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Posted: 13 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: myramabin
lovely update nd precap zabardast hai but it was too short

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beautiful update

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Posted: 13 years ago

#193

beautiful update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

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Posted: 13 years ago

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aww he wasnt able to hold the phone so she did it for him then totally got lost in the angel as he keeps calling geet so cute
oh good he told dadi where he was now she wont be too worried about where and how he is
geet doesnt want him to go and she was feeling bad that he will leave that even when maan called her she didnt hear him
waah aag toh dono jagah lagi hai
ab yeh kiss ka kya chakkar hai ji
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Posted: 13 years ago

#195

part 8
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#196

Originally posted by: love2_soma

beautiful update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

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Originally posted by: chavvi16
aww he wasnt able to hold the phone so she did it for him then totally got lost in the angel as he keeps calling geet so cute
oh good he told dadi where he was now she wont be too worried about where and how he is
geet doesnt want him to go and she was feeling bad that he will leave that even when maan called her she didnt hear him
waah aag toh dono jagah lagi hai
ab yeh kiss ka kya chakkar hai ji
thanx for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: honeygrape
awesome part/...continue soon

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mardej

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Posted: 13 years ago

#199

nice part...
update soon...
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MonaSWrites

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Posted: 13 years ago

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(Note-One thing I want to make you remember that geet still doesn't know maan is would be damad of this house and her would be husband. As when they had to tell her she was not available and after that everything went sudden, maan accident n all, so they forgot to tell her. And now they think that geet knows everything, who is he )

Part 9

Geet was panting, sweating, breathing, heavily. In agitation she closed eyes. She clutched her dupatta near chest to calm herself down but failed. She was still in those moments. It was something she again wanted to be in. She went to bed. Tried to sleep but this time she wanted to dream.. dream of her stranger . She knew her dream was only place where she wouldn't have any restrictions.

There maan was no less. He tried to make himself understand that he was Maan Singh Khurana but it was no use. His heart was his foe this time. It wanted to accept what his mind did not. He wanted to dream her, to be with her, to feel her again. With these wishes he drifted in deep sleep.Both dint know what babaji had in store for them.

Maan was sleeping. He was in pain. So much pain. He was tossing, groaning being restless.. Suddenly he felt peace. He opened his eyes but it was dark. He couldn't see anything but he could feel. It was she, his angel. Even in dark he could feel her. Her every movement making him feel of heaven. Feel of her beautiful natural smell making him better. Feel of her twinkling sound of her jumkis making him in peace. Feel of her giggling bangles making him relax. Feel of her soft small steps making him calm. Everything of her taking him in new world of desire and passion which were hidden from him till now. He wanted to be there, in her world. Wanted to feel her everything. her every assets. Wanted to be close to her heart listing her musical heartbeats. wanted to embrace her in his secure arm. He wanted her.

She was coming close. More close. In his closed eyes he was feeling her, guessing her clearly. He knew, She sat on floor beside him. He knew Her hand is moving up now, he guessed. Everything he guessed right. She touched his forehead. Checking was it warm now? No., not fever, she relieved. She caressed his hair lovingly looking him.

He looks like a prince, she smiled. Caressing forehead she came below. His cheek. It was rough yet smooth, she thought. She was softly slowly caressing his face. Suddenly maan shivered. He felt something very soft and warm on his forehead. Did she kiss me? Oo yes, she did. Omg it was magical, it was heaven. It was beyond words he could describe. He was still in his trace when again he felt her soft petals on his cheeks. He was blessed. She was showing her total care on him. He forgot his pain, his hurt. It was beautiful moment of his life. It was special wish from god which was being fulfilled with so much purity.

She was showing her complete right on him. She dint know it was right or wrong but she was doing. She wanted to touch him with complete authority, no one could stop her right now . Both were in complete spell of moment. They were close, their body, their soul were close, they wanted to capture those moments for ever. Geet kissed his eyes, cheeks, nose. Her warm smooth breath was falling on him.

Their lips were eager to feel each other. In her flow she kissed corner of his lips. It was magical, beyond any beautiful dream. Just one step and they would be one. She was going to remove this distance, when suddenlly she started going away. She was going far from his. Nooo' maan called out and in a jerk opened his eyes.

Geet hurriedly got up, sat on bed. Breathing heavily. Omg, what I saw, was I going to kiss him? She kept hand on her mouth." Nahi nahi babaji asa nahi ho sakta. Asa nahi ho sakta... please babaji." She was trying to calm her down; her heart was coming out with loud beat sound. She was still in shock. " ye mai kya karne jaa rahi thi, babaji" she was not able to think was it really she dreamt. She was in her thought when rano called her from outside.

"geeet "' geeet putter , darwaza khol beta" Rano called.

Geet opened door. " kitni der laga di beta. Aaj itni der tak so rahi thi ?? " now geet realized she 8 at morning and she was still sleeping which was unlike her habit.

" wo maa, raat me der se nind aayi isi'' " she couldn't complete her words she saw him. He was standing behind rano, smirking to her.

Precap : "Geet putter, aaj se maanji tumhare kamre me rahenge "

Kyaaa''

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Hope I m doing good

(m sorry i could not make updates longer now days as lots of work load is on my little shoulder. 😛 .. please forgive me, but i promise you ll get maha episodes inbetween 😆 )

Thank you very much for all lovely commentsss

Edited by geet.lover - 13 years ago

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