FF-MAAN&GEET-WIFE-LOVERupdated epilogue 12/10 - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago



Sushmita from last precap I am worried about what is ur meaning about future lover...if u r trying to make Maan fall for Meera then count me off from this FF...I can"t read Maan cheating Geet...

sorry for this comment but I am very worried really...

and after raeding this update how Meera is trying to get close to him and forcing her commands over him...I am not liking this a little bit...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran




Sushmita from last precap I am worried about what is ur meaning about future lover...if u r trying to make Maan fall for Meera then count me off from this FF...I can"t read Maan cheating Geet...

sorry for this comment but I am very worried really...

and after raeding this update how Meera is trying to get close to him and forcing her commands over him...I am not liking this a little bit...

thanx for pm...




DEAR I UNDERSTAND THAT NOT ONLY, NO ONE CANNOT SEE MAAN CHEATING GEET
AS THE STORY UNFOLDS YOU WILL SEE THE REAL CHARACTER OF MAAN AND GEET WHO CAN GO AT ANY EXTENT OF SACRIFICE FOR OTHERS,

FUTURE LOVER--- IT IS NOT COMPULSORY THAT THE OTHER SHOULD HAVE HAVE FEELINGS FOR THEM-----OR ONE SIDED LOVE , MAY BE MEERA IS THINKING THAT HE WILL LOVE HER OR SOME MISUNDERSTANDING OR OBLIGATION

HERE I WANT TO CLEAR SOME DOUBTS
SEE MAAN IS A PAINTER, GEET IS A MATERIALISTS WOMEN SHE DOES NOT BELIEVES IN THE LIFE OF EMOTION, WHERE AS A PAINTERS NEEDS SUPPORT , WHO CAN BE A INSPIRATION FOR HIM ,
WHAT WILL HAPPEN IN THE FUTURE
YOU HAVE TO WAIT AND SEE
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Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yar maaneet ki jagah maan-meera kaise ho gya?

Maan has still nt called geet aftr reachng thr. Why???????? Its a BIG question
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update dear
lovely
waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update ...
so meera is going to be maan's lover...
lets see now what happens...
Pls get geet also into the picture...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
am gonna wait for the next part

it was nice one

thnx for pm

cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 19
Meera?
hope Maan doesnt fall for her or seek solace in her be it admiration for his painting or anything...
Geet understands him to some extent and he too her...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
iam writing the story will try to update today
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART:20

HE SAW HIS CELL RINGING ,GEET WAS CALLING HIM

Since morning he did not call her , when he reached the shimla , he called her but after wards he did not call her, he did not tell about his hospital admission, he also told the manager not to tell her , because he know geet was strong, but she will be sacred if he tells about previous night incidents

Did the competion started

No geet abhi nahi , still I hour time is there

One bad news, the painting which I want to put in the exhibition got damaged ,

How , how can it be.,

Yesterday there was snow fall here , it got damaged I because of that

How can that be, you are always careful with your painting ,

Now what you will do ,

You are feeling bad, is it

Yes geet , I amm felling bad, but what can we do,

is it possible you can paint another one

Hearing this words, he remembered about meera, he immediately , without turning back he told iam sorry my wife was on the phone, I will talk to you later

But he saw meera has already left that place

Maan with whom you are talking

Vo' there are staying in adjacent room , they too came for this competition

So maan you are not participating in the competition. , so you will rerun back in evening flight

No geet, iam interested to see others painting also , any way next day flight is already is booked, I will come

What geet , you are missing me

Aisa nahi nahi hai''.you can stay until when you want ,saying that she cut her phone

she received the call

Next time , she did not heard his voice , but she heard a song

Roothe'roothe ..piya..manalo kaise ..

Roothe..roothe'..piya 'manolo kaise'.

Geet was surprised seeing maan like this,

She was on cloud nine, she enjoyed this, maan trying to pacifying her

Hmmm' acha hai maan you are sininging , why cannot you try In this field also

See geet I am singing for you and you are pulling me

Ok'. Baba see Himalayas are nearby, your swami ji here only, I will go and join in his ashram,

Maan how many times I told not to talk like this

Okay tell me what you are doing now, you are not feeling for losing the painting

See geet if we feel what will happens, will that painting will come back no'.

