Shackles of Love#7#MG FF Chapters 29-31 - Page 11

DQ, finally SOMETHING cleared.

Well, me very happy with the pace of the story and the no of threads, comments & likes. Me also happy to see the length. But your dhamkis, guessing game, shart and late updates make me to kill you. Sara is noticing that you are playing with words too, now-a-days. Heavy new words and dialogues, impressive.

Coming to update part,
Geet is really acting the same way, as i want to see my sherni. The wild beast can only be tamed through her. Every line, word, scene, dialogue and emotion is par excellent. The morning kitchen scene, the driving scene, the restro scene, the phone call scene and the gym scene were the best. Finally, some missing parts of the never ending puzzle quiz is being solved. The gym part was the cherry on cake. Overall, amazing.

'no thanks' for the dedication.
Do cont soon and do PM me.

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

difficult u see..

sadda Maan to IMPOTENT MITTINGS me busy hoing..to usko AIDS kaise ho sakta hai🤓

Originally posted by: heytal

Wah Aashu tu itni jaldi comments ko like marring n reply deing

can we expect an update soon

just chance marring😉

tu googly maar..mai pakding!😆

Originally posted by: ruchs

🤣

y u didnt PM me last part...n it is in new thread that i have missed it...nywy...what a passionate part...really lvd the last portion most...umm their fight...always geets fearless answers to him...irritaed maan as well helpless maan in front of his lvly wify...

"Maine kab kaha mujhe Maan Singh Khurrana chahiye?" she mocked him. "Sorry to disappoint you Mr. Khurrana, lekin Geet ko to sirf apna Dusht Danav chahiye!"

"Aur ye mera wada hai aapse. Ye Geet aapki zindagi itni mithaas bhar degi ke aap apne ateet ki saari kadwahat bhool jayenge."

"It's Geet Maan Singh Khurrana and after marriage, whatever is my husband's is mine."

"Agar aapko mera haath hi pakadna hai, to keh dijiye na. Aise bahane dhoondne ki kya zaroorat hai?"

A sudden image of a faceless guy holding Geet's hand over the clutch came into Maan's mind, making his blood boil and him yelling out a "No ways!"

"Koi na Geet! Zindagi me sab kuch nahi milta! Jitna mila hai utne me khush reh!"

omg maan can flirt yaar...omg he can laugh yaar...bt what a prank geet...maan ko AIDS ka patient bana diya...bt finally he questioned geet ...he never will get proper answers from dirjee...bt nw his heart won n he questioned her n i hope his trust will b remain same n after that he will alwyas trust geets eyes...

She stood in front of him with her hand outstretched holding out the towel. Maan looked at her and her outstretched hand. Suddenly instead of taking the towel, he held her hand and pulled her to him.

But now I my trust in him is restored." She whispered in a low tone, barely reaching his ears, but the underlying conviction in her words and the look in her eyes shot straight to his heart, warming him up from within.

"You know why?"

He shook his head slightly.

"Because He chose you."

Something within her made her move forward and boldly place a small peck at the corner of his mouth, which had just begun to curve into a smile and whispered in his ear, "And I am really glad that it's you."

At first he tried to unclasp her hands, trying to get away, but she held on tight refusing to give way. In the end he admitted defeat and listened to his heart, engulfing her within the circle of his arms tightly.

beautiful update...as usual...

awesome awesome awesome update ! it had all the emotions , one moment m smiling, one moment laughing n one moment crying...the update was jzt beyond perfect 😊 cont soon, waiting eagerly.. :)

awesome one...hope hey believes what she said...mere ko iss maan pe jyaada bharosa nahi hai...😡

Congrats on the new thread..
will read the update at nyt.