MG ff - Her Bitter fate Thread 2 link @ Pg 151 - Page 64

Originally posted by: billy_ritu

awesome

Originally posted by: ana56

amazing update dear
i love the bond maaneet shares
they r made for each other
u r putting their feelings in ur words beautifully
keep up the good work and continue soon dear

Originally posted by: chavvi16

wow that was beautiful especially when geet said that he is taking her aatma with him as only her sharrer will stay back
nooo they will be separated soon thats bad why does it have to happen
their first kiss so beautiful again
infact the whole ff of yours is beautiful haiyye
oh no precap seems bit dangerous to channi na and eventually our geet
cheers for pm

Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Monika 🤗...thank u for the awesome update and PM...no words left...first Maaneet kiss...the way u described it was so beautiful 😍...just scared what will happen when Maan leaves...how painful will this separation be for them...plz continue...TC 😊

Originally posted by: spvd

part 21
lovely part...
so Maan has confessed his feelings...

Originally posted by: rubinahansa

Superb

Originally posted by: spvd

part 22
nice part...
but hope Geet tells him the marriage thing...
cont soon dear...

Part 23

They parted after long time. She was not able to look him. She moved back but he dint let her go. He pulled her to him helding her waist. She landed on his chest. Struggled again to be released but maan tightened his grip. She looked him with little fake anger. Pouted her lips and turned her face. He smiled. Cupped her chin and made her look him. She was still showing her baby anger turning her face other side. " mishty " she heard and looked him with confused eyes. He moved her eyes directing to her as saying "only you" sirf tum geet. you are my mishty, my jaan, my angel.. She smiled with her wet eyes, looking him, writing her whole life to his name...

tere naam se jee loon tere naam se marr jaaun,

teri jaan ke sadke mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun

tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main

ho ri ha ri ho gayi main teri deewani deewani

They were hugging each other lost in each other arm. Geet was feeling sleepy. She closed her eyes. maan understood. He lifted her. She kept her arm around his neck move closer to him. He took her in her room and lied her down on bed. She cuddled in bed. He kissed her forehead, looked her lovingly for sometime and left.

ishq junoon jab hadh se badh jaaye , haste haste aashiq suli chadh jaaye

ishq ka jaadu sara chadha kara bole, khoob laga lo pehre raste rab khole

Next day geet woke up smiling. It was new day for her. Her life starts from today. She prayed to babaji, took her duppatta and went to balcony. Where she deepened yesterday geet to maan ki geet. She had no existence for herself from today. She was his.

yahi ishq di marzi hain yahi rab di marzi hain,tere bin jeena kaisa haan khudgarzi hai

tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main,ho ri ha ri ho gayi main teri deewani

maan was in garden talking on phone. She looked him. He was busy in talking. She was starring her maan lovingly. How he is standing, how he keeps his hand in pocket, how his every gesture describes his authority on everything n everyone. She was observing him first time. Its her right now, only her. She was loving his every posture. She was his deewani .

he main rang rangeeli deewani, ke main albeli main mastani

gaaun bajaaun sabko rijhaaun,

he main deen dhram se begaani, ke main deewani main deewani

She turned and found maan was standing there keeping mischief and desire in his eyes, looking her fondly. She smiled, shied, looked down. She tried to leave from there but he held her dupatta from behind. Her dupatta slipped from shoulder, she kept her hand on her front felt embarrassed. He came from behind and kept her dupatte on her head like veil. She overwhelmed. Turned to him and hugged.

tere naam se jee loon, tere naam se marr jaaun

tere jaan ke sadle mein, kuchh aaisa kar jaaun

tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main

ho ri ha ri ho gayi main teri deewani deewani

He kissed her head, hugged her tight and said "I Love you Mishty ". She smiled and hided her face in him became his wholly.

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Brij came home thinking about who could be there. He looked at earring. Suddenly geet came from front collided him hard. She was running from maan who was teasing her and she didn't notice brij. Earring dropped from his hand . geet got scared. She picked earring and gave to him when she noticed it was of channi's.

Geet- ye toh channi ki earring hai. Veerji aapke paas kaise aayi" brij looked her shocked.

Brij- oyee kuch nahi, tu apna kaam kar jaake. " he glared her and shouted. Geet left from there.

"hmm.. toh ye earring channi ki hai. He called Shankar(channi brother) and told everything.

Shankar ' aap fikar na karo praji.. mai dekhta hu uss channi ko. He went to channi and asked her. She gets hell scared knowing his violent nature. She started cry and accepted everything except geet name as geet was her best friend. She made some random excuse why she went there in desert. Shankar got hell angry. He slapped her and locked her in room. He called brij and told everything.

Brij- hmm thik hai. Sunn..usse bahar mat nikalne dena. Mai sochta hu kya karna hai .

Shankar- thik hai praji

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At night

Maaneet was lost in their dream world. Maan was lying in her lap, closing his eyes. in geet balcony.she was caressing his hair.

Geet ' maan

Maan ' hmm

Geet- aap wapas kab aaoge.

Maan looked her . jab tum meri dulhan banogi tab"

she shied. " who toh ab mai jaldi banugi na"

"achha !!! aur who kab "

"kyu ..aapko nahi pata

"kya nahi pata geet"

"kuch nahi'she removed his head from her lap and started running from there. Giggling laughing.

