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Posted: 12 years ago
Continuation...

Maan drew the car with full anger and speed while Geet was all lost in understanding wat will he do now. She remembered the time when she danced with Rahul and wat Maan had did ad this thoughts made her to shiver more. She tried to say something but her voice choked seeing Maan in an anger rage while her tears made their way down. Geet saw the direction in which the car was hading and was more scared now knowing tat he was they were not going towards their house but to the penthouse. She once again tried to say something but was shut by Maan while she closed her eyes getting ready for her punishment. The car soon reached the penthouse while Maan dragged Geet not caring tat she was getting hurt or not but he just pulled her and once after opening the door and shutting he pushed Geet inside the house with full force. Geet saw him in anger and she backed backwards but soon was brought back my Maan holding her waist and without any warning he smacked his rough and anger filled lips on hers biting, sucking and nibbling it making it to bleed while his hands roughly on her waist squeezing it with force. Geet could not take the rough and aggressive kiss and she inched in pain but Maan was nowhere to stop. he kissed her till he felt her weakened on her knees and once taking out his anger he holds her by her waist.

Maan: why Geet why?" why do you let the obsessive Maan inside me to awake. Why don't you get tat I cant bear any men near you. how could you let tat happen..

Geet was all scared but she tried to say something and raises her hand to touch his face but Maan holds it.

Maan: this is the same place na where he had touched you. how could you Geet , how could you let his hand touch your skin. How can I see anyone else touching wat belongs to me. How m I supposed to geet.

Geet: I did.. not…Dev.. was..

And before she could say anything else Maan once again took her lips into his.

Maan: No.. how could he.. how could you do….

And he kept on kissing her while Geet was so scared of him tat she did not even feel anything.

Maan: I had told you Geet don't let anyone touch you but you don't understand.

Maan broke form the kiss and holds her chin making her to look into his eyes.

Maan: why Geet why. Why do you like to see me in anger? Why do you let the obsessive and possessive Maan Singh Khuranna to unleash his anger on you why Geet why. Wasn't it enough tat I had allowed you for the party knowing tat you are not allowed to go but still how did you agree to dance with him. answer me geet answer me.

Tears rolled down her eyes while she trembled in fear while his hands rubbed her arm where Dev had touched her while his fingers reached the should and ripped her sleeve making it to tear while Geet closed her eyes.

Maan: open your eyes Geet, you have to see me, the way you affect me, the way I reach when someone else touches you. open you eyes.

Geet opened her eyes while Maan fuly tore her sleeve and hold her hand in air and kisses it all the way taking away tat Dev's touch. he sucked the flesh of her hand making it all red while he was just removing the bloody touch of his. Geet tried to the say something put the very next moment he tore her other sleeve while Geet just stood therewith tears in her eyes.

Maan: I wont let anyone near you nor anything else to stay on your body wat he touched.

Geet: me… sorry… I .. did.. not…. wanted… to.. dance… with.. him… papa.. asked… me…..

And before she could say anything else Maan pushed Geet harshly to the wall pinning her down with his strong and anger filled body and claimed her already swollen lips once again not bothering for the pain which he was giving her while his hands reached the neckline of her Kurti and in one forceful move he ripped it apart into pieces leaving her upper body nude while his lips still kissing her furiously and the very next moment his fingers tore open the salwar making Geet totally bare leaving in her only two piece inners. Geet eyes opened wide seeing Maan tearing her clothes into pieces while his lips busy in with hers.

Geet: please don't do this… m sorry…

Maan: sorry, why geet it was nt your mistake but his. he dared to touch my Jaan and now I will remove all his bloody touch.. don't you like my touch. don't you want to feel me Jaan.

