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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

yeppiii finally all problem got solved 😃👏

love the update ❤️👍🏼
but me sad bcoz u r ending this ss 😭
and very very veryyy angry on bcoz of the same reason😡


luv u dearo ...4 such a lovely response ...

thnk u soo much 4 appreciating ...liking n supporting me with my 1st SS ..🤗

n sia meri jaan ...every thing in this world has to be ended one day ...😉

but i ll be back with another story very soon ...😳

hopefully u awl will support me with that one also ...😃

me going to post last part ...hope u awl like that as well ..

luv ya ..

sobia ..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: inharika

haayeee u made my day...me dying to read the nxt prt bt i wud suggst nt to end it as we'll miss it...nd i thnk many of thm mst b agrreed frm me/...!!! doo thnk abt it lozlzz...

that was as a reader... now read my commnt as a writer...

i luvd it frm the botttom of my hrt it made me smile ...wen i had started reading it i ws vry sad {personal} thn as i started reading i ws simling in b/w ur mannet scenes made me smile in b/w...just luvd it...u wer doing a fantabulous job keep it up nd yaaa acha hai jaldi khatam kar diya lolzz...kyunki kya hai i knw kitna prob hota hia update krne mein no tyension i hope u'll start a new storyy soon..!!

blessing r with u...!!!

~~~garvy~~~


thnks a ton ...for liking n appreciating my 1st SS ...😳

luv u alot for all ur lovey duvey response ...it feels great to know that u liked it soo much ..😊

lots of hugss ...🤗...4 all ur appreciation 4 this story ...

hopefully u will like the last part as well ...😊

thnk u soo much garvi di ...

luv ya ...
sobia ...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

posting it in 15 min ...😊
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Ek Duje Ke Vaaste ...
.. an un-conditional bond of pain ...😊



hi friends hw r u awl ..??
sorry for delaying this ...but i was hell stuck with my coaching classes n moreover my net is not working properly ...
just came to update hopefully i will be able to ..
1st thanks a lot to each n every person 4 liking ..supporting n appreciating my 1st SS ..
thnxx a lot ..
n a biggg hug to my dearest VARSHA DI ....luv u di ...coz of u i posted this story n now coz of this story i met soo many grt friends ...🤗🤗🤗🤗
so here it is the last part of my story ..

PART 11

seeing the extreme senti atmosphere ...Rajveer interupted ...and said


RV : arre dadi ... jo hova so huva ab jane dejeye ...ab tou yeh soochye ke doctors ke hisaab se geet 1 week mien discharge hogaye gi ...tou ab aap bhai ki shadi ka mahurat kab nikalwana hai ...geet ke ghar aane ke baad yaaa ...phir mien pandit ji ko abhi call karoon ...kyun maan bro aap hi batao ...😆


Meera : kya Raj tum bhi ...in se kya pooch rahe hoo ..inka bas chale tou geet ko goodh mien utha ke abhi saath pheere le lien ...kyun ..hai na veer ji ..😳


Armaan : meer ...plzz tumhare veer ji kuch bhi chahe par mien apni gudhya ko itni aasaani se inke hawale nahi karne wala ...


Daai Jaan : bilkul poori rasmoon ke saath ...aur zoor shoor se vidaah karein ge apni bachi ko ...


Dadi Maa : jaisi aapki marzi ...hum bhi ab apne saare armaan poore kareinge ...


the whole shaadi conversation was going onn ...and the two love birds were busy stairing at each other ...dreaming about the future and blushing with every comment ...while listening to the noise coming nurse and doctor came to geet's room and told everyone to leave as only one visitor is allowed to stay with the patient ...


after alot of efforts by dadi ...n RV to get maan back home as doctors said that he needs rest coz of his injured feets ...n finally our angel geet made him go ...


as it was already 9 at night geet was also in a drowsy state due to medicines as soon as she slept ...maan agreed to go back to KM along with dadi, RV, Meera, and Daai jaan ...while armaan stayed in the hospital ...

its been 10 days since then and geet was now in her parental house SINGHANIA's farmhouse which is located near delhi but away from the crowded city ...a beautiful huge farmhouse ..with lots of natural beauty covering it from all side n a huge lawn along with pool n horses ... it was a huge farmhouse simple yet beautiful ...


