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Posted: 13 years ago

a sneak peek- its just a trailer, rest i'll update according to the response i get


sneak peek into Bloodline Chapter: 5

Maan & Geet

The announcement had Sameera seething in rage, raw fury, "so you duped me Huh! Khurana, that can't be, I can't let you go, you'll regret this!" with that she stormed out of the party. As soon as the announcement got over, Maan turned towards Geet, to see her reaction, he couldn't help but smile inwardly when he thought about how her reaction, but alas! All his hopes went down the drain. He couldn't believe what he saw, Geet smiling, looking confident, "whts wrong with her? Isn't she supposed to be perplexed and stunned, shocked by the announcement?" He thought and before he could read further more into the matter, Dj intervened requesting the couple for the night to grace the dance floor with their auspicious presence. Soon the lights were dimmed and the spotlight shone gloriously on the the two creatures who stood centre stage looking absolutely gorgeous in black and white.

Geet turned towards Maan and extending her hand, she said, "shall we dance?" leaving Maan all the more perplexed and flummoxed.

Edited by doublecross - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow my dance sequence request fulfilled maan surprised n me too
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow awesome ...loved it... Update sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi my ms. gayab..
loved it dear...
or khas taur pe wen sameera says she's dumped now😆
she deserves dat
waiting for update...
nd thanks for this sneek peek🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dying for a ravishing dance number. Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago






😍 😍 😍 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
teaser to ho gaya pr update kb milega??
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Posted: 13 years ago

Bloodline Chapter: 5

Maan & Geet

The announcement had Sameera seething in rage, raw fury, "so you duped me Huh! Khurana, that can't be, I can't let you go, you'll regret this!" with that she stormed out of the party. As soon as the announcement got over, Maan turned towards Geet, to see her reaction, he couldn't help but smile inwardly when he thought about how her reaction, but alas! All his hopes went down the drain. He couldn't believe what he saw, Geet smiling, looking confident, "what's wrong with her? Isn't she supposed to be perplexed and stunned, shocked by the announcement?" He thought and before he could read further more into the matter, Dj intervened requesting the couple for the night to grace the dance floor with their auspicious presence. Soon the lights were dimmed and the spotlight shone gloriously on the two creatures that stood centre stage looking absolutely gorgeous in black and white.

Geet turned towards Maan and extending her hand, she said, "shall we dance?" leaving Maan all the more perplexed and flummoxed.

For the first time ever Maan was at a loss for words. All these years he prided for having an upper hand, a fatal charm, that had girls swooning, tossing, whirling in love, and now here stood one Geet Handa immune to his charm, looking straight into his eyes, almost piercing, oozing with confidence, with a grin plastered on her face, asking for a dance with her future husband!!! Bizarre!!!!!!!!!! Indeed, shouldn't the scene be reverse??

As if on cue, the Dj played one of Geet's favorite numbers "Today was a fairytale" by Taylor Swift.


http://youtu.be/hsIc4C9Bw5U

PLAY THE SONG TO GET THE FEEL!

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As the song played, they both looked into each other's eyes, and eventually led each other to the dance floor. For them now, nothing mattered, no one existed, and it's only them, their closeness, and their togetherness! They moved swiftly with song, slow, yet passionate. Maan as if to tease her senses pulled her close, held her tight, as if making her aware of his warmth, his masculinity. His maleness, his scent tingled her senses and once again she found herself losing in his passion. As their bodies brushed against each other, they both couldn't deny the electricity, the strange current they both experienced. Geet couldn't help but gasp when his warm finger touched her bare waist, when he held her from the back and lifted her up, it felt like heaven. The slow torturous slide had her moan and for once she looked into the eyes of her prince Charming Maan and what she saw was raw passion, want, "wait! What was that? Did I see love?" his burning gaze had her inside loins melting and she had to avert her gaze.




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For Maan the dance turned out to be a boon in disguise. He kept looking at the angel in white with smoldering gaze, not for once did he let his eyes leave Geet's. She looked so precious, so angelic, so pure, and so delectable! His body seemed to be on fire every time they touched, there seemed to be a strong connection, a sexual tension between the two. Her milky white skin, her soft touch, her innocent face, her hazels played havoc with his senses. How he controlled himself. He didn't have clue. He felt heavenly, when he had her in his arms, all felt so right, a feeling of calm washed over him Indeed she is an Angel. When she gasped at their closeness, he couldn't help but smirk inwardly. When she moaned, he felt himself go weak at the sound of her moan. When she looked into his eyes, he couldn't help but let her know of her insides, a peek into what was in store for her in near future. He felt her go red, a sudden hue of pink flushed across her face, "gosh she looks so heavenly, so pure, and so innocent, I feel like drowning, or am I already drowning! Geet Handa, you got me this time! You won, this time you charmed me, you held me captive, I'm your prisoner now and I'm happy that I'm the chosen one to be awarded the life sentence!"

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As the song ended, they both remained glued to their spots against each other, in each other's arms, lost in their world. Their reverie was broken by what sounded like thunder but was applause from the awe stricken crowd that had gathered to bestow their best wishes upon the heavenly couple. They couldn't stop themselves from gushing about the electrifying by the sizzling hot couple. They burned the floor with their passion, even a soft romantic number like the one that played was ignited by their hotness. Truly wonderful!

For the both, it was a bit difficult for them both to let go of each other, so when they had to part due to the crowd, they didn't like it, in fact Maan felt empty when geet left his arms only to stand next to him. He felt anguish for a while against all those who stood there and clapped for them. He felt so complete with Geet in his arms So secure.

Geet was all pink and shy, she had forgotten that they were not alone but were dancing amidst a crowd of a few hundred. He melted and got swayed by emotions; such was the power of her Prince Charming! "oh gosh what did I just do? No! Not again!" she could feel his intense gaze upon her, and that made matters worse for her. She stood there with her heads bowed and her cheeks crimson while Maan looked on. Thank god her father yet again saved the day for her.

Mr Handa was delighted to see the two dance, they way they moved, twirled, supported each other during the entire performance, nobody could deny the strong the connection between the two, "not bad huh? So I was right, rather I made the right call, good job Handa!" he mentally patted himself. With that he went up to the stage and hugged his daughter and his would be son in law, it all felt so right, so wonderful! He felt so complete and his family seemed complete! " I'm so happy today, thank you sweethearts, you two have made me into a happy man, now I can retire peacefully, thanks a ton, you two have been two angels in my life thanks" Mr Handa gushed, and he couldn't stop the tears of joy from pouring in!

Maan held Mr Handa's hand into his own and said, " sir I should be thankful to you, you have given me the most precious gift of my life and I I'm indebted to you for life, it's a pleasure that you chose me to be your son in law and it's an honor to be Geet's Husband"

With that said, he leaned closer to Geet and whispered into her ears "welcome to my life Geet, I'll never let you go".


i have tried my level best, i'm a bit nervous as i dont know how many of you will like the part or whether i have lived upto to the expectations of all. please forgive me for my mistakes, hopefully you all will like the part, i'll post the next part depending on your response. Do play the song in background to get the feel, the link has been posted, please check and play.


yours forever

priyanka/doublecross

Edited by doublecross - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, nice part
loved it
maaneet dance passionately
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
😉res it was a lovely update i loved to read what was on there mind while dancin it was so good that i was thinkin why it ended soon by the way u can send maneet somewhere like on a date
Edited by sweetie25 - 13 years ago

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