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Posted: 13 years ago

hey she updated already
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

piya-, PrithviSanyo1, punam2712 '

Thanks dear. Indeed it is a new beginning and this is the phase where things will kind of reset for them so that they can start afresh. Thanks for your comments as they really help me in understanding if what I am writing is making sense or not.

shrutheAjay, neha5058 '

Yes there are multiple complex issues. Their past, Maan's new feelings, Geet's dream house and her insecurities. I am happy that you liked the update because it was really tough for me to balance the thoughts.

Remya_Pillai, JayaR, impoojaverma, swetha10, Tammana_Maaneet '

I know Piya is such a gifted poet. Yes, they have to move on consciously because they both want it and not because they are married. Glad you liked the update and thanks for commenting.

change12, ruchs, RaDMG25, sakshi.ekansh, honeygrape, cutemishti, preethia, khwaishfan, khushi1022, sweetysaran '

Yes all the hidden feelings have come out and now it is time to get some sanity back'or maybe not. Thanks dear for such lovely comments

Nivedithachand '

Thanks Dear for your so much praise. I try to draw from real life scenarios and experiences and I am glad you liked the realistic approach.

hinal_maaneet, valli22 , payalpari, Ash1991 '

Thanks dear for commenting. Yes it is time now for Maan to introspect and understand her a little better.

Maanhar '

Thanks for the comment. I think more than Daadi, they both need to understand each other better

angelic_cute, dumas, -memorable-, Diva7, --Ratna--, maanmeet1, jasminerahul, love2_soma, maneetlover1, Mishti13, maaneet5 '

Thanks Dear. It is time now for Maan to make her believe that he truly loves her

ruchshah '

Thanks dear. I know it was emotional for me too while writing'..yes she is going thru a lot of pain and Maan needs to understand and take that pain away

Anu (Hermoso) '

Loved your analysis Anu. Yes, they both were hurting and in pain and circumstances made them angry bringing out the pain. Let's see if now they understand each other better and are able to move ahead or not.

Anu (tellyme) '

Thanks dear. I hope this outburst will make them understand each other better'.keepings fingers crossed

Ash '

Oh dear, you don't know what a support you have been for me especially for last few chapters. And thanks for such a beautiful analysis. Yes, that was my intent. I don't only want Maan to realize his love but also realize her pain so that he can bring her all the happiness she deserves.

tushti-kiran, zaara2212, shruthiruchs '

Thanks dear. Maan needs to express himself to not only confess but also to make her understand his true intent.

Mandymore, CiaMaaneet '

Thanks dear'yeah just managed another one in between'..

billy_ritu '

That was a very different take dear'yes roothna manana just makes the relationship sweeter'.

-lakshmi- -

Thanks for such a wonderful analysis dear. Yes, she never expected anything from him. Somewhere he knew but he could not fathom her giving away Hope. He did not realize the importance of the house to her or depth of her insecurities and pain. Hope this will be an eye opener and give him a reality check about what he needs to achieve to have someone like Geet in his life. She is extraordinary so he has to be extraordinary now.

JaneRochester -

Thanks dear for posting your response finally'.i am glad you like the FF. Well I try to draw from realistic scenarios and hence probably it comes across a realistic portrayal'glad you like it. As to Geet's character'.hmmm it is a mix of probably some of my own realized and not realized dreams'except for the emotional baggage as I had a love marriage. LOL'.I am an engineer, love to ride bikes (though not such expensive ones) and love painting and I sometime wonder if I pursued my career as an engineer and not as an artist. But yes, Geet is exceptional because she has much more patience and mental strength than me.

Abby '

Thanks dear'yes she is depressed and her optimism has deserted her making her very negative or I would say scared of more pain. Only thing is maan never shared with her the importance of Hope in his life. Just told her when he met first time, that it was good and will like to buy. After that also, Maan brought hope home only after Geet packed it after marriage. On the flip side, Geet never told him abt the house or her fascination with it'so I guess they need to speak out and express more. Let's see what happens going forward.

misty_drastifan '

Thanks dear'let's see what happens to HOPE

Cyberlife '

Thanks honey. You don't know how much I wait for your feedback. Yes, it has jolted them out of their safe positions and forced them to realize each other feelings or rather for Maan to realize her feelings. Hopefully this will help them to move forward in a more positive way. There is a dawn only after a dark night.

Mehek25 '

Thanks dear. I appreciate your feedback and it was emotional for me too. I am happy I could connect to you as a reader.

Evasumi '

Thanks dear though I was truly hoping for a more indepth analysis from you. Maan needs to work on expressing his feelings and also understanding Geet better. Honey Moon in house'well I do have something special planned'.

drashtirocks1 '

Such a wonderful and detailed analysis. You actually captured everything I wanted to potray. Thanks a lot dear and it gives me immense satisfaction that my readers are connecting to the stoy. I can not express how well you captured the essence. Thanks.

mystique_girl '

Thanks Dear. Hmmm'.in front of parents'well I did not want another heartbreak when parents find out truth so sab kuch ek baar mein hi'.

Amrutavjoshi '

Yes dear, Hope is important to him but he needs to express that to her'

Aamera '

Thanks honey not only for the comment but because you are one of the reason I give at least one update a week.

Jagritimanocha '

Thanks dear and keep on commenting

samirah_amjad '

Fingers crossed dear

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Thanks a lot for your comments and liking the update.



thanks a lot di for replying...
yeah it was difficult for us also as we are readers... we also wanted to know everything...
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Posted: 13 years ago
update maan understand geet pain geet left home maan thaught to talking tomorrow but mohinder listen geet rano conversation waiting for mohinder reaction do next soon can't wait



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Posted: 13 years ago
i just hope things do not get worse after this
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh no...
dat was nt i expected...
nevertheless...update ws fab...
maan pov ws right ...now he is able 2 understand wat was geet feeling...it ws a mere a small portion of it...
fil ka reaction omg...msk sambhal lena...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update. Loved it. Chalo Maan atleast understood her insecurities. He is planning to apologize. But I don't think now it will b easy with Mohinder getting to know about the reality of their relationship. No father can see a daughter shedding tears. And yaha to Geet is living a loveless relation.
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Posted: 13 years ago
OOPPs Mr handa listen everything , hope all this not create further MU b/w Maaneet ..
and Maan confuse his feelings before its get more late
loved the update
waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Actually things r getting bad to worse with Mohinder getting to know the truth. He may even blast Maan and not allow Geet to return.
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Posted: 13 years ago
😲gosh don't know what wold happen next
gosh can we get one more part today plzzz😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting eagerly for the next update.

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