The very next moment Maan kissed her neck making Geet to stop her words while his passion took over him he slowly moved his hands on her bra hook and played with it while his lips busy on her shoulder kissing her and taking her to a new world. Though Geet was scared with his anger but his kisses now were making her to drown in his pleasure. Get's hand reaches to his shoulder and slowly encircles them to his neck making Maan more passionate and he unhooks her bra leaving her fully bare upper body. He kneaded her soft curves making Geet weak on her knees and before she could fall Maan scooped her and took her over to the bedroom and laid her on the bed while his lips once again lingers on hers. Maan left her lips and bents down and pulls her holding her waist and the very next moment he fills Dev's touch on her waist, he squeezes it harshly making her to scream in pain but he closed her mouth with his .

Maan: No Jaan don't cry, see me just taking away his touch. He had touched you here na than how can I keep it. See I will take it away with my kisses.

Maan once again lays her on the bed while he placed his lips on her waist and kisses and holds her flash with his teeth leaving his mark. Geet holds the sheet tight and suppresses her voice to withhold her pain while Maan fully aggressively devouring her waist line while his hand busy on her panty line. Geet turns and twisted her legs with pain and pleasure but the pain was much more.

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Geet cuddled on the bed with soaked and tearful eyes seeing Maan burning her ripped salwar kameez into ashes with still anger filled eyes holding it in his hands. He crawled back covering her naked body with sheet while seeing Maan's eyes on her. she felt a shiver run through while her body was in pain with Maan torture while Maan just kept staring at the burning dress.

Maan: do you know Jaan, see I burnt his all touches into ash. See now there is nothing left on you nor his smell. I washed all his dirty bloody touch and now your dress, which smelled of him.

Maan threw the burning material away and walked back towards the bed and slowly hold the sheet covering her while Geet pulled it fearing tat he will hurt her again.

Maan: Jaan, don't get scared, I know I was harsh but see na still I did not do anything to you. I just removed his touch from your body and now its only mine and our love. let me see Jaan where it hurts you.

Geet slowly loosened her hold on the sheet while Maan pulled it away and was shocked to see her bare body covered with his bites. He controlled his anger and made her to lie down while he pulled an ointment from the drawer and applied it on her marks making her to flinch in pain and tears made their way.

Maan: Jaan, m sorry. I know I promised you tat I will control my anger but how can I Jaan. You know na your Maan can see anything in this world but someone else touching his Jaan, he cant. When I saw him touching you I could not control myself and my obsession made me to harm you. Jaan, will you forgive me Jaan. Please will you.

Geet had tears in her eyes and this made Maan more worst. He bends down licking them and slowly kissed her lips while she once again flinched with it.

Maan: m sorry Jaan.. pleae forgive me… na… see I promise I will never do this again.. See your Maan promises you tat he will not punish you for some one else's mistake. Please Jaan don't cry na.. please.

Maan licks her tears and kisses her whole face and takes her onto his arms while Geet just sat thinking tat he may harm her again. She could not think straight now. Not even few days passed tat they had a beautiful moment and once again it ruined and he himself ruined it. He had promised her tat he will not get angry but nope will his anger and possessiveness change. Maan felt her numb which made him to get more angry on him and he left her there while he stormed out of the room.

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Dev was enraged and wild with the turn of events going against him. His each and every plan and move to get closer to Geet was getting failed and this was adding to his frustration, he could not take tat the mere inch Vicky Khuranna was coming in his way and getting Geet away safely from him. he was getting wilder with the thought of his wild thoughts for Geet but he failed to turn them into reality. He was fully drunk and was out of control when he reached his hide out where the girl was held captive. Jack saw Dev in full foul mood and he knew tat today the girl would probably die. He knew tat her time was up and he slowly turned to leave, leaving them alone thinking tat right now his need was not there. Dev opened the locked room only to see the girl cuddled up in one corner of the room and he smirked. He went near her simultaneously opening his shirt and throwing it away while the girl almost hugged her herself fearing for her life.

Dev: you know I like when you epitome of beauty get scared of me. I like the way your eyes fear seeing me but you damn don't know tat you look more ravishing in fear.

