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Sheesh

@glassdoor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#801

Originally posted by: mollycoddle
one point i needed to make clear is i have no issue with grey characters or infact a shade deeper than the grey, but what am not able to digest is that the base and the circumstances designed to show how much the characters are vulnerable, prone to mistakes, commit blunders when it comes to assessing people,their imperfections, are very abrupt and jerky spoiling the continuity and consistency of the story and characters...under no circumstances would i want u to tweak the story for reader's sake, but ensure that the story doesnt go for twists and sudden u turn in the character's behavior in an abrupt fashion...lay the base and take it slow, so that we dont feel the pinch to see the characters behaving weirdly all of a sudden...without any prelude...

Ok now I am not going to listen to you 😆

You and others have given me this comment many times before. In fact people want to kill me now. And they are thinking of innovative ways to do that. Scary stuff.

I am going to stick to my guns here...sorry about that sweetheart. Go ahead, shoot me!

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maneetloveu

@maneetloveu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#802

Nice one. Now i realy doubt maan love geet or not how can he ask sleep with him just like that. Maneet conv is nice where geet become tigress. Till now geet supported maan like a soldier i realy wish to see them as opponents no doubt geet wil win. Lastly geet asking sasha whether she is woman or not and the ans omg funny. Final conclu loved it.

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-Crayon-

@-Crayon-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#803

Originally posted by: yash21
Hi sheesh.. heya namru
today i am reserving with handkerchief 😉
will comment first..

OMG !! such a long update and so many emotions.. need little time to absorb everything..

OMG!!!! *hyperventilates* OMG!!!! *jumps with excitement*

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-Crayon-

@-Crayon-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#804

Originally posted by: yash21

Yeah I did not no that with out commenting I would get famous.. All thanks to namru ❤️ on this..
he he..
Wish i could.. no its my birth date.. 😆

You don't know! I'm a huge silent fan of yours!

I have always dreamt of quoting your posts and here I go...all my dreams are coming true these days! 😃

Love you ! 🤗

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-Crayon-

@-Crayon-

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#805

OMG...so many heated arguments ,running , jumping emotions and what not! I don't understand all these emotions much !! So I can't speak about them! Simple! But I can dedicate this music piece which is one of my most favorites and this theme still gives me goosebumps sometimes!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bNrVFkBDte8[/YOUTUBE]

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#806

Superb update..
So geet realized her womanly power..
At first maan dint show his sexual desire for geet..
But nw its getting intense and geet with her womanly power ignored him actually pished him out...
His hide and seek s making her angrier every minute and she started to react violently..
But i think this violent manner s needed to destroy sasha...
sasha loves to read sports magazines...thats b/c she loves to play games with others..i think sumtyms maan s using her to destroy sasha..
b/c he very well knows a woman s perfect in destroying an other woman...

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saswati_2008

@saswati_2008

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#807

Superb update.. one of the best story I have ever read...cant wait to read more n more of it..

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#808

Oh that was the reason He is using Geet to destroy Sasha.. Because everthing woman can share but not her love.. but maan she can use you to destroy sasha... Woh kya kahete hai... Aurat ke kaabileeyat par kabhi shaq nahi karana chahiye...😉 Thank U for listening my bakbak.. Babaji mujhe ab sara sakshatkar ho gaya..😆