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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for your love and support dear friends.Here is the next update do let me know about your thoughts regarding the invisible thing that I have included in this update😉

Many Maahi moments is in store for you'll 😳

love-Piya

PART 11

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It was strange first their closeness used to affect them but now the distances were also reminding them about each other

Destiny was smiling at their restnessless as it had sowed the correct seed of oneness in their hearts through this first kiss that both of them had shared'A kiss which would remain close to their hearts till the last breath of their life

The sunbeams proudly dispersed its radiance in all directions indicating the happiness of the universe on its victory

It was indeed a victory for the God of love "The Cupid" as Maaneet were slowly getting defeated in the game that Destiny had laid in front of them

Destiny decided to use its next weapon to bind these two opposite poles into a bond of Love

It was strange but their so called Challenge had already entered the territory of Love where they were destined to become soulmates

Destiny's next weapon was "CARE"

Cupid was all ready with its bow to leave this magical arrow on Maaneet but destiny requested Cupid to wait till the evening as something special was going to take place tonight

Maan's meeting continued for a good amount of time which gave him a temporary excuse to suppress his newly found feelings for Geet (oops I mean Maan's Angel)

Geet forwarded her writeup to Meera via mail and requested her to fill in the blank spaces which she was unable to fill due the letter "M"

Meera was confused about the letter "M" but Geet somehow managed to convince her by giving her some silly reasons

It was lunch time now and Maan was hungry but not for food he was hungry to get a small glimpse of Geet

His mind was trying to deny this but deep in his heart he knew that this was the truth

Geet was restless as the blissful moment of their special kiss was haunting her mind and soul

She was so conscious about Maan's first touch that she had not taken water after that incident just because her heart denied her the permission to wash his mark from her lips

Oh why was it getting so difficult?

There were so many questions that were unanswered; she only knew one thing that she wanted to meet him now

But why was she so desperate to meet him? She had no clue but she wanted to see him and this was her basic necessity right now

Geet got a ray of hope when she saw Nakul packing lunch for Maan

Yes this was a perfect pretext of meeting him

Geet: Nakul tum kaha jaa rahe ho? [Nakul where r u going?]

Nakul: Maan Sir ka lunch driver ko dene jaa raha hoon [I am going to give the lunch box to the driver so that he can take it to Maan Sir]

Geet: Ye lunch box mujhe doh [Give that Lunch box to me]

Without waiting for a single minute Geet snatched the box from Nakul's hand making it clear that her decision was final

Nakul was totally confused and he kept on staring at Geet

Geet: Wo kya haina Maan dieting pe hai toh wo kya khathe hai iska dhyan toh mujhe rakhna hi padegana [Actually Maan is on a strict diet so it is my duty to monitor his eating habits]

Nakul: Par aap ye mujhe kyun bata rahi hai maine toh aapse kuch pucha hi nahi [But why r u giving me these explanations I never asked u anything]

Geet gives an irritated look as somewhere or the other she herself was unable to understand the reason behind her restlessness

Geet: Nakul abhi issi waqt jakar salad katkar lau aur Maan ke lunch box mein usse bhar doh [Nakul go and get some salad and fill it in this lunch box]

Nakul: Par Geet Madam tiffin mein salad already hai [But Mam the tiffin already has salad in it]

Geet: Oh that's great

She took the lunch box and marched out of the house and ordered the driver to take her to KC

Khurana Constructions

As soon as Geet stepped out of the car she tried to control her racing heart beats and started taking taking slow steps so that she would appear calm and composed in front of Maan

She didn't wished to leak out this secret in front of Maan that she was desperate to meet him for reasons which were alien to her at this point of time

Meanwhile,

Dev enters Maan's cabin

Dev: Lagta hai phir se Angel ka bhooth iss par sawar ho gaya hai dekho kaise uss khidki ki taraf apne nazre taake baitha hai [It seems the ghost of his Angel is again haunting him; he is constantly staring that window as if it is something precious]

Maan was visualizing Geet's face in the blinds of the window and a small idea was blooming in his heart

Dev placed his hand on Maan's shoulder and started singing in a terrible voice

Dev: Jaago Maan pyare jaago Jaago [Wake up dear Maan wake up]

Maan's beautiful dream got disturbed due to Dev's interference

Maan: Dev ye kya kar raha hai? [Dev what r u trying to do?]

Dev: Shukr hai tujhe mera naam toh yaad hai warna mujhe toh darr tha kahi tu phir se mujhe Angel na bula baithe [Thank God atleast u remember my name or else I had this fear that maybe u will once again call me your Angel]

Maan: Shakal dekhi hai apni aaine mein? Aur waise bhi main tujhe bata duh MSK aisa waisa nahi hai, I mean I am straight [Have u seen ur face in the mirror and by the way let me make myself clear I don't have any wrong habits, I mean I am straight]

Dev: Oh Hello main bhi straight hi hoon wo toh tu hi subah se mujhe dekhar Angel Angel kiye jaa raha tha [Oh Hello I also belong to the straight category infact u were the one who was singing Angel Angel from the morning whenever u saw me]

Maan: Main tujhe nahi main toh Gee'[ I was not reffering to u, it was for Gee..]

Dev: Caught u

Maan bit his tongue and started looking here and there

Dev: Bol bol rukh kyun gaya main toh pehle hi jaanta tha k tu Geet ke baare mein baat kar raha tha [Continue why did u stop? I knew it u were talking about Geet from the beginning]

Geet opens the door and enters Maan's cabin

Geet: Lagta hai koi badi shidat se hume yaad kar raha tha [It looks like someone was remembering me with a lot of intensity]

As soon as their eyes meet they once again enter a state of trance

Maan lost all his control and the happiness on his face was making it evident how much he had missed Geet, Geet too lost her cool and calm attitude as her chest started moving in a rhythmic pattern just by looking at those soul penetrating eyes of Maan

Dev: Huh huh

Maaneet break their eyelock and Maan opens a file and pretends to read it

Geet: Are Dev kaise ho tum? [Hey Dev how r u?]