daai jaan has invited maan, dadi maa, RV and Meera to stay there so that geet will be happy seeing them all around ...armaan is also at leave to take care of geet ...but cant do much as maan is always around her to take care of her ...😳


maaneet were shairing the best time of their life together ...away from the world with their family and friends ...their love was again over coming the pain of seperation for 10 long years ...and were on cloud nine for the fact that they were now 2gether ...forever but the worst part of their life was the continuous teasing session by meera RV and armaan ...while the two elder ladies were busy in the wedding preparation ...




ooopss i forgot to tell u allmaaneet are going to marry after a month ...as per the family pandit of singhania's have announced...😳


another day at Singhania house it was mid afternoon after lunch all the ladies were sitting in the living room discussing the wedding plans along with geet who seems to be in another world continuously stairing at the closed door of the room which was non-other than our MSK ...


Geet (st) : dekho aadha ghanta hugaya par ye maan abhi tak bahar nahi aaye 'ab meri kya galti hai ...mien tu aarahi thi inn se milne lawn mien par meera ne mujhe yahan phasa diya ...babaji ab tu mujhe inn ke paas jane se bhi thora darr lag raha hai ...waise mien kisi se darti warti nahi hoon par phir bhi ..juala mukhi ka kya bharosa kab phat jaye ...plss han babaji apni bachi ko aaj bacha lena ...


On the other side maan was pacing right left in the terrace ...angry on all of them for creating such situations ..

Maan (st ) : ye geet bhi na ..yahan mien subha se uss se baat karne ke liye tarap raha hoon ...aur who ...un madam ko tu fursat hi nahi hai ..acha bhala mene bahar lawn mien milne ka plan banaya tha aur ye jaki baith gayi sab ke saath ...mere saamne tu ek min. ke liye chup nahi hoti aur baqi logoon ke saamne tu itni bhooli ban jati hai ke bass ...ek bahana nahi bana sakti thi meera ke saamne ...par thek hai mien bhi dekkhta hoon ye kab tak chalta hai ...ajj tu mien geet se baat kar ke rahoon ga ...pechle 3 din se inn sab ghar waloon ka natak dekh raha hoon jab bhi mien aur geet akele hote hain koi na koi tapak parta hai...


Down in the living room Dadi, Daai Jaan n Meera was looking at geet n her facial expression which was changing every minute from worry to cribbing then to anger n then tension ...😉


Daai jaan n dadi maan whispered in meera's ear : Meera bete humien lagta hai ab ye mazaak khatam karna chahiye ...maan buhat ghusse mien gaye hain upar ...3 din se hum ne inn dono ko akele milne rokka hai 😲...ab jane dijeye...


Meera : kya daai jaan aap bhi ...ab shaadi se pehle mien apni bhabi aur jeejo ko nahi cheero gi tu kab cheero gi ...waise in dono love birds ka chehra dekhne layak tha jab mene geet ko bahar jane se roka ...ehehe ..

Par ab iss bechari ki halat par mujhe bhi taras aaraha hai ...aur aap dono hi keh rahe hoo tu thek hai mien ye game kuch time ke liye band karti hoon ...


Meera : geet ....(but our geet tu apne hi khayaal mien khooyi hai ...) (so meera raised her voice )GEET ...


Geet : han ...han meer bol ..kya hua ..


Meera : yrr who mere room mien ek shopping bag rakha hai uss mien kuch catalogs pari hain tu upar se le aa plsss...


Geet : theek hai mien lati hoon ...( geet is unaware of the fact that maan is now in terrace 😉n its entrance is in the way towards meera's room )


geet was walking towards meera's room while with a strong force she was pulled in side the terrace area (do I need to tell u who it is 😳..) ...


she was about to scream but before that she found her mouth covered ...Out of fear she had closed her eyes n after few second when she opened her eyes ...her eyes grew wider in shock seeing herself in his arms n she removed the hand covering her face ...


Geet : maan ...aap ye kya kar rahe hoo ...koi aisa karta hai kya ...matlab kuch bhi ...iss tarha mujhe kyun khecha ...pata hai ek second ke liye kitna darr gayi mien ... aaj kal na aapko samajhna buhat mushkil hugaya hai ...ya kaho na mumkin hugaya hjai ...kab kya karoo ge kisi ko nahi pata ...uss din bhi aap ne sab ke saamne ...sab ke saamne mujhe uthaya ...aur kuch bhi nahi hua tha mujhe sirf soo hi tu gayi thi sofa par ..par aap app tu koi muqa nahi chorte ..maan app ..

Aeloo mien itni dair se bole ja rahi hoon aap mujhe aese hi dekh rahe hoo ...aap kuch sun bhi rahe hoo ...maan ...maan .


Maan : han ..mishty ..kya hua ..


