To Sir, With Love(3) - COMPLTD - Page 83

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

Ok blame my 'new' subject and not me for this shit! I have no life right now and yeah I don't have better things to do!!

Cartoon board of Kay Cey!

MSK

Currently reading : NoLight Series : The Cracking Lawn

I'm a devil during the day and I weep in the dark and that's the reason I need someone to sleep with me ,someone who can swim in the pool of my tears!

Fav magazine : Lime.

He was declared as the Un-necessary Over-achiever construction daddy by Lime magazine once upon time, which he loved and had instantly fallen in love with the magazine and made this the motto of his life. For him ,Lime is Money!

Geet

Currently reading : Mad on Small things

Leave bigger problems to the nature and deal with the smaller problems , find out Sasha's favourite magazine , fav place ,fav colour ,fav dish and avoid all of them...Errmmm...what about Sasha's fav man?? ("B***h please..It's not a small problem!" )

Fav magazine : Gemina (b'coz she is a Woman! Duh! )

Dev

Currently reading : NoLight series : The New Sun (Invisible)

This beta was happily dancing about the newly-found sunrise in his life when he was hardly hit by the reality ,he fell into a deep shit!

Magazine : The InLook

He gets to experience the shit from inside the Key Cey!

Readers : The S--ty shades of Grey! (Advanced version of NoLight series)

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The maker of the post is now glued due to his pathetic cartoon sense ,so the case is now pending in the boat!

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Let's see what the postmaker has to say about this pending case!

Duh! Talk to the hand!

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

You will find my comment fragmented and often not linked to any particular part of the story...

What to do...ever since Maan asked Geet to "destroy" Sasha, I have been trying not to read this story anymore. I drafted many comments on why that is justified, yet havent posted any of them here. Some got lost and in some my thoughts were unfinished. Yet, I will say what I want today on however old the update is, since that is the better thing to do to pacify my mind.

The scenario asking Geet to destroy Sasha dropped Maan to the lowest point of respect for any character I have ever had. I think of him as no more than a sissy, who cant fight his own battles and asks an innocent uncontriving girl to do that for him without any background or backup. I repeat, my heart holds no more respect for him.Infact, the chapters that followed have just pushed his impression further down, if possible. And yes, I would say its impossible to continue reading a story when you have lost respect for the protagonist, however "different" the story might claim to be.

Dont get me wrong, I have read stories where Maan-the character, has committed severe mistakes, but the writer has tried to wrap that up in a small number of updates. Here I dont see that coming either. So basically, that means months of frustration that I can do without.

In both above points, pls know, that its nothing about you, its just about me.

However, I continue reading still from time to time since your storytelling is very catching. And I like Dev. If there is one person whom I have grown to love in this story, its him. I accept fully Geet's hand in bringing out the real him and what a wonderful simple character he's been - a true friend. If this is the real him, then this is one character you should feel proud of for creating.I also want to find out what is Tara after exactly after all the mystery that you have created around her.

Your flair for conversation and humor is also praiseworthy. The conversations are worded very well though the subject in many of these convos remain hazy.Please believe that nothing here is directed at you, but your story and characterisation. I have many positives to say about you, however maybe here I have penned mainly the negatives of the story that come to my mind. Your story flows according to your plot, but sometimes the sequences get jumbled up in my head. That is, after reading a particular convo or event, if I think about the previous updates, sometimes its difficult to remember what exactly had happened after what.

More coming later...

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

You know what Sasha and Maan are perfect couple. Both are perverts. Why don't they get married to each other so that they can quench their thirst for sex. Bloody morons.

Originally posted by: glassdoor

You just hate me, don't you? 😃

Don't worry. Many people do.

Bring it on girl, and no need to sugarcoat it the next time...

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

I'll skip what everything happened midway and come to the latest one.

I read many comments and second them. I know Maan feels for Geet for sure. But Maan wants to sleep with Geet while he is engaged to Sasha and without properly naming their relationship even though he knows what pain she is going through. And is he really going to do "anything" ? Is he really trying to be the man that Geet wants him to be? Well this ofcourse disproves it.

Again, finally Geet could only use feminine charms to get at him? I had thought so much of her. She's fair in wanting a few victories to handle a few insecurities.I hope this doesnt just last one day.

If this is true, did Maan bend to such charms of Sasha earlier? Is all this downfall an outcome of that? And what about charms of all the girls that contributed to his reputation?

If thats true, so much for the image of MSK ! Well that doesnt make him much of a man to love.

So much for now...I hope you take a moment to ponder over a few points I told you in last comment.

Originally posted by: glassdoor

Ponder! Darling I live and breathe this story so much that I am worried about myself now

I am sitting in office and supposed to be hard at work. And I am typing all this. 😆

And by the way I love you...you have so much spunk and attitude...absolutely love that