Originally posted by: geet.lover
woww awesome concept. i have not read all parts yet but still it touched my heart.
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Originally posted by: geet.lover
woww awesome concept. i have not read all parts yet but still it touched my heart.
Their sweet and simple confession and his heart touching proposal was something that have connected them …… maan was certainly eager to take geet to introduce her to his grandparents…. Since he had already revealed the secret now his family was eager to meet the girl for whom maan had devoted himself so serenely……
Whereas on the other hand geet was getting nervous…. Sweat beads were formed on her forehead in such a chilly season….but was not saying anything….. nervousness was taking toll on her…..thats when maan looked at her and seeing her condition he immediately stopped the car…..
Maan:( cupping her face and looking into her eyes) geet kya hua….. why are you worried…. Please don't take any tension…nothing can go wrong now….
That's when geet after gaining some courage looked into his eyes which were reflecting only pure love and giving her all the support and confidence….nodded her head….and timidly asked….
Geet: maan ..what if…. What if your family doesn't like me…. Our different culture….
Before geet could complete maan ensured her that his family knows everything about them….
Maan: geet daadima and daadaji knows everything about us….. and they are impatient to meet their would daughter in law….. listening to daughter in law …. A pink hue adorned geet's cheeks and she blushed…..
Not wasting any further time maan took her to the cottage….
Well being in the freezy cold… and on top of that continous drizzling was making the atmosphere indeed romantic….
When they reached the cottage……maan's sister nicol opened the door and welcomed them …actually by their tom and jerry fight…. Nicol gave him a tight hug…
Nicol: bhai…. You are finally back…. You didn't even meet me after calling us here all of a sudden….
That's when akash nicol 's brother interrupted……
Akash: wohohhh..hold on nicks… let him enter first…
And nicol made a frustrating face and allowed them…. Maan made her enter and first introduced geet to his grandparents who were more than willing and waiting for her….
On seeing the girl…. They were actually haapy that their grandson's choice is so simple…. But were more than eager to talk to her…. As her nervousness was clearly written on her face…
That's when daadi called geet …. And caressed her face lovingly.
Daadi: ider aaiye bte… hamare paas aaiye….
Geet felt that nothing can she expect today more than this….if she will ask god for something than he will surely oblised with her request…..
Geet touched daadi's and daadaji's feet and they gave their blessing to her….. then she was introduced to maan's bua… urmil….
Maan: geet ek important member se to milna reh hi gaya…. Meet my bua…. And he proudly introduced geet to his bua…
Maan: aur bua ye hai meri geet…. And bua lovingly pulled his ear…..
Bua: meri geet…. Haan maan…isliye geet ke bare me abhi tak mujhe nahi bataya…..
Maan: sorry bua…. ( making a cute puppy face….)
To which all laughed …urmil hugged maan and blessed them….. geet was all shy during the meeting conversation…..that's when someone interrupted …..
Nicol: bhai not fair you didn't even introduced me to bhabhi….
Maan: sorry nicks…. Let me do it….now…
Nicol: bhai you also…. Please don't call me with that stupid name…. call me nicol or priya or nicol priya…… but plzzz not this ….
Maan: ok.. then priya would be fine….and turned to geet … and introduced geet to nicolpriya his sister and akash his brother….. although they are his cousins but his attachment to both is no less than his own siblings…..
Maan's bua urmil is a doctor by profession and lives in Canada…. That's why nicol name is nicolpriya…as for both you know desi and videshi……
And she is also married to a jain…. That is intercaste marriage…..so she knows the problems that the lovers face….
All were very happy meeting geet ….specially daadima… geet's nature attitude… was something that was a source of attraction for all….
Although maan never wanted to leave geet but he has to accomplish a very important task….before making geet his.. for this lifetime….tagging her with him….
So he went taking his sweet sister and brother with him…who were more than excited to explore the place…..
Savitridevi along with her daughter took geet to know about the reason of her sudden disappearance…knowing that maan will never let them know…..
Savitri devi taking geet's hand in hers …asked
Savitridevi: geet beta…. Hume apse kuch poochna hai….hume sach bataiye ga….
Geet was really afraid of what she is going to ask her…. And just nodded….
Savitridevi: beta..aisa kya ho gaya tha ki aapko sabkuch chodkar yahan aana pada….hum jante hain….koi bahut badi baat hai…. Maan hume nahi batayenge …par hum aap se jaanna chahte hai ki kis wajah se aap dono itne saal alag rahe….itna kuch sehna pada….
Urmil also supported her mother…..
Urmil: geet…beta bata dijiye…( gently stroking her hair)…hum sab hai aapke saath….
Geet couldn't hold any longer and hugged urmil…and told her between continous sobs…everything…..
