Lust For Revenge - MG FF THREAD 1

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

wow.. sounds interesting

Maan is already having fioncee.. gr8.. then Geet.. i always loved agreesive arrogant Maan & cool Geet

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

omg.. just now i read all part

m feeling very sorry for Geet.. these khadus khurana people & that lady aayesha.. omg

Geet ka kya hoga..update soon.. waiting waiting

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

**LUST FOR REVANGE**
PART - 10
MAAN furiously look at her.
Maan:dont try to b fooled me.i kno ur all tricks.mere mana krne k bad b tumne jan k dadima ko sb kuch bata doya taki tm unhe anpe favour me kr sko.
Geet:i dont tell hr nythng.she got to kno by hrslf.
Maan anrily squeezed hr arm whch is vry painfl fr hr:dont pretended ok.i kno wats running in ur clevr mind.
Geet is sobbing silently:mujhe nahi pata ap kya bol rahe ho nd y u behavd lyk dis.akhir maine kiya kya hai?
Maan:mera muh mt khulwao samjhi tm.nd i warnd u apni chale chalna band kr do coz tumhare is bhole chehre ki piche kitni chalaki bhari hui hai mujhe achi trh pata hai.so dont try to use ur charm on me bcoz it nvr works on me.ye mat samjhna ki dadima agar tumhari tarafdari kar rahi hai to tumhara plan kamyam ho gaya.baki sab tumhe achhi tarah jante hai.
Maan threw hr on floor jerkly nd wnt to change hs clothes. Meantime dadima cm in deir rum nd found her on floor. Seeing her Geet,quickly wiped hr tears b4 she noticd dem.
Dadima:are beta ap niche kaise gir gayi.aaiye uthiye.(She streched hr arm to hlp hr,Geet luked hr in amusement listning beta frm hr) bete aap the to hai na?
Geet:ji dadima.
Dadima:beta aap giri kaise?
Geet:bas dadima pair fisal gaya tha.
Dadima:beta thoda dhyan rakha kariye.shukarhai apko chot nahi aayi.chaliye ab jaldi se humare neeche chalie.
Geet:dadima neche kyu?
Dadi:are ap chaliye to.
2day Samarth is vry happy due to d deal. He share dis wid hs wife.Both sat on dining table. Dadima came wid dere. Seeing hr, deir smiles faded suddnly.
Dadi:Geet bets bathiye yaha(Geet nodded no as she knew no1 lyk hr presence.dadi hold hr hand softly)bathiye beta hm keh rae hai.
Maan nd Annie came dere too.
Arpita:i hv nvr seen such a shameless grl.
Dadi:shut up Arpita.dont u c dat i brought hr here.Geet sit down.she is our daughter in law so she hd a rite to sit here wid al of us.
Aripta:f9 if she gonna sit wid us i m leavng rite now.
Samarth:sit down Arpita.nd ma wat is dis?kal tk to ap keh rai thi koi zarurat nai hai bt ab apise bahu ka darza de rahi hai?
Dadi:coz hume baut socha is bare me or ye faisla liya hai jb Maan ne Geet se shadi kr hi li hai to its better we must acept hr too.
Samarth:its nt possible nd u kno dat.
Dadi:thek hai hum Geet ko apna chuke hai ab jb wo yaha nai baith skti to hm b nai baithenge.(she stood up)sahil ab se humara khana b humare rum me hi dena.
She went wid Geet.
Maan(fuming nd thot):Geet maine jitna socha tha tm use kahi zada chalak ho.1 hi din me dadima ko hm sbke khilaf kr dia.ab iski saza to tume deni hi padegi.
Geet:dadima pls ap neche jaiye wrna sbko bura lgega.
Dadi:or ap is trah yaha akele sbse alag rhegi to hume bura lagega
Geet:bt dadima..
Dadi:bs ab or kuch mt sochiye aj hm apni beti k sath dinnr karnge.
Geet hugged hr as she found motherly affecton frm hr.Meanwhile Sahil(servnt) bring their dinner.
Arpita roaming in hr rum while thinkng smthng wen Annie entrd in.
Annie:ya soch rai hai mom?
Arpita:dont kno.my mind is nt wrkng.
Annie:mom pls do smthng b4 its too late.she is vry clevr 1 1 krk sb kuch hasil kr legi.
Aripta:dont stress urslf sweety.ill handle hr.u go nd take rest
Annie:sory mom i hv to rush to my frnd's place.bye mom.
Geet spend sm gud time wid Dadi.aftr dat she made a wy 2hr rum,suddnly she peep in Sameer's rum nd found hm wiered.she went inside.swing hr he instantly hide smthng behind hs bak.tense lines occurd on his forhead.
Geet:Sameer r u ok?
Sameer's eyes r red nd hs voice flattrd.he cantable stand proprly.
Sameer:are bhabhi ap yaha kaise kuch kam tha?
Geet:no.bt wat r u hiding behind?
Sameer:nthng... bhabhi if u dnt mind i want to slep.
Geet:ok.
She came out bt sence smthng wired in hs behavior.She steps towrds hr rum.Maan waitng fr hr.wen she entrd hs furios gaze wlcmd her.Maan hld hr nd taggd hr to d wall.
Maan:tum jo ye game khel rahi ho na,u will pay for it. But any ways iske bare mein to main tymse baad me nibtunga. Agli baar agar itni late room mein aayi to ander aane ki koi zarurat nahi hai. Now go and change fast.
She scared and went to change her clothes. But she is really confused what he exactly want. But she thought there is no use of argue with him as he is no mood of listining her. On the other hands Maan was busy in making a plan how he hurt other than physicaly. He wants to hurt her mentally or emotinally too...