So donot worry

Maan how could you control emotions, like this, okay come fast iam missing

Okay misthy take care , nurse is taking care no, and ha take your medicines do not crib for taking that medicines

No I won,t take until you give my honey

Mishty nowadays you a blackmailing me a lot,

Okay then leave it of, when you return I then I will take my medicines

Okay now stop this emotional atyachar okay saying that he kisses the cell

Geet could understand by the sound , what maan was doing

Misthy I am sending kisses through cell,do you got it,

Now take your medicines , okay,

Then what about for the night

Okay baa now take this, I will call again in the night okay,

Maan was laughing at geet antics; he knows how she cribs for medicines

At the same time there was knock at the door, he saw mera was holding the all the painting stuff, the board, the canvass, everything

Meera what you are doing,

Come on mitra ji appko pata hai, you are going to paint

But meera I told you that I cannot paint like this,

But mitra ji you can try at least

See mousam itna acha hai

You come from this room and see , from the window we can see the little hill , we will go and and see there, may be you will get some mood to paint, vasie bhi mere karan apka painting kharb hogaya hai, so I will only do the reapir see

Saying she dragged maan from the room, both started to climb the hill which was very near to their hotel, , when they reached at the top ,

Meera was shouting see mitraji , how nice it is, so nice picture, now bring this nature in your canvass

I agree meera it is nice place

Immediately, he adjusted the board and the canvass and tried to to painting '.

There was sudden silence everywhere

He saw meera was not there,

Insliye itna calm hai

He tried to concentrate and do painting but it is not coming

At the same time he saw meera coming

He saw tea cup in her hand

Where you got this tea

I managed it , but what is this you did not even started anything from the past 3 hours you are here

Meera maine pheli he tumko kha hai ki , I cannot do this

Hearing this meera started to cry, I know'.you will tell like this but you do why I am insisting g like this..you do not know how this painting are my part of my life

You know I am a painter 'even my husband also was a painter''

Husband''.

Ha'. Rahul' he is also a painter

You know the qayamat'..se qayamat cinema , our story I also some what like that only

I am daughter of central minister , my father used pamper me like any thing ,same what happened in the picture, the same thing happened to me, I fell in love with his opposition leader, rahul, he also painter like me,

Maan saw in her eyes'. Which full of emotions as if she will be going cry at any moment

We met in a art gallery, do not know how we fell in love, but we started loving each other

The same twist in our khani also , parents did not like as we are loving each other, so we eloped and married

Our life was very nice, we started our marriage life in a jugel, you know living in a small hut and do painting and living happily in our own life

But the same thing happened that happened in sholay

Sholy what happened in sholay

Where my big b lost his hands

Big b

Ha mera amitabh bachan

But when amitabh bachan became yours, , muje yad hai in sholay sanjeev kumar lost his hands

What is the difference see, amitabh ya sanjeev ho, somebody lost his hands,see do not disturb in the middle when I am telling the story

Story'

Story nahi'. Meri jindagaki sachi kahani hai'. Do you have any doubts in that

No'.

Meera started to cry ,you know that we were very happy

We both were planning about our future , rahul was planning to open his art gallery at the same some goons have entered our home, and started started beating him

Suddenly her voice choked, she stopped as if remembering the past incidents , but she continued

When I went in between , they started to beat me also, you know one goon was looking lustfully at me, but my rahul, he could not bear any one touching like this, he started to fight, with them, but he was single with 10 people surrounding him, there was a big fight , was fighting with them, he killed them but suddenly one goon came from back and cut his hands from behind, at the same time my father also came, with the police, hearing the police siren every one fled away, we immediately admitted him in the hospital, but it was too late,

You know mitraji why I like painting , why I was attached because of this, painting are my integral part of life, that why I could not see when your painting was damaged , she started crying



precape: maan painting... meera helping . -----competation

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update loved it

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