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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gargi12


"mei vampire ban gayi"
Kab??
Mujhe pata bhi nahi chala
Mujhe kisine bataya bhi nahi...😉
Sissy mei vamp kaisey ho sakti hu,huh???
Mujhe unk rules n regulation bhi pats nahi...

eh hello you just said mel mein tera ghoon phi jaungi so I thought maybe you' ve become a vamp😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update...loved it...
waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 12 years ago


Roopali did all that to get Maan...

she played with Geet's life...

thank God she is killed...

but what about Geet will she be revived back or not...

waiting for next part...agar Maaneet alag hue to Mel main tujhe chodungi nahin...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



Roopali did all that to get Maan...

she played with Geet's life...

thank God she is killed...

but what about Geet will she be revived back or not...

waiting for next part...agar Maaneet alag hue to Mel main tujhe chodungi nahin...

thanx for pm...

Di and dhamki mel fainted
Look what you did sara😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
i hate roop, defo i will get her na, then i will kill her😡
maan will now feel the remorse..😔
ver well written, the emotions which you have shown is mind blowing, lovely😊
waiting for next
thanks for pm

love isha

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG...geet is dead...
nooo...she hav to live...
u left us on the cliiff hanger...
continue soon..
waitin 4 next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mel, believe it or not but mujhe 'changing aunty' aur Roops ke baare mey phele hi pata chal gaya tha. Gosh, me behaving like a typical vampire in real life too. Aunty ki memory, vikram ka reaction aur Roops ki entry ne sab confirm kar diya.

Welcome back me, again. It was all so unexpected and emotional. Uncle sach mey pagal ho gaye they coz of Geet aunty's changing behaviour. Overall parts read karke koi bhi insane ho sakta hai. Roops, accha nahi kiya yeh. My intelligent brain. Sab padhne ke baad, all i can say is- Sara ke rehte MANEET alag nahi ho sakte.
I know, phele ki tarah zyada active nahi hu aur long comments bhi nahi hai par you know the reason. As promised, kiya na?

Do cont soon and do PM me.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

Mel, believe it or not but mujhe 'changing aunty' aur Roops ke baare mey phele hi pata chal gaya tha. Gosh, me behaving like a typical vampire in real life too. Aunty ki memory, vikram ka reaction aur Roops ki entry ne sab confirm kar diya.

Welcome back me, again. It was all so unexpected and emotional. Uncle sach mey pagal ho gaye they coz of Geet aunty's changing behaviour. Overall parts read karke koi bhi insane ho sakta hai. Roops, accha nahi kiya yeh. My intelligent brain. Sab padhne ke baad, all i can say is- Sara ke rehte MANEET alag nahi ho sakte.
I know, phele ki tarah zyada active nahi hu aur long comments bhi nahi hai par you know the reason. As promised, kiya na?

Do cont soon and do PM me.