He pulled her legs stretching them out while his one hand ripped her clothes making her all bare to him.

Dev: I don't like these pieces of clothes hiding your curves from me. I like them to be open for me all the time. But the truth is tat you can never match to the real epitome of beauty Geet. none of you can be her and I will prove it very soon.

Girl: please leave me.. please you have done wat you want.. please leave me now.

Dev: leave…(laughs) no sweetheart how can I leave you tonight. You will satisfy this beast with your body and my pleasure will me relishing your skin from head to toe.

Dev pulls the girl more closer making her lay on the floor all naked while tying her hand to the bed. He undresses himself in front of her and roams searching for something and when he gets it he smirks but the girls heartbeat almost stops. He comes near her and bends down while he roams his hands all over her body kneading and squeezing her womanly assets while the girl only screams…

Dev: ssshhh.. don't scream. You know I hate girls who scream when I enjoy. Yup enjoy.. don't take my hunger for girls as lust but its my need and I enjoy. Do you know if I don't get anyone to satisfy my devil I go mad and insane. You girls and your nude bodies are essential for my living. I cant breadth if I don't get want I want. Its like a drug addict for me.

Dev pouches on her ripping her into pieces making her to scream while he moves harshly into her.

Dev: I said don't scream when I enjoy. You are my need as now I want your body for survival. You know you body makes me feel tat m still every young and I cannot get old. I need to be handsome and active for getting beautiful girls. They are like my heartbeat but no one can take her place. She will be my last prey and I will get her.

Dev still continues to rip her unless he gets tired but hell he did not leave her. he smirks seeing the things near and takes them in his hand while he holds her screaming while he drains the hot candle wax on her skin making her to scream. Dev burnt her skin all over with hot boiling wax. The next was he places knife on her cutting her skin slowly slowly making her whole body to bleed and once again he feast on her wounded body while he fails to understand tat she was long dead but he continues to move and finally c***s her neck with the sharp knife leaving her there.

"You are the very creation of god and you are made to satisfy this devil in me. Your beautiful body and skin makes me younger day by day. Sex and your body are my way for survival and no one can take this away form me"

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Geet was still cuddled up on the bed covered with the sheet. She was so scared and lost but was brought back by the sound. She could not understand wat sound it was but she feared a bit and tied the sheet around her nude body and with great difficulty she reached towards the source of sound only to see a horror filled scene in front of her eyes. There she saw Maan all breaking mirrors, wood planks and wat not in his gym not caring tat his hands were bleeding but he was busy in his world of destruction. Geet's heart bleed with the sight and she though not strong ran to stop him and before he could hurt him more she hold his hand making him to turn and look at her.

Maan: leave me geet, I need to punish myself. I need to break myself for hurting you.

Geet: hurting, since when did you realize tat you are hurting me. Do you even know wat your anger does.. No.. you don't…

Maan just stared at her angry and sharp voice.

Geet: Its only destruction.. destruction. See around you and you will only see destruction. If this is not enough than I will give you more proofs.

And Geet removes the sheet covering her and says: This is wat destruction is called. This is wat pain and hurt is. Wat do you want to prove by doing all this tat you will punish yourself for giving me pain no.. you can never. You can never punish yourself coz you belong to me but sadly you don't trust me Maan.. you don't..

Maan ( cries): No Jaan.. I trust you.. I really do..

Geet: No you don't.. tats why when I danced with rahul you almost forced yourself on me and hurt me, when Rahul tried to molest me you almost killed him making me to fear you more. Do you even realize how I spent tat one month when you were away no you don't. I knew I always loved you but the depth of my love was known to me when I started to miss you, I started to carve for you. Your anger always killed the innocent and nave Geet and filled her with only fear, fear for you and your love.

Maan: Jaannn..