Geet : kya hua .??? ye tu mujhe aap se pochna chahiye ...aap aese kyun dekh rahe hoo mujhe..


Maan : kyun nahi dekh sakta ...


Geet : maan bolo na kya hua ..aap aese kyun dekh rahe hoo ..

(removing his one hand which was on her waist ...n placing the hair strands on the back of her ear ...cupping her face in his one palm )


Maan said : mien tu bas ye dekh raha tha ke kaise tumhare chehre par pal bhar mien itne saarw rang bhekar jate hain ..ek pal mien darr ...dosre mien sakoon ...phir ghussa ...aur agle hi pal Sharma jati hoo ...muskara kar dekhti hoo aur bas dosre hi lamhe koi cheetani karke sab ko hasaa deti hoo ...Mishty ...mere zindagi se ab kabhi mat jana ..meri zindagi ki har khushi tum se hai ..har rang tum hu ..koi khushi koi kaamyabi tumhari bina be-matlab hujaye gi mishty...


Geet (holding his hand in hers' which was placed on her cheek n tightening the hold) :maan aap aesa kyun keh rahe hoo ..mien yahin hoon aap ke paas ..aapke saath ..aur ab kabhi kahin nahi jaoongi ..aur phir meri aapni dil kabhi dharkan se door jata hai kya ...


With that he placed a soft kiss on her forehead n hugged her tight closing their eyes ..they stood in that hug for don't knw hw much time it felt at peace to be with each other ...


maan's hand was roaming freely on geet's back over her dress n with each passing second her grip on his shoulder was getting tighter ...


n maan started placing soft sensuous kisses all over her face ...from her forehead till her chin ...both were lost in the sweet moment


but the love birds got disturbed with the approaching steps of someone... Both opened their eyes n maan saw the crimson face of his angel ...while geet was looking down on the ground n was all red by now seeing the proximity they were in ...glued to each other tip to tow ...

she tried to free herself from maan's grip but failed ...


n within a sweft moment they were behind the wall as Armaan entered in the terrace talking with some event management company on call...


While geet was shocked beyond words with his advancement ...they never shared such moment although they were in love for 10 year but they both realized it only after their seperation n the only close memory was the first kiss they shared on the re-union's night ...


Geet was trying to loosen his hold but our majnu singh khurana ji was really not in a mood to let go her as he know after this whole family will be after her yet again ...Finally after getting some courage n over coming from her flushed state geet tried to talk but was continuously avoiding to meet his eyes ...


Geet : ma..aan plss.ss mujhe jaa..ane deje..ge..


Jhalli geet forgot that armaan was still in the terrace n heard some faint voice n was now approaching their side of terrace but maan bend down n hide themselves behind the plants ...n armaan went away ..


While maan was only looking lost at the fearful face of his mishty n the trembling rosy lips were inviting him ...


Geet : dekhye amy yahi hai who dekh lega ..aap plss ye ..


But before she cont. he slammed his lips on hers sucking her lower lips n stairing straight in her shocked eyes ..Geet was numb for a long moment as she didn't expected it n moreover the pleasure he was giving her with his slow passionate kiss was un-bearable for her ...she was going red with every passing second ... not able to understand whats going onn ...but slowly she gave in to the pleasurable sensation he created in her n closed her eyes feeling his love ...this new feeling n recalling there moment at the re-union's night ...They were lost in the passionate kiss ...which showed their love ..their longing ..their desires ...every emotion which they could never put into words ...it was beyond any explanation ...They parted for air n leaned on each others forehead panting heavily ...Geet was flushed ...blushing like anything ...both were breathing heavy ..




Maan ; mishty ..u taste too sweet to resist hw come I ll be able to wait till 2 more weeks ...Geet was turning red all the more if possible with his blunt statement ...


With the noices of people's hustle geet came back to reality ...


gazing herself in the mirror ...ready in a beautiful wedding attire waiting for his prince charming to come n took her away ...blushing with the thought of those close moments she spent in the previous one month ...


On the other hand ...




Khurana Mansion
