kaha thy papa. Itni der se kyu aaye. Mujhe kuch ho jata toh.

Mohindar- kya ho jata beta. Ase kyu bol rahi hai." He made her look to him. "meri taraf dekh geet. Kya hua bol na beta. Mera dil ghabra raha hai." Geet told him everything.

Mohinadr got worried. Tune kisi ko bulaya kyu nahi geet. Achha cha lab mai aa gaya hu na. ab darna nahi. aur tut oh meri sher hai na" she nodded making baby scared face. "chal mujhe bata toh kaha hai wo. Aaj uski khair nahi "

Mohindar picked a thick stick and both went upstairs. Geet was also picked a large danda (stick) and went behind mohindar. Both were in room in front of washroom. mohindar without making any noise turned the knob. Geet hided next to door ready to make sudden attack after mohindar. Mohindar opened door slowly and saw a man talking on phone facing his back to him. Mohindar tardily raised his hand and about to beat hard when maan sensed and turned. Stick fell from his hand on ground.

"maan beta ..tum?? mohindar shocked. "toh geet ne tumhe chor samjha . kya karu mai iis pagal larki ka" he said in embarrassment. "maaf kar na beta.. who toh hai hi pagal larki . anjaane me kitni bari bewkufi kar baithi " maan was saying nothing. He was fuming in anger but dint show to mohindar. So he said " koi baat nahi uncleji.. wo anjaane me use galti ho gayi hogi " mohindar relieved a little. " chalo beta bahar chalo " they started leaving from there. Maan went first. As he was going to put his first step out of door BANG!!! ' our geet was ready to attack hit hard on his head with all her sherni power. Maan kept his hand on his head. glared her with extreme anger. He would eat her alive if was possible.

"geeettt " mohindar shouted. He run to maan . "maan beta..thik toh ho." And glared to geet.

Geet- papa aap waha se hat jaao. Iisko toh mai dekhti hu and she again ready to hit when mohindar pull her. "geeet.. tu pagal ho gayi hai .kya kar rahi hai . ye maan hai jisne meri jaan bachai aaj " geet hand stopped in air. She shocked and confused looked mohindar. Mohindar explained her everything. She dropped her stick on ground unknowingly and again BANG !!! it fell on maan feet. He held his leg tight and glared her with whatever anger he had rest. He was now wanted to kill her right here.

Geet run and hugged mohindar tight and started sobbing. "aap thik toh hai na papa" mohindar consoled her. "haan beta. Mai thik hu. Maan bte agar waha time se nahi ata toh pata nahi shayad aaj mai zinda bhi nahi hota" geet looked maan with wet eyes and sorry expression but maan was fuming turning red. Geet got hell scared. She hurriedly dropped her eyes down. Mohindar turned to maan and again asked for sorry. Maan couldn't say anything to mohindar so he gave its ok smile. Geet looked him corner of eyes and found still he was blazing her hard. " papa mai inke liye medicines leke aati hu " she said and run from there. Mohindar made him sit on bed.

Geet (st) ' jhali, kamini, stupid kya karti hai. Karne se pahle sochti bhi nahi. dekha an kya kar diya. Ek toh usne papa ki jaan bachai aur tune kya kiya. Use washroom me lock kar di' she kept her hand on mouth. Babaji' ye maine kya kar diya. Aur upper se unhe danda bhi maar diya' aur toh aur paao (feet) pe bhi..babaji..ab wo mujhe nahi chorega.. uski aankhe dekhi , kaise ghur(glare) raha tha.lag raha tha abhi kha jaayega' mai bol rahi hu geet.. bach ke rahna ab' warna..babaji bacha lena" she prayed to baabji and went to maan .

Maan was laying on bed. Mohindar was sitting next to him. "geet beta..kitni der laga di "

"nahi papa who medicine.mil nahi rahi'"she stopped looking him who was totally red in anger. She gulped her saliva and went to him. She gave medicine to mohindar. " papa aap medicine laga dijiye mai inke liye haldidudh (haldi milk) laati hu and run from there. As mohindar was going to put medicine maan stopped him and said he doesn't need it. He is fine. Mohindar nodded and left from there giving him time to relax.

Maan was walking in room seething. "mai iis larki ko chorunga nahi. mujhe ..Maan singh khurana se uljhne ki himmat ki hai issne. Iski saza toh mai use de kar rahunga'." He was self talking when geet entered with milk. She was hell scared looking him so kept milk on table and going fast when heard " toh miss geet handa..dar gayi " she turned and looked him .

Maan ' geet handa..yahi naam hai na tumhara' aur tum collage toh jarur jaati hogi" she nodded confused. "gud..iska matlb tumhe counting bhi aati hogi." She was looking him like alien. "toh miss geet handa..aaj se apne din gin na (count) shuru kar do. Kyu aaj ke baad mai tumhara who haal karunga jo tum soch bhi nahi sakti" and smirked evilly.

Geet got hell scared. She fiddled her dupatta and run from there.

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Precap ' Police - Miss geet humaare pass aapke against warrant hai


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Heyyy how was this. please bless me with lots of lovely comments. i wait n read n love each n every single word of it.

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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
nice update

but precap is scary
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
awesome, brilliant part
loved it
awww geet, hit maan as she thinks, he is some kind of thief
lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98


Geet is so innocent and so cute...

Maan ne Geet ke hathon maar kha li...

precap is scaring me----Maan will really file police complaint against Geet...nahin yaar Maan is not so rude...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
MAAN IS SO MEAN
HE SCARED GEET
AND THE PRECAP IS SCARY
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Posted: 12 years ago
just awesome...
geet tho maan ko maar dalne ka plan kar liya

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