Dev: Perfectly fine Geet. Tum batau tum kaisi ho aur yaha wo bhi lunch box lekar? [Perfectly fine Geet. How r u and what r u doing here with this lunch box?]

Maan was trying to steal glances of Geet through the file

Dev noticed this and snatched the file from Maan

Dev: Are Maan file ko ulte kaise padthe hai iski practice tu baadmein bhi karsaktha hai filhaal teri girlfriend tere liye lunch lekar aayi hai tu uspar concentrate kar [Maan u can practice your new obsession of reading afile in an upward down manner later on, right now u should concentrate on your girlfriend look she has got lunch for u]

Maan wanted to kill Dev but right now he was helpless

He couldn't afford to lose control and make Geet realize that she had a strong influence on him

Maan: Geet tumhe ye takleef lene ki kya zarurat thi? [Geet u shouldn't have taken this pain]

Geet: Kaise nahi lethi subah wali baat aap bhul gaye kya? [Why shouldn't I have u forgotten the morning incident?]

Maan moved his gaze to her lips as soon as he heard this line from Geet

He started grazing the curve of her mouth with his deep, dark sensual eyes

Geet drank her saliva as she could feel the muscles around her thighs tightening with the seductive and teasing looks of Maan

Maan fixed his gaze at the partition of her lips and realized that her lips were pink but swollen

Oh'his mark was still there

He moved his tongue around his lips in a pretext to gel them from their dryness, Geet's pulse leapt to a quickened beat as she sensed his touch on her petals through this action of his

He moved his eyes in a passionate and demanding fashion from the the corner of her lower lip to the tip of her upper lip each time making sure to open and close the partition of his lips gracefully

It seemed that he was relishing every inch of her soft and sensitive appealing lips by giving her open mouth invisible smooches

Her heart was moaning his name in pleasure whereas her mind was trying to control her moans so that they do not escape the boundaries of her throat

Maan parted his lips slightly thus exposing the tip of his tongue, Geet's chest moved in a beautiful manner as she accepted his invitation by showing him a small portion of her tongue

They drank their saliva as if indicating to one another that the battle of their tongues has started

The passion was building in their eyes thus driving their desires to an animalistic level

A magnetic force was attracting them and was signaling them to give their invisible kiss a realistic turn

Maan got up from his chair and Geet too started walking towards him

Both of them were in a trance of wild desire and raw passion

They were still sailing in the ship of their deep passionate invisible kiss when once again Dev stopped them from reaching their destination as he took their names on top of his voice

Dev: (shouting) Maan'Geet'

Oh their invisible kiss was left incomplete due to Dev's foolishness

Dev: Ye tum dono aatmao ki tarah kaha chal rahe ho? [Why r u both walking like ghosts?]

Maan and Geet had no reply

Dev: Chalo yaar lunch karte hai [Common guys lets have lunch]

He takes the tiffin from Geet's hands and opens the box

Dev: Wow yaar the lunch looks delicious

Maaneet do not give any reply as for them their invisible kiss was the most delicious dish they had ever tasted, this food was nothing in front of it

Dev: Waise Geet tum subahwali kaunsi baat kar rahi thi? [By the way Geet what was the incident that u were talking about?]

Geet: Wo'haan Maan ki dieting [Oh yes it was about Maan's dieting]

Dev: Maan diet pe hai toh ye khana kyun? [This is not a diet food]

Geet separates the contents and places the bowl having salad in front of Maan

Geet: Ye khana humare liye hai aur salad wala daba Maan ke liye, haina Maan? [This tiffin is for us and the salad box is for Maan, right Maan?]

This statement of Geet was enough to bring Maan back to his real self

Geet was also back to her mission of troubling Maan

Maan gave her a sweet smile and took the salad and started eating it

Maan: (thinking) Tumne mujhe bhooka rakha na ab dekhna Geet main tumhe khila khilakar pareshan karunga'ab khel khelne ki baari meri hai [U starved me now wait and watch Geet I will trouble u my making u eat'It's my time to play the game now]

He continued to eat the salad as his brain started making a devilish plan to trouble his Angel oops I mean the Angel who was his biggest enemy right now

PRECAP: Geet closed her eyes as she allowed her heart to get the feel of his touch...every touch of his made her feel beautiful'😳

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Love-Piya


PART 12: Page 20

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
OMG their restlessness and their invisible kiss maar hi daal wallah hai wallah..loved the update
precap is 😉
Thanks for PM
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Awesum and terrific update...
its the first tym i m seeing a kiss without kissing..
That was so beautiful...
Cupid is hitting its arrow one by one without any intervals!!!
Loved dev's dialogs...
Adipoli mole...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
wow dear
again fight now
waiting dear
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
thnx 4 pm


salad ..oh poor man


precap-i see


do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
wow superb mindblowing update.
invisible kiss...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
suprbb yaar
lvd it..
ye dev b na har baar beech aa jata hai..😆😆😆
aive hi dono ki invisible kiss rok di omg..🤣🤣🤣
bt yaar dono j;ldi apne dramland se bahar aa gye..😆precap- 😳😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Crazy,mad. Invsbl kiss v itna passionate hote hai malum nei tha.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Awesome update loved it
Haye Maaneet invisible kiss was mindblowing
Pls contionue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
oh their love is so evident bt dey wont accept
loved der invisible kiss!! guess it wud hv bcm visible if it wasnt for dev!! lol
awesm updt
waiting 4 more..!!

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