MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 5 - Page 67

Superb!!!!!!!!!!

Finally Maaneet are going to talk.And you are right about SR thing.

nice update .
pls update the next part soon ,i eagerly waiting to hear what Geet will tell Maan.

Awesome dear ...high drama ...

just loved it... waiting for maaneet talk.plz update soon.

oh i caught u before the PM😃
wonderfully emotional Update... Mohinder is a father that every girl shud have...the one who wants his daughters happiness...
A determined Maan fills me with hope...
yet wonder what geet is going to say...he has not acknowledged his love😕

me *taking a deep breath in...slowly leaving it out...ahhh*
wonderful update diii...
beautifully written...👏
i loved mohinder's convo with rano.and geet...
even after this...he allowed geet to choose rather than forcing the divorce on them..
i love that gesture..that shows how understanding he is!!!!!!!

and my fav part was the rain...where he realised how selflessly geet had done so much for him...
and bounced back even after falling down badly!!! its a great lesson he leaned from her and yes..it will help him to woo her back!!!!!!

yes u r right...go back to their sr wala chapter...u feel like strangling maan to death..😡
he has a lot to make up for all the pain she had hidden within her...
and the heartbreak she has suffered on their sr and still suffering just because she loves him madly!!!!
its high time they face each other and am really eager to know ke what will they talk and how..
and yes...i felt quite senti after reading the part where geet says she had forced the relationship on him and now wants to free him for his happiness...

am super duper glad maan understood her thoughts...but poor fella
has to win his family, her family and his wifey's heart!!!!😳
eagerly waiting for the next!!!!!!


and pheww my thanks to anu di...
me was ghode bech ke sleepipng di wen i got her text on vivah being updated😃
and actually ran to my systm half asleep throwing away my pyaara spread!!!!
and this is called pure and honest craziness for vivah...
we both are like this hehehehe😆

ritzyy dii love you so much for this ff!!! am madly in love with this!!!!
ohh one more thing...
u won't believe me blushed seeing my poem on the top
now me feeling like this
thank you sooo much diii🤗

Awesome, brilliant, beautiful part
loved it
loved geet's father, and brother's reaction
but in our society we got to see this reaction very less but still
I loved it
geet's mother also right in her view
as I said earlier all r right in their position and view
geet's view it's needed as she don't know right now what maan want from this relationship this marriage and she from her experience and view right in her position still I will say in her love geet took more than enough
understand geet's view fully
her love, care one side another side want just maan's happiness
and what an irony it's that now maan's happiness lying on geet and her sath and love

but all depends on maan now as he has to prove his wroth and his love to his family , geet's family and more importantly and mainly to geet
maan need this shock and his love, longing, craving all come out from this
maan went alone to clear his view
and he is now determined to bring back geet
but the welcome he received from geet's family also expected
as I said maan has to prove his worth now
waiting for maaneet's talk now
continue soon

awww thats great update...