is looking a mesmerizing sight fully decorated with lights and flowers ... nothing less then a royal palace ..and in here dadi maa is all worried for the preparation ...and instructing every servant and manager to do things in a proper way ...every one was running here and there and suddenly ..there became a pin drop silence as every girl was stunned by the sight... such a handsome hunk coming downstairs ...glad in white sherwani ...looking nothing less than a prince ...making every girl present there stun with the glint in his eyes and attitude on his face ...in the mid of all this a pair of eye was watching him in tears was dadi maa...maan came near her and wiped off the tears ...and bend down to take her blessings ...

Dadi Maa : khush raheye bete ...hum tou humesha dua karenge ke aapki aankhoon mien ye jo khushi ki shamak hai woh kabhi na mitte ...humari waja se jo bhi dukh aapko dekhne bare woh aapki zindagi ke aakhri dukh ke lamhe hoon ...


Maan : dadi maa plss aapne promise kiya tha ke aap ab uss baat ko kabhi apne mann mien nahi laayengi ...aur ye aansoo tou bilkul nahi ...agar aapki ladli geet ko pata chal gaya na tou usska kuch bharosa nhi shaadi wale din hi mujhe maarne mere peeche bhaage gi woh ...


.and both burst into a sweet smile creeping on there faces ...and maan hugged dadi side ways ..they broke the hug with RV's comment ...


RV : maan bhai mujhe nahi pata tha aap geet bhabi se itna darte hain ...waise .. drrna tou chahiye hum bechare patiiyoon ke liye yahi acha hai ...kyun adi ..


Adi ( giving his signature smile ) : bilkul Raj sahab ...inn patniyoon ka tou koi bharoosa nahi kab kya kareengi ,...sir aap tou ab bach ke reheye ga ...


RV : han waise bhi ye patni ..tou ...He stopped with seeing meera approaching them ...


Meera : ye loo ...yahan hoo aap sab aur mien poore ghar mien dhoondh rahi hoon ..waise kya batien chal rahi hain ...??

N she turned towards RV ..but our MSK the savior saved him...


Maan : kuch nahi woh aese hi ...par tum hum sab ko kyun dhoondh rahi hoo ..


Meera : han ...dadi woh ..sarii tyari hogayi hai ...aur baraat nikal ne ka waqt bhi hugaya hai ...tou aap plss rasam start kareye warna hum late hujayenge ...


Dadi maa ; woh tou theek hai par aapki singhania house mien kisi se baat hui ...unko inform zaror kar dejeyega ke hum nikal rahe hain...


Meera : kahan hui dadi... woh madam geet tou moo foola ke beti hai ke mien maan veerji ke side se aarahi hoon ...armaan ka cell busy hai aur landline koi utha hi nahi raha ...


Maan : mien try karta hoon ...


Meera : han aapka call tou zaror uthaye gi woh jhalli ..😉


but before maan cld make a call meera gets a call from armaan ...and went at a distance from the noises ...


RV : thank god ...bach gaya warna aaj meri khair nahi thi ..


while maan, adi and dadi was smiling seeing his hilarious scared face expressions ...



it is now ...Singhania House...looking like a bride ...fully covered with lights and flowers ... and the wedding music was setting the exact mood ...armaan was checking the last min preparation while daai jaan was hell worried for the functions' arrangements ...and the bride of the day ...was sitting in her room with alot of girls around her giggling ...laughing making her go crimson red with their comments ...


and now the whole house was at panic and all the girls were running towards the entrance to see just one glimpse of the most handsome business man of India ..


.while two shivering steps were heading towards the balcony ...holding the corner of her veil tight in her fist ...as the car slowed at the main entrance coz of the people dancing ahead ...the two eyes met each other ...and got lost in the moment ..


maan was totally blown off with the divine beauty of in front of his eyes ... dressed in heavily embroided red lehenga and a veil covering her head ...the elegance was oozing out of her every accessories ...her soft milky skin n the dark red color of the dress was a breath taking combination ...n the glow of her angelic face was doubled at this moment ...a sweet small smile spread on their faces seeing each other after 2 days of the marriage function ...for a brief second it seems like the whole world is stopped n both could hear the erect heart beats of each other ...




but soon the eye lock got disturbed as maan's car moved ahead and they got off they car for the aarti and proceeded toward the mandap ...


