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Posted: 13 years ago
very painful part 😭
but very nicely written 👏

i wander when maan will understand geet and realize his mistake .. i hope it wont be so late 😕


Edited by geet.lover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Honestly someone needs to teach Maan a lesson
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Posted: 13 years ago
TORTURE FM MAAN TO GEET I TRULY HATED THIS PART IN FB😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...
maan is so gonna regret...hate dat so called fiance of maan wont say her name cz its my name aswell...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update!!
loved it...
maan😡poor geet😭
feel bad for her
waiting for next
continue soon
thankx for pm


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Posted: 13 years ago
geet alone wid maan..
amazing update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update richa..very well written..
bt maan is so wrong yaar...
poor geet...
hey btw u never pm when u updt..
if u don't pm..np..bt can u plz update the title with pge number, whenever u updt..
n plz do quite long updt dear..plz..

Edited by akki-rockstar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
both the updates were very good. Maan is not seeing the truth in his anger, plese use jaldi se thoda dimag do,.
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Posted: 13 years ago

plz maan have mercy on geet...plz...

beautiful update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
**LUST FOR REVANGE**

PART - 23

Geet was so scared and cried for half an hour dont undrstand what to do and she also felt pain in her abdomn. She scaredly open d door sawing him slept on a bed. She collect some courage and came out. She tuk hr mobile and escaped frm KM. She called Pinky nd told hr to cm here. With in 20mins Pinky came wid her father. Both shocked seeing her condition. Pinky hugged her and both start crying.


Pinky:Geet howz dis happned? Tell me pls.


Mr walia noticed hr injured wrists:Pinky asked hr later rite now she needs medical attenton.


Mr. Walia tuk her to gynaeocologist. She checked her and admit her immediately as she find difficulty in breathing proprly. Doc put oxygen mask. She also bandaged her wounds and do other tests. Pinky and her father worridly waits for her. Doc came to dem.


Mr.Walia:howz my daughter doc?


Doc angrily:where is hr husband?



Mr.Walia:what happnd doc,i hope she is alrite.


Doc:what ever he done wid her is not rite.i felt send him jail for dis brutual torture. Although he shows concern for his baby den y he applied force on her in dat condition?


Mr.Walia:doc i dnt kno what happnd btwn dem,i just only want my daughter and her baby safe.


Doc:mr.walia she is lucky dat u brought her here on rite time wrna kuchh b ho skta tha.


Pinky:doc wo theek to hai na.



Doc:rite now she is stable.bt pls take care of her.


Pinky:hum Geet ko ghar le ja skte hai?


Doc:rite now i put oxygn mask to her.aftr 1 hour i examined hr again,aftr dat u can take hr home.


Mr.Walia wait for 1hour. Doc came nd examined her and gav hr discharge. Mr. Walia take her to hs home. Next day when Maan wakeup his head is spinning due to d last nite's hangovr. He tuk medi.and went to fresh n up aftr dat he went to hs office,dont bother where is she now.coz he dont hv any regrts fr hs last nite's behaviour. As he entrd Sasha enquird abot hr bt he ans hr rudly.


Sasha:Mk where is Geet?


Maan:i m not her secratry so dnt askd me.go nd do ur wrk.


Sasha worrid fr her coz of hr cndition but fails to made contct wid her.On d other hand Geet was cmpltly turned subduded,talking nothng.


Mr.walia:Pinky puttr tu Geet ka dhyan rakh main medi.leke aata hu.


Pinky:nai Papa ap Geet k pas baitho main medi.le k ati hu.


She tuk her prescription and went to medi.store,where accidntly she hit wid Adi.


Pinky:u stupid cnt u c dat i m cmng frm dere.


Adi sw hr angry face and tryng to recognise hr.She is about to go bt hr stops hr.


Adi:excuse me u r pinky rite?


Pinky luks him suspeciously:excuse me who r u nd how u kno me?


Adi:hi i m Adi,actuly u dnt kno me bt i kno evrythng abot u.


Pinky's anger grew mor:now i kno tm koi awara ho jo ladkio ka pechha krte ho.


Adi:wait2 main koi awara nai hu,or tume line maru itne b bure dinn nai aaye hai mere.(she fumed) actully i m Maan's frnd.


Pinky:tb to maine abi jo b bola bahut kam bola hai,jo Maan jaise ghatia insan ka dost hoga wo b to ghatia hi hoga.


Adi(shokd):wait a min.can i asked y u used such a harsh wrds for him?


Pinky:ye to mere manners hai,wrna usne jo kia hai na uske baad to use jitni galia du kam hai



She tryng to go bt he struck her way.


Adi:pinky pls jo kehna hai clearly kaho.i cnt undrstnd what r u talking abot.


Pinky:go and asked him he can explain very well abot his cheap acts.


Adi:Pinky pls dont twist d argument tell me straight forwrd.



Pinky:sunna chahte ho kya kia hai usne?


Adi:yes.Pinky told him evrythng.


Adi stunnd listning hr. Pinky went from dere nd Adi movd to KGI. Maan was busy in his office work. He angrily snaped d door of his cabin. Maan look at him in amusement.


Maan:what happend?


Adi angrly:what do u think of urslf?


Maan stands and came near him.


Maan:whats wrong wid u?


Adi glared him:aaj tujhe apna dost kehte hue b mujhe sharm aa rahi hai.


Maan:kyu? Aisa kya kia hai maine?



Adi:tune us masoom k sath jo kia hai use kaise justify karne wala hai tu?


Maan:oh so now she washed ur brain. Mindblowing she is very expert in dat. What ever i do wid her she deserves dat only.


Adi clenched his arm and made him luk face to face.


Adi:first of all she doesnt tell me anything ok and yes you r right she deserves to b hurted at evry step. Tujh jaise janwar se shadi krne ka inam to use milna hi chahiye. Usne teri company ki repo k liye jo saha hai uske baad yehi sab to deserve karti hai wo...



Both look each other furiously...
Edited by richa_kapoor - 13 years ago

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