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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesum and terrific update...
its the first tym i m seeing a kiss without kissing..
That was so beautiful...
Cupid is hitting its arrow one by one without any intervals! Waiting 4 next..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for your love and support dear friends.I hope each one of u enjoys reading the update😛

Many Maahi moments is in store for you'll in the future updates including passionate ones 😳

love-Piya

PART 12

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Maan: (thinking) Tumne mujhe bhooka rakha na ab dekhna Geet main tumhe khila khilakar pareshan karunga'ab khel khelne ki baari meri hai [U starved me now wait and watch Geet I will trouble u my making u eat'It's my time to play the game now]

He continued to eat the salad as his brain started making a devilish plan to trouble his Angel oops I mean the Angel who was his biggest enemy right now

Geet left for her newspaper office cursing Maan from the depth of her heart for his sweet behaviour which was making her crazy and forcing her to lose control on herself

Geet: Geet khud par kabu rakh aur apne mission par dhyan de ab chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye tujhe Maan ki taraf apne iss jhukav ko rokhna padega samjhi tu [Geet control yourself dear and concentrate on your mission, u need to control this stupid and weird feeling of yours that u get whenever Maan comes in front of u did u get that?]

Geet made a promise that from now onwards she won't allow herself to get affected with the killing charms of Maan

She entered her office and kept herself busy throughout the day in some or the other work

It was evening and Maan was ready with his plan

He messaged Geet and informed her that they are going out for a dinner date to celebrate a special occasion

Geet wrapped up her work and managed to reach KM before Maan's arrival, she dressed herself quickly as she wanted to avoid all the possible sources that would add fire to their proximity

Maan had successfully killed the romantic devil that was haunting his senses from morning and now he was back in his typical MSK mood who wanted to take revenge

Maan: Abhi dekhna Geet jab gulab jamun badla lene ke liye maidan mein utarta hai toh mirchi ki kya haalat hothi hai [Now u will understand Geet what happens when Gulab jamun enters the battlefield to take revenge from green chilli]

He entered his room and dressed quickly.

Maan also wanted to avoid the romantic spark between them hence instead of entering her room he texted her and informed her that he is waiting in the living room

Geet took her purse and stepped out of her room

Geet: Maan

Oh her voice was seductive and had a strange captivating magic in it, Maan's heart started racing rapidly when he heard his name from her mouth

Maan: (thinking) Nahi Maan ye toh chahthi hi hai tujhe apne isharo mein nachana par agar tujhe sharth jeetni hai toh tujhe isse apne katilaana andaaz se ghayal karna padega toh utar jaa maidan mein aur nikal apna bramaasstra aur ghayal kar de isse ek hi vaar mein[No Maan this is what she wants, yes she wants u to dance on her tunes but if u need to win this bet then u need to be the dominant player. Common Maan use your best weapon to woo her make her go weak in her knees its time that u use your killer charm]

He knew Geet would be looking gorgeous but today he was prepared and moreover he was in his real MSK mood and was ready to go for the kill

He turned to face Geet with a smirk on his face, his eyes were intense and passionate and without wasting a second he locked his eyes with her mirrors making her totally insane with his one killer look

Oh Geet had not expected this; she was paralysed with one look of Maan

Butterflies were moving in her stomach as her heart started fluttering making it evident that's Maan's plan had worked

The muscles of her thighs started tightening as Maan started approaching her seductively

His eyes were full of dark desires and had an evil spell in them no wonder Geet had lost all her wits

Without breaking the eye contact Maan allowed his hand to rest on her waist and continued his seductive torture by allowing his fingers to linger around her se*y spine

Whatever little bit of life was left in her vanished with this one touch of Maan, her heart had already accepted defeat in from of this se*y magician but now her brains had also laid down their weapons as his name was running like blood in her whole body

He caressed her face sensually with his rough stubble driving her crazy; all her resolutions of not getting affected by Maan were shattered into pieces within a matter of seconds

