'Two Broken hearts fall in love'Pt:68Pg:42 (The END)

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Nickname : Zee

@Mrs.ZSK

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: mchopra
Ahhh ha good strategy..Ek baar hasao baaki rulao..
and laalchi means greedy.. hehe
so i said this was long enough dont expect longer one..hehe
Part 67 is on pg 21.. 😳

thank u 😎

but once and a while rulao not hamesha 😆

kya 😲

nahi nahi i expect longer one for the epilogue 😡 Hain nahi toh 😆

yes i figured it out :)

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK

thank u 😎

but once and a while rulao not hamesha 😆

kya 😲

nahi nahi i expect longer one for the epilogue 😡 Hain nahi toh 😆

yes i figured it out :)

Bhaiya hum toh saddist hai..hehe

and is se lamba

poora epi ka post epi likhvana hai kya..😆

and koi na maine clarify kar diya 😛

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Jeba Rahman

@the_chosen_one

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#293

speechless.
yaar u did magic.
superb update.
finally everything is on its own place.
Zee u r too good.
love this part very much.
but I dont wanna say alvida to this ff.
plzzz plzzz plzzz give an epilogue.

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#294

i dont want to comment in the FF now as the thought is killing me that its ended😭 right now feeling as if something has gone from me feeling the emptiness withing me this was the place of this FF in my heart 😭

starting from the first update of the FF it gave me a very different feeling a very different FF and due to this i came to know u zee and talked with u regarding this everyday whenever u update

i have read many FF loosing its charm when coming to end but this was one of the FF's which never lost its charm in its entire journey

coming to the update it was perfect the way the climax was planned was awesome zee there could never be better climax than this Dev doing it coz he understood what is right and wrong or rather who is right and who is wrong ,maan from the begning knew about vicky telling lie loved the whole update

its now really difficult to say that it would be my second last comment in thiss FF last will be for epilogue , but as it is said that every good things comes to an end this also had to end but i never thought that it would be so difficult to think that this ended why cant the thing which we like go on and on and on forever😭

this is what i want to say or rather wanted to write

cant write continue soon as there is nothing to be continued😆

yes just wanted to say it was a great FF waiting for the updates of ur other FF's

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#295

Wow awesome update..

beautiful end...

awww poor dev sacrificed his life for his best frnd...

luved it...

thanx a lot. will surely surely miss the ff..

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#296

oh no ... i developed a soft corner for dev in the end

waiting for prologue

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#297

hiii zee

loved da last update

poor dev lost his life

glad maan didnt misunderstand vicky

da ending was cute

loved maaneet

plz do write an epilogue

thanks 4 da pm

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ruark_22

@ruark_22

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#298

beautifully written!!! I feel sad to c this FF finish!!! I am gonna miss this Maan and Geet!!!

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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#299

LOVED IT
what a mind blowing ending !

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#300

sameera killed dev kamini finally maneet going to marry ek epilogue bhi

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