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Interesting ...😛
Waiting...😛
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wow
so nice Marsi
so when are you updating this??????????????
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Originally posted by: PariNain

wow
so nice Marsi
so when are you updating this??????????????


sirf nice? :(
hmm iska ek stock update hai
will post sometime but will be updating after March:P
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wow lovely start ..very interesting dear.
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Made by MEEE😃😃😃😃😃😃
Edited by Miss.Mars - 12 years ago
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thank you :D
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Destined To Love



Part 1
"Aaahhh" She shouted.
Maan woke up hearing the shout.
"AAAhhh" He shouted surprised at the girl sitting on his bed while he on the table near his bed. He had almost forgotten last night's incident.
He pulled his shirt covering himself. He was in his vests and tracks. He clutched the shirt tightly covering his chest.
She was clutching the sheet covering his herself. She stopped shouting. Maan sighed and losened his grip on his shirt and it fell down. She looked at him up and down.
Again she started shrieking, "AhhhAhhh!". By then Maan remembered he had brought her here last night.
He panicked, " WHAT? What what happened? Are you alright?" He asked giving her a glass of water.
"Calm down Miss please!" He requested.
She took the glass from him looking at him apprehensively.
He smiled foolishly scratching back of his head, he replied, "Don't worry I am neither a serial rapist nor a killer!! I am just trying to help you" He assured her.
Shed drank the water and calmed down. While giving the glass back to him, she again checked him up and down. Maan was getting irritated and conscious of her odd and wierd stare.
"WHAT?" He asked raising his right eyebrow.
She hid her face in the sheet and whispered, "Aapki''.." .
"What? I am not able to hear. Please speak louder." Maan asked unable to hear what she whispered.
This time she spoke little louder, "Aapki p'.."
"Arey yaar thoda zor se nahin bol sakti kya?" He asked all irritated.
"AAPKI POST OFFICE KHULI HAIII!!!!!" She shouted with all her might. She hid her face again and giggled to herself.
He stood there rooted to the floor , stunned and gave her a zombie look.
"Arey muh toh band karo uncle?" Adi said and giggled as he stood at the door. Adi had a spare key to the flat.
Maan immediately zipped it up feeling all embarrassed.
Adi turned towards her and felt awkward seeing her dressed like that.
"Hii!" He forwarded his hand to her. She fearfully shook hands with him.
"Dont worry!! Maan and Adi are chuddy buddies! You don't need to get worried!!" He assured her.
Maan was getting irritated. First instead of thanking me she shrieked and woke me up. Over that she shouted the err thing. And then she is shaking hands with Adi.
He put on a grumpy face.
"Thik hai thik hai! Toh kya hua! Aur Adi tu mujhe uncle kyun bula raha hai haan?" He stood there putting his hands on his hips trying to change the topic.
Adi laughed louder seeing him all nervous.
He scowled at him.
"Okay Jaa raha hun. Yeh le Didi ke kuch kapde hain!! Tune mangaya tha na. Shayad inhe fit aajaye!! Got to go to work Bye buddy!!" Adi whispered in Maan's ear . Maan went inside the bathroom to freshen up.
"Bye Miss'"
"Its Geet!"
"Nice to meet you Geet" Adi replied with a smile.
Adi went to the door and turned back and shouted, "ISS BAAR ACHE SE POST OFFICE BAND KAR LENA!!" Adi and Geet broke into fits of laughter clutching their stomachs.
Maan rushed from bathroom, "Teri toh Main'!!!!!" Maan was angry and Adi fled away fearing Maan's anger.
Maan's anger immediately melted down seeing her laugh. Haaayyeee Kitna cute si smile hai. Main toh marjawan. MAAN control yourself. He spoke to himself.
He too laughed foolishly scratching back of his head.
"Kya aap yeh roz karte ho?" She asked curiously.
"Kya?"
"Scratching back of your head like a fool HA HA HA and post office HA HA HA!!" She laughed.
Maan put on his attitude, "Thik hai Ho jata hai! Isme hasne wali baat kounsi hai??" He tried to hide his embarrassment behind his attitude.
He forwarded his hand.
"Err I am Maan. Maan Singh Khurana. MD of Khurana Constructions"
"I am Geet Handa. 1st year student Interior Designing."
Both shook hands with each other.
Both fumbled trying to formulate words. "Woh.." "Main'" "I mean'" " Kal'"
"I am sorry!!" Both spoke at the same time. Maan and Geet blushed as they spoke same words.
"Was I very much troublesome at night?" Geet asked innocently.
"Huh? Nooo not at all!" Maan tried to assure her.
"Please take this dress and freshen up. By the mean time I will prepare the breakfast" Maan said and Geet went inside the bathroom to change and freshen up.