he forgot to blink the moment she came in the hall with her face covered with a veil the sound of anklets was making his heart beats high with each step approaching towards him she was getting cold ...while her cheeks were getting crimson red ...sitting beside each other in front of the holy fire was setting a whole new feeling in both of them ...a feeling of belong to each other ...to own each other ...


and soon maan's hand lift up to place the mangalsutra in her neck ...he was now thanking his stars that meera is lifting up her veil that was covering her face from him ...4rm the min she came in the hall ...just a small touch of his finger tips and her breath were stuck in her throat ...she closed her eyes feeling his fingers...on her forehead marking her with the color of his love ... forever ..she closed her eyes for a brief moment accepting it with full heart ...and he was gazing her without blinking even once ...admiring his mishty and her sweet acceptance ...her blushing cheeks and that slight smile on her face was making him fall for her all over again ...and they finally took the most sacred oath of their life holding each others hand ...promising to fulfill each of these promises till the last breath of their life ...




she was welcomed with all the rituals in the khurana house ...holding maan hand ...entered in KM ...


after a lot of troubles created by the female cousins for the ransom money maan made his way towards his room ...


Maan (st) : thank god dadi ne meera ko kaam se bhej deya warna who madam tu inn sab ki nani hain ...mujhe poori raat wahin rook kar rakhti ...gosh I hate these rituals bechari geet ko kitni time in logoon ne betha kar rakha who bhi uss stupid viel mien mujhe uska chehra bhi nahi dekhne diya ...




Finally he reached his room n opened the knob slowly n entered his room ...the dark theme of his room was looking ravishing n royal in the same time ...the dim light n fragrance of the roses were making him breath faster n then his eyes fell on the most beautiful angel sitting in the mid of a king size bed decorated with roses n jasmine flowers ... the room was perfectly decorated for the first night of a couple with lots of flower ..candles and dim lights ...everything was there but still he was missing her feel ...

the pleasant feeling that envelopes him every time he is around her was missing ...

Shuddering the stupid thoughts he headed 2wards the bed n sat near her ...his heart beat was rising with every passing second ...numerious thoughts were playing in his mind what to say ...y this weird feeling ...this awkwardness was never b/w them but then ...he thought to break the ice since she was sitting unmoved n with her stiff posture with which he guessed she was quite un-comfortable in those cloths ...He bend towards her to take her hand in his n start the convo ...but to his surprise she moved back ...He was surprised with her behaviour but then thought may be the girly feeling after bidaai ...so he moved his hand forward to take hers that was inside the veil n console her but she again moved her hands away ...


Maan : mishty ...wht happen jaan ?? r u alright...


But she was still in her same posture ...looking quite disturbed in those heavy dresses ...n then she moved a bit to set her lehenga over her legs ...n that's when maan's eye caught something ...N he removed the veil in one swift moment ...n stood up shocked to witness something like that ..

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sorry it was a bit long one 😳...IF didn't allowed me to post it in a single post 😆...so giving the second part in few mins ...till then enjoy this one ...😉



Edited by sobia4maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
a very nice story ...loved it
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Ek Duje Ke Vaaste ...
.. an un-conditional bond of pain ...😊


here is the last part of this SS


PART 11(b)


Maan : mishty ...wht happen jaan ?? r u alright...





But she was still in her same posture ...looking quite disturbed in those heavy dresses ...n then she moved a bit to set her lehenga over her legs ...n that's when maan's eye caught something ...N he removed the veil in one swift moment ...n stood up shocked to witness something like that ..


Maan : ADI 'tum '.!!!!!!!!!!!!!Tum yahan kya kar rahe hoo 'aur ye sab kiya hai '.tumhare chehre par tape kis ne baandha '''what the hell the going onn '.Will u speak up damit 'geet kahan hai ..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


