FF:Love VS Ego- At Altar of Sacrifice-#2-part20-29 - Page 69

Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

PART 26

nice

Originally posted by: manisha259

I THINK GEET IS SHERNI LIKE HER MOTHER. LUV SWEET MAANGEET SOOO MMMUUUCCCHHH.KEEP IT UP BUDDY👍🏼

Originally posted by: ammu5

rano is right. hope they escape safely

Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet

Originally posted by: shristi1

lovely update.

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: DDbiggestfan

Nice update 😳
thanks for d pm...

Originally posted by: dolly10

Awesome update

Loved it

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet

Hey dear,
read all 26 parts today itself in one go

its really diffnt.dont knw how it will turn out ahead bt till nw its been gud.

Ff shows growth of maaneet frm childhood till dey attain maturity n beyond.

I dont want to b critical bt at times it seemed to b too slow whr such sequences r explained in detail whr its not been required bt then mayb u did it knowingly.

Is it a lovestory? Actually aftr reading th parts i still cant say whoz ego n love it relates to?


2nd thing dat i wondered ws maaneet's behaiour,their acts which dey did at d age of 1-2 yrs r at times not digestible in d sense wen i read it i ws wondering can such young kid do dis...
I mean wat acts dey r shown to b doin r usually done by kids who r atleast double their age. Bcoz i hav may neice n nephew n neithr of them did all those things n acts in such tender age.cant pinpoint exact sequence bcoz its difficult to do while commentng frm fone.

I'm sory if u felt m critical bt i stated wat i felt n hope dis is a happy ff bcoz i dont want to regret reading it later coz its genuinly diffrnt.

Waitng fr nxt

Originally posted by: qutiegiya

amazing updates...😊
plzz pm me next time when you updates it