Geet: daadima…buaji…(sob) mene maan ki jaan bachane ke liye sab chod diya..(sob)..main nahi chahti thi( sob) ki unhe kuch bhi ho…(sob)…
Geet told each and every event related….both the women sitting were shocked and surprised at the same time….listening to geet….the amount of love and respect increased in their hearts for this young girl who loved their son…. More than her life…that she sacrificed everything…..even her dreams…
And made her drank water to make her calm…..
The shocking revelation was something that not only left savitridevi in a deep shock but also yashraj khurana on learning the truth….. they were really proud of their grandson's choice…and the amount of love the couple have for each other……
Maan and geet's marriage was held after three days….
Girls mostly are worried that they will have to leave their parents and have to start with a new beginning but geet was actually thanking the higher powers for giving her opportunity to live with her love….
When the priest chanted the matras…and asked the bride and groom for the pheras….
The scared rounds which will bound them together for seven lives…. They took each and every round promising with their silent vows… for each other…..
When the priest asked for kanyadaan…. Sister Amelia was there who always portrayed as a mother for geet was there to do the same.….. so nothing was more that she could expect maan has already done everything and completed it by making sister Amelia presence…….
And maan adorned geet's maang with the sacred vermillion making his forever and teing the mangalsutra round her neck…..
The marriage rituals completed…. And they took blessing of every elder….
Since their wedding took place in the morning so the rest of the day went by doing other rituals….
Also they have to leave to delhi the very next day…. So when maan came to his room…which was already lighted by the gracious presence of this beautiful newly wedded bride….
He slowly made his way to her…and gently lifted the veil to realize the most awaited moment of his life…
she was all the way shy and blushing…not having a small bit of courage to look at him…..
Maan gently unpinning her dupatta and slowly removing all the jewellary by giving tender kisses…. Geet gasped at his every move…an bit her lips in anticipation….
After accomplishing his tasks….
They gently look her lips in his… she was so soft…thought maan….. he gently took her lower lip in his upper and nibbled and kissed her… this was their first kiss… slowly she started to respond and he made his entry to her mouth…. To devour her… to kiss her…he was nibbling her…. He was tasting her sweet nectar…. Her rose petal lips were just perfect with his rough ones….. he was kissing her passionately….. and tried equally to match with his passion… they just wanted to kiss each other till eternity…but have to break when both were short of breath….
Geet immediately hid her face in his broad chest… hiding herself in his embrace…. And he returned her gesture with equal love…..
Maan gently placed her on the bed and kissed her forehead and eyes and closed her eyes…and whispered in her ears….
Maan: geet sleep now love…. We have to leave tomorrow….
Geet knew why maan not made the further love..and suppressed his desires…. She oblised him with all his love and pulled him with her to sleep…..
They drifted in a peaceful slumber for a new the new start of their life…..
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ext day they left to delhi…..
Geet and maan were welcomed by daadima by the grahaparvesh….. and introduced her to some relatives ….. geet very well mingled with her in laws….. soon only the four of them were left…. Maan's bua left to Canada…..
One fine day …after a week of their marriage…..
It was evening in the month of December in delhi…..
Well being in the freezy cold… and on top of that continous drizzling was making the atmosphere indeed romantic….
Geet came after the bath and was in her bathrobe…. Selecting dress to wear…
when maan hugged her from behind and nuzzed her neck… the sensation he was creating in her was beyond any bliss… she tilted her neck to give him more access…. He gently turn her and kissed her forehead….. her hands found their way to his neck and he took her soft petals in a soul searing kiss…. They were kissing each other passionately maan took her in his arms and made their way to bed…
he gently laid her and came on top…. Today he wanted to worship her with his love…. The love and faith she bestowed upon him is beyond anything… he asked her permission to take the further step and she lower her lashes in acceptance…. Soon their clothes were scatterd on the floor….
He kissed every part of her body…. It was not any lust..but the pure feeling of love… kissed her collarbone….adorned her by giving her love bites and sucked to reduce the pain…he kissed her above cleavage and soon took her inviting hard nipples in his mouth… he sucked ….. kissed and nipped her delicate skin… she just moaned pure estacy… for wanting more…. Soon his hands went to her treasure … she was more than ready for her …. He very gently and slowly thrust inside her…making sure she is not in pain…. She knews that it hurts for the first time but his care was something that brought tears in her eyes…. He kissed away her tears and when was about to withdraw she drew him closer and gestured to continue… soon they were lost in pleasure and passion that erupted through them…. And become the soulmate in true sense…
AFTER ALMOST TWO YEARS
It was the usual happiest day of there life…….since the day they got married although geet is worried for him most of the time……he had suggested that they could move to other place but geet refused saying that she doesnot want to to be the reason that his name get defamed…his business suffer….
So they are leaving in the same city ……as geet's parents and relatives she never inquired about any of them……
Infact the respect that she once had for them has been changed into hatred…that a daughter possess for her own relation…..