N then RV n Meera came out of the curtains laughing like a maniac 'n maan turned to see them '


Meera ( laughing In between her words ) :Maan 'veerji 'uska tape tu hataoo tab '.hi kuch bole ga ''..


Maan : o' tu ye tum sab ki shararat hai '..RV tum bhi is ke saath mil gaye '


RV (trying hard not to laugh ) : sorry bro '.who kiya hai na pehle tu mene mana kiya '..par phir socha aaj ke din tu sab maaf hota hai na ''..iss hi liye ye chota sa mazaak '.!!


then finally both broke into laughter '..


Maan : just shut up u both '..mujhe samaj nahi aata tum logon ko ye saare ideas aate kahan se hain '.ab mujhe koi bataye ga Geet kahan hai '


Meera : geet ..!!! who tu humien nahi pata '


Maan : whttt '!!!!!! Wht do u mean tumhain nahi pata '


Meera : maan veerji ab itna bara mansion hai '.humien kaise pata huga ke who kahan hai 'aap khud hi dhoond lijiye apni MISHTY'ko ''


.Maan : meera tum ..


But before he can say further trio went from there laughing '.n

maan went to search geet '..after almost 15-20 min he reached in front of the terrace


(girls remember Kuch Kuch hota hai the way kajol was standing showing her back same ) '.




There he saw a girl standing in bright red lehenga with a heavy dupatta covering her 'the moon light was enchanting the sight n her glowing skin was a competition to the moonlight itself '.


He reached there n stood just behind her '.feeling him soo close she shivered a bit '.n closed her eyes when his cold hands reached her bare shoulders n he turned her around to face him '..


His heart skip a beat N he stood still with the mesmerizing sight in front of him ''her angelic face was glowing more than ever in that moon light 'n he forgot to blink '. standing there niharofying his mishty ..like it's the first time he is seeing her '.


Even with her closed eyes ''His conti. Gaze was making her feel like thousands of butterflies are dancing in her tummy '.n her cheeks were by now red with blush '.n she tilted her face down to avoid his cont. stairing which was making her feel vulnerable in front of him '..




Her slight moment made him to come out of his trance 'her tilted head was indicating that he made her shy with his intense gaze upon her but then he was hypnotized with her beauty so taking a step 4ward he closed the gap b/w them n lifted her chin with his two finger n made her face him '..n in a low baritune husky voice started the convo '


Maan : Mishty'..


She shuddered with the sudden proximity n His hot breaths falling on her face was making her legs shiver '.while maan kept his one hand on her face cupping it n other on her bare waist colliding their bodies.. sending currents to both their bodies '


Maan : mishty 'finally my dream became a reality '.the most beautiful angel created by Almighty is now mine'. ONLY MINE '.


Geet looked up into his eyes with all the love she had n tear lingering on the edge of her eyes feeling the depth of his words n the longingness he felt in all these years '

she placed her hand on his cheek n parted her lips to say something '.but maan stopped her placing her thumb on her lips ..


Maan : jo bhi bolna hai wooh baad mien pehle mujhe tumhain kuch dekhana hai ''.already meera ke chakar mien late hugaya '.


he said making a funny angry face 'to which geet simply smiled n lowered her gaze 'surprising her with his sudden move maan lifted her in his arms n made his way towards his bedroom '..geet shied n hid her face in his chest '




her breath was getting heavy with his each step towards the room but her astonishment he went pass through his room towards the next bedroom'.


He opened it n made geet stand on her feet in the middle of the room '..she looked around n found a huge king size bedroom... exactly the way she liked contrary to what maan's room has to be '..everything in this room was of her taste '.her fav colour RED..!! A perfect blend of simplicity n elegance just the way she likes '..she had a glint in her hazel seeing such a beautiful room...




n then her eyes caught a sight on the wall of the room '.there was a lot of snaps from the school time n from the previous month '.every special moment of their togetherness till now was there on the wall 'in the form of pictures '.she had a wide smile on her face remembering all the beautiful moments again '