She was not only getting affected but now she had started to respond to his touch

She didn't even realize when she parted her lips giving him an open invitation to claim them

Oh this invitation was too tempting for Maan but right now he was on a mission and he had anticipated this reaction from Geet as he was super confident of his effect on women

He moved his lips very close to her petals making her chest to rise and fall in a rhythmic fashion

Oh she was waiting for him to leave his mark on her rosy lips; she could feel his warm and demanding breath on her sensitive skin

But our se*y murderer was way too smart, he was not in a mood to murder her but he was in a mood to give a sweet dose of torture

He brushed his lips gently and placed a kiss on her cheeks leaving her unsatisfied and incomplete

Maan: Geet neend aa rahi hai kya iss tarah aakhein band karke kahdi kyun ho? Hum dinner ke liye late ho rahe hai [Geet r u feeling sleepy why have u closed ur eyes? We r getting late for dinner]

He left her waist and moved few steps behind making her feel rejected

He stood there with a victorious smirk on his face laughing at her condition

Geet opened her eyes and started cursing her foolish behaviour

She knew she was getting affected by him but he was not supposed to know that'Oh she had given him a chance to win

But she was a smart girl and without meeting his gaze she continued

Geet: Haan wo kya haina thoda thak gayi hoon, chalo jaldi se dinner kar lethe hai taaki ghar aakar amin aaram kar saku [Yes I am tired common lets go for dinner and come back fast so that I can gift myself some rest]

Maan: (thinking) Aaj toh tum aaram karne se rahi Geet ab dekhna dinner ke baad tumhara kya haal hotha hai [Bid goodbye to rest Geet just wait and watch what will be ur condition after the dinner]

Maan gives her a sweet smile and requests her to get into the car

Maaneet are silent throughout the drive

Finally they reach their destination; it was one of the biggest restaurants of Delhi

Like a true gentleman Maan welcomes his Angelic enemy and makes her comfortable on a chair in a romantic fashion

Any girl would die in front of his charm but Geet was now careful and was trying her level best to remain calm

Maan calls the waiter and orders all the famous dishes of the restaurant

Geet: Maan itna sab order karne ki kya zarurat hai tumhe nahi lagta ke khana waste hoga? [Maan what's the need to order so amny dishes don't u think that it might result in unnecessary wastage?]

Maan: Geet ye galat hai [Geet this is wrong]

Geet: Kya galat hai Maan? Main samjhi nahi [What's wrong Maan? Sorry I didn't get u]

Maan caressed her face lovingly with his hand and once again whishpered huskily sending an electric current throughout her system

Maan: Geet tum bhi na khud ka bilkul khayal nahi rakhti dekho kya haalat bana di hai tumne apni par ab aur nahi main hoon na tumhara khayal rakhne ke liye aur mere rehte tum khud ko aur nuksaan nahi pauchaogi [Geet u don't take care of yourself just have a look what a tragic condition u r in but now I won't allow this to happen any longer I am there to take care of u there is no need to torture yourself any more]

Geet was going crazy first off all Maan's proximity was not helping her and secondly she was unable to understand the meaning of his words

Maan: Geet dekho tum mera kitna khayal rakhti ho meri dieting karwa rahi ho ab mera bhi toh farz banta hai k tumhe palko par bitakar rakhu dekho main nahi chahta k MSK ki girlfriend ko koi chalta hua kankal bulaye iss liye aaj se tum khoob peth bhar kar khana khaya karogi [Geet u care for me so much and its because of your care that I have started dieting now its my duty to shower u with equal care I don't want people to say that MSK's girlfriend is a walking skeleton from now onwards u will eat without any restrictions]

Before Geet could say anything the waiter arrives and starts placing different heavy dishes on the table

Maan was quick he took one dish and offered her the food

Geet was feeling embarrassed as she couldn't refuse Maan in front of so many people and moreover since this was a VIP restaurant she knew many of the people who were present over there at that time

Maan had played his game perfectly; his sweetness was a perfect weapon against Geet