She cannot deny the fact that they were the reason….because of which both her and maan suffered a lot….
They almost had ended his life…..
geet was in the shopping mall looking at some baby clothes……there is a tiny little bump….showing her as expecting mother…..
The pink and orange colour sari with the glow on her face is making her extremely gorgeous….
She was looking for some baby socks until a hand touched her back…and when she turned she got the shock of her life……
When geet turned she saw her parents standing there…. She was shocked…and scared…not knowing what to do…. That's when a known warmth hugged her from waist…. And took her from there silently….
Since when they have been married maan has been more than careful about her… knowing her insecurities…. So there are bodyguards that always remain with geet without her knowledge…and they were the source of information for maan…..
Since they have returned home geet has been very tensed …. Extremely quiet….. which made maan scared about her… he didn't want her to keep thinking about those moments….
So went to her and hugged her from behind…geet stiffened a bit in his embrace… and worriedly said….
Geet: maan… why are they here…. What if they do something to you…
Maan: nothing will happen geet …do you believe me…. She nodded her head…
Geet: but if… maan immediately stopped her from saying further by keeping his hands on her lips….
And scopped geet in his arms… and placed her comfortably on bed… for some rest…
But geet pulled him causing him almost loosing his balance somehow he prevented himself from falling on her and came to other side….
Maan:(fake anger) what was that ???/
Geet: (all innocent) kya… you were going and I want you to be with me….so I pulled you…
Maan: acha…. Taking her in his arms… but what if I had lost my balance…
Geet pouted and said….
Geet: you don't love me anymore…and moved slightly away from him….
Maan: ohh… so my wife is having complains… let me show you jaan how much I love you….
Soon they were drifted in passion… exploring each other….
After some time… geet was resting on his shoulder and he was caressing her baby bump….and thinking something….
Geet: maan aap kya soch rahe hai….
Maan: hmm… geet I was thinking when you told me about our baby….. I can't forget the day…. You cried after giving me the news… I can't believe it….
Geet: is me meri kya galti hai… its all your fault….
Maan: my fault…. How.. care to explain…..
Geet: wo..wo…
Three months ago….
Life cannot be better for the….the separation of those two and a half years was something that cannot be erased from either of their minds ………
But today there life is cherished with their love ……the longing has ended…..for geet maan is everything …infact beyond everything……he was her life that she knew years back but now he is with her…….. the part of him is there inside her peacefully…..whom she is nurturing…who is breathing within her……
Geet was certainly beaming with happiness of having the having…and was very desperate to tell maan….when when she went to him…
Maan was in his studuy doing his work when geet entered…. She told him that she wanted to speak something very important….
Maan: haan… geet tell me…kya hua…
Geet: maan wo… wo..
Maan: hmm…tell me jaan…
Geet:(closing her eyes and after taking a long breath said) I am pregnant……on getting no response…. She started to cry…
Maan was literally in shock after hearing the best news of his life…and got almarmed seeing his life crying….and blabbering…nonstop…
Geet: ( crying and saying) I am sorry… I am sorry… she was repeating this and when doesn't listen to him… he took her lips in his to stop her sobbing…..
Maan: I love you geet….. and thank you so much….
Present
Geet: haan … wo mujhe laga…you are not ready for the baby…. So …
Maan: so you started crying…… you know that was the best day of my life…..
Next day geet was in her room with daadima taking about maan and his childhood…. She was shocked to know about maan's parents…how they didn't cared for their only son…..
Geet: daadima… did they tried to meet maan….. I mean.. kya kabhi….
Daadima: ji… beta..eik baar avantika aayi thi unse milne…. Paanch saal pehle…. Par maan ne unki taraf dekha bhi nahi….. aur hame unhe yahan se jaane ke liye keh diya….
Geet was sharing about yesterday's event with daadima…when a sudden commotion gained her attention….
Geet's parents have come… and when maan told them to leave…they were not listening to him….
Geet's brother: hum geet ko lene aaye hai….
Maan: geet aap logo se milna nahi chahti please leave….
They were hell bent upon taking geet with them… when geet came… and told in a cold voice to her brother…..
Geet: just leave from here…. I don't know you… and it would be better if you all leave…before I take some further steps….
Her mother came to hug her saying she is her daughter when she stopped her and told….
Geet: wo beti mar chuki hai usi din jis din aap sabne maan ko maarne ke liye planning ki thi….. ab sirf geet maan singh khurana hai… so just leave….
All were stunned with her extremely cold behavior towards her own parents…but as we all knew that to forgive someone is necessary to have faith and cleaned heart towards the person that geet has lost…..
Although after that incident her family never directly approached knowing what MSK can do with them…. It was after five months their love increased and completed their family with a cute little baby boy…..
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