MG OS: An Unexpected Turn last part pg 23 10/08

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

well not sure what to say, but i waited atleast for your stories...in any case your decision
tx for writing

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KrishnaSourav

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+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

I don't know what to say
it's really disappoint turn of event
story concept is awesome, brilliant, mind blowing but wanna read full not gist
loved the story
maan found his love and geet got the justice

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its_me

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

i feel bad that you had to complete this FF like this...don't know what to say or do...

i feel so sad seeing all the posts where people are talking abt less likes and comments. From my side, I always try to comment along with pressing like but...

well I hope u don't have to do this again

nice concept

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Mounika sharma

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

awww u gave gist😭 😭but it is only the way left with u and i know it darling...

coming to it it was an amazing story darling...wow maan knew that she is his angel but didnt tell her finally pata chal bhi gayi...how kaminey's they are they killed geet's parents😡😡

but iam really very very happy that maan stood for her...finally finallly they are one...

their lives took many unexpected turns but they are one finally..true love can never fail and that happened with prince and his angel and that is maaneet..will she cont as army officer after marriage..i know stupid question😆 but asked out of my curiosity😳

thank u so much for such an amazing story darling..

loveu..muaazzz🤗

ur kiddo...😳

Edited by maneetlover1 - 12 years ago

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pop77

@pop77

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

So sad..ending..we can't read find more maaneet moment..
Geet get justice to punish culprit..

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luvu4ever143

@luvu4ever143

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

awesum os...

loved all d parts...

maan n geet r so cute...dey still loved each other even after so many years..

sachi..true love always wins..

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

awesome sweet ending yar loved it a lot

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#159

loved the update...

Geet is alive and she joined Army to punish her culprits...

but why army ?...Army is not the force to catch the businessmen who sell fake drugs...it can be Narcotics department or police...or CBI...

thank God she joined Army or else how she can meet Maan...

u ended ur story in a jiffy...the reason is that u r not getting enough response...but can u and other writers justify what is the fault of readers like me to get this treatment who are regular...

anyway thanx for pm...