Geet had no option but to accept his offer with a smile, she thought maybe after this Maan will allow her to eat on her own and once this happens she will use some pretext and will turn the tables easily

But our devil Maan had already read the thoughts of his angelic enemy

Maan: Aaj toh main tumhe khud apne haatho se khilaunga wo bhi har ek niwala [Today I will feed every piece of these dishes to u with my own hands]

Geet tried to protest by making a weak excuse

Geet: Maan agar tumne mujhe ye khana khilaya toh tum khud kaise khaoge? [Maan if u continue to feed me like this then how will u have ur food?]

Maan: Geet main dieting pe hoon bhul gayi aur waise bhi mujhe toh salad hi khana hai aur wo toh main ghar jaakar bhi kha saktha hoon ye dinner toh maine khaas tumhare liye arrange ki hai [Geet I am on dieting dear and I just have to eat salads and I can have them at our residence as well. I have arranged this dinner especially for u ]

Geet was trapped in her own plan and Maan was 4 steps ahead today as he was not allowing her to think he continued to feed her till the point when she finally felt that her stomach will burst open

Maan: Geet ab sweetdish ki bari hai [Geet it is time for the sweetdish dear]

Geet almost pleaded in front of him

Geet: Maan kya aap chahthe hai ke mujhe Diabeties ho jaaye nahi na toh kya aap iss sweetdish ko side mein rakh sakthe hai? [Maan do u want me to suffer from Diabeties, no na then pls keep this sweet dish aside]

Maan's heart was jumping and dancing in victory as he had taken a proper revenge from Geet for starving him

He was satisfied with his punishment but decided to give her one last trouble

Maan: Geet abse har raat hum yahi dinner ke liye aayenge aur main tumhe yuhi apne haatho se khana khilaunga isse tumhari sehet ka dhyan main rakh paaunga aur meri dieting ka khayal tum rakh sakogi [Geet from now onwards we will have dinner every night in a similar fashion and I will make it a point to feed u every night so that I can take care of ur health and similarly u can take care of my dieting]

Geet: Nahi [no]

Maan somehow managed to control his laughter

Geet: Mera matlab hai ke aapki sehet ekdum perfect hai Maan aur aapko dieting karne ki zarurat nahi rahi baat meri sehet kitoh wo ghar k khane se bhi thik ho sakthi hai haina? [I mean Maan u need not continue your dieting u r perfect and as far as my health is considered then I can manage it with the homemade food as well right?]

Maan: (thinking) Ab aayi seedhe raste pe [Here she comes back on track]

Maan: I guess u r right Geet so shall we leave?

Geet nodded her head in approval

Maan payed the bill and started walking towards the car

Geet was following him with great difficulty

Maan was pleased with the success of his plan until he heard a scream

His heart skipped a beat as he recognized the scream; it was the scream of his enemy who now appeared as his ANGEL'an ANGEL who was an integral part of his heart'his Geet😳

PRECAP 1: Geet closed her eyes as she allowed her heart to get the feel of his touch'every touch of his made her feel beautiful'😳

PRECAP 2: Jealous Maan but what can be the reason maybe this is the reason behind his jealousy😉

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PART 13: Page 31

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
amazing update...
lvd it alot...

maneet attracted towards eachother...bt still cant stop troubling eachother...

continue soon...


edit...

wow i commented for part 11 bt in return became the frst one to comment on part 12...
will comment on prt 12 once i hv read it...
Edited by Ash1991 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
wow amazin update luvd it
cnt w8 4 da nxt part plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Amazing going and precap sounds interesting .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
awsome prt..koi bhook se pareshn koi khane se...😆
lovely prt...n waiatng 4 jealos maan ab ksg jaisa hottiee hoga to cmpetition to tough h
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
funny revenge.Precap seems 2 b interesting Geet with Karan.so cool
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Yaar piya tu DMG ka update kab degi this update was amazing a perfect revenge
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Superb Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM

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