hmmm so you knew how wrong 😆
of course I believe you miss vampire
well have fun saving maneet miss sara
did you know I get request to put you more in the story sara you' ve become famous and all
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Posted: 12 years ago
Last Part
G:Take care of the childeren Maan.
Geet closed her eyes.
M:Nooo
Maan bend down and bit her neck. Nothing happend.
A:Dad please
Alex and Robert tried to make Maan stand up, but he shoved them away.
M:I will get my Geet back. She can' leave me like that. She can' t.
S;Uncle geet is not breathing anymore
M:NOOO she will be back. I will bring her back.
Maan shook Geet
M:Misty wake up Misty don' t leave your Maan please. Mein Mar jou ga Geet Mar jay ga tera Maan. You wan' t that huh Tell me
I can' t believe your leaving me
I can' t believe it really came to a end
How can you leave me behind
Please, Please don' t go into the light
Oh please don' t leave me behind.
M:Geet please give me any punishment but not this Misty don' t do this to me. Don' t leave me behind Please Jaan Please come back.What will this body do without his soul his jaan.
Sara, Alex, Robert couldn' t see Maan like this. They couldn' t see the business tycoon Maan Singh Khurana all broken apart.It torn their to soul to see the sight in front of their eyes. Alex and Robert walked over to him.
A:Dad Please
S:Uncle samale apne aap ko.Agar aap thoot ghe whom will take care of nishu and Ruchi
M:Geet will take care off them haina Jaan wake up Misty wake up please, Please Misty please wake up
All I have are you memories
All I have are the good times,
we shared
How can you leave me behind,
after all we shared
Please, Please don' t go into the light
Oh please don' t leave me behind.
M:Jaan dehko your Maan knows your innocent he is repenting he is ready to do anything please now wake up. I am ready for any punshiment Promise this Maan singh Khurana do will anything you will say Geet just come back to your Maan please geet aise mat karo
S:Uncle please she can' t hear you please samale apne aap ko
M:Nahi sara she will be back haan she will come back and then you can disturb are romantic moments like always haina Geet you remember na how sara always comes between us romantic moments
sara' s heart broke to see Maan' s condition. tears made her way out. She couldn' t keep strong anymore. She felt her self break aprt she hugged alex and cried all her pain out.
M:sara why are you crying Dehko geet what you did even Sara hamari Sar who can only give dhamki's is crying please Misty now wake up console her she needs you. geet please
Maan' s voice started choking.He couldn' t handle it anymore that his Geet was not responding to him.
I never felt this way,
you make me feel alive
How can you leave after all we been trough
How can you leave me behind
No this can' t be the end
Please, Please don' t go into the light
Oh please don' t leave me behind.
M:Please geet please open your eyes nothing can happen to you your immortal remember
R:Dad, mom wasn' t immo
M:No ROBERT NOT A WORD I SAID SHE IS IMMORTAL SO SHE IS haina Misty tell him
Just then Geet' s phone rang. Maan picked it up it was Ruchi calling.
M:Dehko Misty ruchi want' s to tal to you. Won' t you talk to her.
Maan picked it up and put the phone on speaker.
M:Ruchi
R:Dad hi how are you
M:I am fine Ruchs
Maan was trying hard not to give his emotions away.
R:dad you okay you sound low
M:Haan I am fine just tired
R:Well I am sure Mom will take care of you haina dad
Ruchi giggled. maan closed his eyes in pain.
M:Haan she will
R:dad your sure your okay
M:haan ruchs I am sure and when you mom is here what can happen to your dad
He looked at geet pleading with his eyes aksing her to wake up
R:true dad, can I talk to Mom
M:woh Ruchs she is sleeping when she will wake up I will tell her to call you
R:Theek hai bye dad
Maan hung up
M:Dehka Geet ruchs wants to talk to you aur tum that is wrong Misty come on wake up. I need you Misty your Maan needs you
I know I am being selfish,
I know I am being wrong,
But this heart won' t beat without you
Please, Please don' t go into the light
Oh please don' t leave me behind.
Maan couldn' t handle it anymore he broke apart. Tears finally made their way out.Maan sobbed like a baby.
M:Misty please wake up.
R:dad please
M:She can' t leave me Robert she can' t she is a vampire right the how can she
R:She isn' t a vampire anymore dad
M:YES SHE IS. she is just weak. Wait I will make her feel better again.
What Maan did next shocked veryone. He grabbed a piece of glass and cut himself a litle bit in the neck. he bend over and let Geet drink his blood.
M:drink it Jaan you will feel better. You are just weak
To everyone' s suprise Geet choked. Her eyes opened. She pushed Maan away. She coughed.Maan looked at her she was back she was alive. He hugged her right and started crying like a baby.
M:Forgive me Geet forgive your stupid Maan. I am sorry Misty
He was crying like a baby hugging geet.Geet was shocked she patted Maan.Everthing that happened flashed into her mind. Maan not trusting her,asking her to leave and the her. She looked around this didn' t look like heaven.So she was alive again how. Maan' s muttering I am sorry and constent crying, brought her back to reality. She pushed him away
M:Misty
She stood up she was completly glowing. Alex and Robert smiled they now knew what was the medicine against morphed drugs Geet was a vampire again she was back.
G:Excuse me
Geet started to leave, when Maan hold her hand
M:Do you hate me so much, that you are ready to leave you Maan in such a state alone
Tears formed in Geet' s eyes but she wiped them away
G:I am just keeping my promise
maan stood up
M:and what about the promises we made to always stay together what about them Geet
Geet smiled weakly
G:They faded away by your lack of fate.
Tears rolled from her cheeks.Maan turned her around
M:I am sorry Misty I really am
Geet put her hand on his cheek.
G:Maan it' s okay some realations are just not meant to be
M:Geeet don' t say that please mein mar joa ga tumare bigair
Geet smiled weakly through her tears.
G:Nothing will happen to you maan magar tumari Misty woh to marghi hai Maan.
M:geeet
G:Sach toh keh rhi hoon Maan the day you told me mar joa Geet uss din yeh geet wahi mar ghi thi Maan
M:Geet I am sorryyy woh mein
Geet put her hand on his mouth, to make him stop talking.
G:Maan please it' s over what I don' t get is how did I get alive again
This time sara spoke up.
S:Because he loves you aunty he loves you more then life. Uncle had broken apart seeing you like this.
A:Haan mom we all had lost hope expect dad. His pure love cured you from morphed drug
R:The medicine for a ex-vampire against morphed blood is pure loved filled blood that can only given by the one whom loves you more then himself. Whose love is selfless.
S:Aunty you know Uncle cut himself so that you could drink his blood.Gusse mein he must have said to you mat jao but seeing you like that ripped his soul apart. aunty he didn everything to bring you back and now look at you his love did not only cure you but also made you a vampire again
A:Only real love can do that mom
Geet looked at Maan.
G:You did so much for me then I should also keep my promise na
M:Geeet please don' t
G:Kyu Whatever happens I will never break my promise to always stay with you
Geet looked at Maan with love filled eyes.
M:Geet I love you
Maan hugged her tight.They both cried into the hug.
M:Never leave me again Misty I am really sorry
G:Sssh it' s okay if you hurt me then you also cured me I love you maan
M:I love you too misty I really love you
Sara,Robert and Alex smiled looking at them.
S:hello stop it you guys bache hain yaha pe chi stop romancing
Geet blushed. She tried to free herself but maan was not willing to let go. he was not ready yet. He hold her more tighter
M:Miss bachi then leave
S:hawww you promised I can disturbe you romantic moments when geet is back
G:what
She whispered in maan' s ear
M:Haan but that was a emotional moment and anyway promises mad with you sara are meant to be broken
S:Hawww aunty are you listening
Geet knew now what Maan must went though. She could feel restlesess everytime Sara told him to leave Geet. She hugged Maan tighter assuring him she will never leave. They both stay into the hug ignoring Sara' s crazy comments.
The End
Guys to tell me what you think about the song it was a mel original😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
oyeee
me first
yipeee yeh kaise ho gaya
aur yeh kahti hai mai issi bhul gayi
nahi yah ho nahi sakta
waise dear
first thing first
yaar tera ff khatam
hurrryyy
yayi ra
maaja aa gaya

aaj mera birth day
so meri marji
mai chai haasu ya phir ff finish hone par royu😉
Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago

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