Geet: Jaan.. this is wat you call me na, than where is the love in tat Maan.. where is the real Jaan in tat. I do understand you possessiveness and obsession for me but when will you understand tat I want your love more than tat. When you will realize tat your anger is residing inside me making a permanent place and making me fear for loosing you. You punish me coz someone else touch your Jaan, but do you even realize how I disgusted I feel when someone else touch me. Do you realize tat I to don't like anyone else touching me except you. No you don't and you will never. You anger will finish everything Maan you anger will finish your Jaan one day.

Geet kneels down on taking out her anger on him for the first time and the sheet slowly slides from her body. Maan quickly holds her and covers her but she jerks his hand away but Maan forcibly ties the sheet on her body.

Maan: Jaan.. m sorry….

Geet: Don't.. I don't need your sorry but I need my old Maan back. I need my Maan who loved his Jaan. I beg you Maan I beg to you I need my Maan back before his Jaan goes away from him. before this unknown fear of losing you makes you Jaan to go away.

Maan does not say anything but he simply scoops her in his arms taking her to the bedroom while Geet stays lifelessly in his arms. He saw her face which was flushed with tears and pain but her eyes were blank but he could see an unknown fear in them.

Precap: Geet aloofness.. Maan trying to woo his lady love back.

Dev ………think wat he is upto… now…

Hi all.. here is my long update and hope you all loved it. Now I want you all to give me likes and long comments and I will soon give you one more update as I want top compensate for my absence..

I want to see how many Give gallis to Dev Raichand and how many to Maan…

So lets start…. See you soonnn…

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow lovely lovely update ji..i love u so much for giving such a lovely update..i dont know why but i love te update so so so much..te way my geet express her love to my maan was loving scene.. til now only my maan said his love to his geet by anger,with his love or by torturing..but today my geet bursted her heart to her maan..my maan knowns tat his jaan loves him more but wat to do som times coz of his angry he became mad..actualy wen i read like tis update i wil be crying,but tis update i feel so much coz in tis update i can feel how much my maaneet love each other..now my maan hav to manofly his jaan its a big thing for my maan in tis world..geet's babaji save my maan..but u want tis maan,for making ur jaan to cry..dev u thinks u r a devil but u didt meet te real devil til now,my maan,.wen u face him tat s te last day of ur life..u wil se te real hell.. shobaji ur giving som msg tat geet wil my maan one day coz of his angry,geet's words saying som thing,tat she said to my maan tat she wil leave one day coz of his angry.wat is tat shobaji?..im waiting for te reaction of my maaneet wen mona ask geet for her son..next part wil be my maan manoflying his geet naa.wow im jumping..i love te update so much,.
Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
What an UPDATE
DEV is such a DEVIL
kill him as soon as possible
Edited by URME - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm proud of Geet
she finally spoke up to Maan
i hope Maan tries to change
Dev ugh 😡
i can't stand him
now let's wait and see how Maan woos his "Jaan"
Go Team Geet 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
dev is something very scary and a mystery and vicky saved geet from dev but maan saw them maan anger geet scared and geet making maan realise what she felt of his anger



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Posted: 12 years ago
Dev is CENSORED ..i feel disgusting to call him human...loved the way geet said what maan anger meant to her .i hope maan atleast tried ..
loved the update
waiting for next one
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update dear...
Love it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woah That Was Long !! 😎 !!

But It Was Awesome !! 😎 !!

Youu Showed Everything That Was Needed To Be Shown !! 👏 !!

OMFG HATE DEV THE DIRTY DOG !! 😡 !!

Damn Maanz Anger !! 😡 !! Cant He Control His Bloody Anger !! 😡 !!

Geet Has To Suffer Most Of The Stuff !! 😔 !!

Loved It !!

Superb !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hiii
it was awsum...
i want to give gallis to the" khota dev"
how dare he touch geet...
when maan will break his hand?????????????? for toching his jaan
waiting dear🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱
love u😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update...dev s such a disgustong guy...geet finally spoke her heart out,hope abh tho maan ko kuch samaj ayega..

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