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"Please sit down and have the breakfast. That's only what I could prepare!" He said to Geet placing egg omlet, juice and fruit salad on her plate.
"Oh! Its fab! I just love this" Geet replied grabbing her plate.
"Waise were you up for a fancy dress?" Maan asked hiding his naughty smirk.
"Why?"
"Then why were you dressed in the chamak-challo-ish dress? Ra.one ko bulane ka iraada hai kya?" Maan joked.
"Ha ha very funny!!" Geet tried to hide her blush.
Both finished their breakfast.
"Umm.. G..Geet I wanted to a..ask y..you so..something?" He hesitated .
"What?"
"Do you have someone here or are you planning to stay somewhere else?" He asked while keeping his fingers crossed behind him. Please kahdo please kahdo tum yehi pe rahogi please God please please. He pleaded to God.
"I have no one in this world" Geet replied appearing all lost.
"Huh?" Maan was surprised seeing the play of different emotions on her face.
"I mean Can I stay here for some days?" She asked with a puppy dog face.
Maan placed his finger under his chin as if engrossed in deep thinking.
Maan:"Hmmm!!"
Geet:"Please!"
Maan:"Okay!! But under my rules!"
Geet:"WHAT? RULES?" (She was stunned)
Maan:"Yes! Ofcourse! Since you are staying here you have to follow my rules. No late night parties. No drinking and certainly ZERO Boyfriends" He said showing a zero with his fingers.
"O..Okkay! I won't do anything of that sorts" Geet replied reluctantly.
Maan was dancing inside as she agreed to stay there. Yaayyy she is going to stay here. My Chammak challo. He giggled to himself.
"Okay! I have to meet one of my clients now! See you in the evening!!" Maan said and left.
He returned , "AND keep the door closed. I don't want ANYONE else other than Adi to come here. Got it?"
"Hmmm!" Geet affirmed.
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He felt as if she was blushing as a bright red hue crept up her cheeks.
He smiled.
As he kept walking, holding her ,along the footpath. He found people present there staring oddly at them. He turned to his right only to see a RA.ONE poster on the wall. He laughed to himself imagining himself as G.ONE and her as his chammak challo.
MY CHAMMAK CHALLO. He whispered to himself all lost.
He placed her inside the car and drove off to his flat.
As soon as they reached his flat, he placed her on the bed while he changed into his vests and tracks.
He started on his upcoming meeting with one of big shot business man and a close friend of his grand-father. He didn't like to take anyone's help but seeing KC's situation he was bound to take Mr. Chopra's help. Hence here he was preparing the required sketches for the meeting.
He looked at her angelic face before starting to work on it. As if seeing her he got a new zeal to work and his face glowed with his sudden discovery.
Finally at 3o'clock he finished hs work. He feared if she saw him near her on the same bed she may take it in wrong way. So he sat on the stool nearby.
"Thank you for coming in my life. Mom she is the angel sent by you. Hai nah?. She is my lucky charm nah?" He spoke to his mom looking to the sky through the glass window.
He placed a kiss on her forehead as he drifted to sleep in the same sittting posture.
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PRECAP:
He came out of the office and raised his hand and did his victory dance.
He called Adi to inform him the good news.
"Kya yaar! Boss hai bahar! Jaldi bol!!" Adi sounded nervous and irritated at his call.
"Tujhe toh mere liye waqt hi nahin hai! Khair chod!! I got the deal dude" He was elated.
"CONGRATULATIONS buddy!!" Adi shouted but silenced himself seeing his office members looking at him. "Saale itna acha news phone pe hi bata raha hai!!" Adi pouted
"Nahi yaar treat dunga!! With You and Geet!" Maan replied happily.
It was 20 lacs project. It would simply brighten KC's future.
'Thank you Chammak challo!!' He whispered.
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He panicked as he didn't find Geet inside the flat.
"Did she leave?" He questioned himself and was hurt that she left
Thank you guys for commenting on the prologue. Thank you so much!!
Hope you liked the first part!! I am very much nervous he he!! *biting my nails* and criticism welcome too!!
I know the title is a bit of grammatical error but I like it that way. Hope you guys are okay with it. And yeah Geet does have a mysterious past.
Please press the like button and do comment!!
Love
Ananya

Edited by Miss.Mars - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Eagerly Waiting for your comments guys
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interesting but zip open scene was too good...am mean..very notty...😉
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Did i missed anything. Mere khayal se meine sab works par like aur comment kiya tha.

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