"geett..geettt suno toh ..kya nahi pata mujhe haan..maan followed her teasing.

In all geet dint realized she crossed brij room. Some weird words caught her steps going further. Brij was talking on phone to Shankar.

Brij ' Shankar.. kaam hua

Shankar- jii praji ..bas aaj raat ho jaayega.. Jo haal uss mohan ka kiya wahi haal uska ka bhi hoga. Aap fikar na karo. And he cut the call.

Geet heard everything and but couldn't understand whom he was talking about. She dint know that person whose life she had saved was mohanlal. So she left from there knowing if brij would see her she would have landed into great danger.

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They parted after long time. She was not able to look him. She moved back but he dint let her go. He pulled her to him helding her waist. She landed on his chest. Struggled again to be released but maan tightened his grip. She looked him with little fake anger. Pouted her lips and turned her face. He smiled. Cupped her chin and made her look him. She was still showing her baby anger turning her face other side. " mishty " she heard and looked him with confused eyes. He moved her eyes directing to her as saying "only you" only you geet. you are my mishty, my jaan, my angel.. She smiled with her wet eyes, looking him, writing her whole life to his name...

tere naam se jee loon, tere naam se marr jaaun

teri jaan ke sadke mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun

tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main

ho ri ha ri ho gayi main teri deewani deewani

They were hugging each other lost in each other arm. Geet was feeling sleepy. She closed her eyes. maan understood. He lifted her. She kept her arm around his neck move closer to him. He took her in her room and lied her down on bed. She cuddled in bed. He kissed her forehead, looked her lovingly for sometime and left.

ishq junoon jab hadh se badh jaaye , haste haste aashiq suli chadh jaaye

ishq ka jaadu sara chadha kara bole, khoob laga lo pehre raste rab khole

Next day geet woke up smiling. It was new day for her. Her life starts from today. She prayed to babaji, took her duppatta and went to balcony. Where she deepened yesterday geet to maan ki geet. She had no existence for herself from today. She was his.

yahi ishq di marzi hain yahi rab di marzi hain,tere bin jeena kaisa haan khudgarzi hai

tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main,ho ri ha ri ho gayi mainteri deewani

maan was in garden talking on phone. She looked him. He was busy in talking. She was starring her maan lovingly. How he is standing, how he keeps his hand in pocket, how his every gesture describes his authority on everything n everyone. She was observing him first time. Its her right now, only her. She was loving his every posture. She was his deewani .

he main rang rangeeli deewani, ke main albeli main mastani

gaaun bajaaun sabko rijhaaun,

he main deen dhram se begaani, ke main deewani main deewani

She turned and found maan was standing there keeping mischief and desire in his eyes, looking her fondly. She smiled, shied, looked down. She tried to leave from there but he held her dupatta from behind. Her dupatta slipped from shoulder, she kept her hand on her front felt embarrassed. He came from behind and kept her dupatte on her head like veil. She overwhelmed. Turned to him and hugged.

tere naam se jee loon, tere naam se marr jaaun

tere jaan ke sadle mein, kuchh aaisa kar jaaun

tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main

ho ri ha ri ho gayi main teri deewani deewani

He kissed her head, hugged her tight and said "I Love you Mishty ". She smiled and hided her face in him accepting him wholly.

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Brij came home thinking about who could be there. He looked at earring. Suddenly geet came from front collided him hard. She was running from maan who was teasing her and she didn't notice brij. Earring dropped from his hand . geet got scared. She picked earring and gave to him when she noticed it was of channi's.

Geet- it's channi earring, where did you find veerji" brij looked her shocked.

Brij- oyeee.. you don't need to think. Go and do your work. " he glared her and shouted. Geet left from there.

"hmm.. so its channi earring". He called Shankar(channi brother) and told everything.

Shankar ' you don't worry praaji.. I will see thai channi". He went to channi and asked her. She gets hell scared knowing his violent nature. She started cry and accepted everything except geet name as geet was her best friend. She made some random excuse why she went there in desert. Shankar got hell angry. He slapped her and locked her in room. He called brij and told everything.

Brij- oyee.. don't let her go out of there. I think what to do with her .

Shankar- ok praji

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At night

Maaneet was lost in their dream world. Maan was lying in her lap, closing his eyes. in geet balcony. she was caressing his hair.

Geet ' maan

Maan ' hmm

Geet- when will you come back.

Maan looked her . when you ll be my bride"

she shied. " dat I ll become very soon na"

"really!! When geet ? "

"why.. don't you know

"what I don't know geet"

"nothing'she removed his head from her lap and started running from there. Giggling laughing.

"geett..geettt ..listen me..what I don't know haa...maan followed her teasing.

In all geet dint realized she crossed brij room. Some weird words caught her steps going further. Brij was talking on phone to Shankar.

Brij ' Shankar.. did u do what I told?

Shankar- jii praji ..will be done till tonight.. what have done to that mohan same will be do with her too. You don't worry prajee.. And he cut the call.

Geet heard everything and but couldn't understand whom he was talking about. She dint know that person whose life she had saved was mohanlal. So she left from there knowing if brij would see her she would have landed and into great danger.

Precap - Maan Leaving

(please forgive me )

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