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Part 6

So sad for Geets family 😭

love the bonding between Geet and Brij 👍🏼

Maan is so evil and people in KM are also evil.. they dont like Geet and they dont even know her yet 😭

Part 7

really sad part 😭

even though they shared the same bed they still maintained a lot of distance 😒

Maan being really mean to Geet.. He's imposing rules on her and treating her like dirt 😭

and Maan's mom is also very mean .. making a family member a stranger.. not like she wanted to get into the family this way 😭

and Dadima was also not nice to her 👎🏼

Part 8

Geet was so sweet telling her mum that everything is okay when nothing was fine

good that Dadima heard her talking.. it got her thinking that Geet is not a bad person 👍🏼

Geet is torturing herself by not eating 😭

excellent that Dadi now knows that Geet is pregnant and she also knows who the father is

Part 9

Dadima taking care of Geet.. I think that she will be the first one to accept her whole heartedly 👍🏼

Maan with his attitude in office 😎

i dont understand whether Ayesha is good or evil 🤔

can tell that Maan gets his pride and ego from his dad 😡

really great that Dadi confronted Maan and asked him about everything but too bad she doesnt know about his grandsons intentions behind this marriage 😒

thanks for very great updates and sorry for late replies 🤗

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Part 10

Great update!! 👏

really loved it.. finally someone is supporting Geet 😳

the whole family is so mean and egoistic.. why dont they just accept her.. they know nothing about her.. if they get to know the truth they will be ashamed

i wonder what Sameer was hiding behind his back 🤔

its so sad with Geet.. Maan is being a complete heartless man 😭

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

wonderful update...

loved it...

but without knwing anything maan is behaving like dis...its really disgusting...i hate maan...

thank u very much fr such lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

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lily

@LILY111144

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

gud stry .1 req. give index on pg 1 nd wen u update give prt no on top plz,thnx

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

part 10
nice part...
at least Daadima is there for Geet...
and the family should repent so much later especially Maan and Geet shouldnt forgive him for sometime...
then he will know the pain she is going through...
cont soon dear...