N then maan came from back incirciling her waist '. who was till now smiling seeing the glow on her face admiring her '.n whispered in her ear ..


Maan : hw did u found your wedding gift mishty..??


Geet ( turning around in his arms ) : it's the best gift anyone could ever give ' maan aapne tu meri zindagi ki saari anmol yaadien mere saamne la kar rakh di 'iss se ziada acha tohfa aur kuch nahi hu sakta '..thank u maan ..!!


Maan : u don't need to thank me '.mene ye room apni best friend ke liye decorate kiya tha 'apne first project ke profit se(cupping her face in his palms ) '..aur ye pics jo tum dekh rahi hoo '.ye meri angel wife ke liye 'mishty this wall will be our MEMORY WALL '.



aaj iss pal ke baad buhat se lamhe aayenge jo yaadgaar hoonge '.aur unn sab lamhoon ko hum iss hi tarha yahan frame karienge '.ye tu bas ek shuru..aat hai mishty 'I promise u ab se mien kabhi kisi ghum ko tumhare paas bhi nahi aane doon ga ''

A tear trail was lingering on the edge of her eyes when maan traised his thumb n made it socked in his skin '.n placed a soft kiss on her forehead '

Geet smiled a bit n staired deep into his eyes '


Maan : acha ye tu batao mishty 'tumhain room kaisa laga ..??


Geet : room '.hmmm ( saying so she started walking in the room n goes towards the balcony n stood thr '.maan followed her with a smile n came in the balcony n stood at a distance just few steps behind her gazing her in the moon light her cotton white silky skin was shimmering in the moon light ' her bare shoulder n clearly visible waist was giving him a tough time) '.She turned around n saw him standing still '.smiling blushing furiously she asked '


Geet : maan 'aap mujhe aese kyun dekh rahe hain '

Maan ( lost in the serene sight of his mishty he said ) : bas jan..ne ki koshish kar raha hoon ke aaj tak aasmaan pe jis ko mien dekhta aaya hoon who asli Chand hai '.ya aaj jo mere saamne khara hai who chand hai ''


Blushing with his comments n the alluring desire she just saw in his eyes '.bending her head with the shyness of this arousing feeling he was setting in her '.she said ..


Geet : aasman pe jo hai 'wooh chand uss aasmaan ka hai ..jis ko dekhne ka ..jis ko pane ka haq iss dunya mien sab ko hai ''par ye chand tu humesha se aapka hi tha aur humehsa aapka hi rahega '' iss chand par tu sirf aapka haq hai '..


Eliminating the gap b/w them maan came 4ward n placed his hands on her bare waist incirciling her in his embrace '.gluing her with his body pressing her soft petite figure to his hard one he placed a sensuous kiss on her forehead n stayed there for a brief moment '


While geet just started breathing heavily with the closeness n then with his hot demanding lips touching her skin burning it with his touch '.she closed her eyes n bit her lower lips to subside the urge to moan '.trembling in his embrace feeling like her legs would gave away any moment ''..


but He took her in his embrace at the right time n took her inside the room '.making her stand on her feets near the bed 'the only source of light in the room were from the candles n the moon light coming from door leading 2wards the huge balcony '.They stood their entangling there hands with each other '.geet's back was glued to maans hard chest '.both were sensing the turmoil setting within them '.the darkness of room n cold winds from the balcony were making them tremble but their own erect heart beats were not even helping either '


Maan moved in front of her 'stairing at his shy wifey 'blushing like anything 'he lifted up her face n gestured her to see in to his eyes '.She obliged so softly to his command '..both got lost in the moment in the love they saw in each others eyes 'yet again their silence was speaking volumes '.he bends a bit n closed the gap b/w their lips n stopped just a mere inches away n staired straight in to her eyes like seeking her permission'''




n her trembling lips 'closed eyes 'heavy breaths n the deepened red chade of her cheeks said it all n he pressed her rosy lips with his ..ever so softly n placed his one hand on her neck cressing her cheeks with his thumb n other on her bare waist pressing her to his length 'Soon the soft lovable kiss turned into a hot passionate one n geet's hand were now on his nape incirciling him n pressing him even more closer to her '.


They both parted for air 'n rested their foreheads together panting ..while maan's hand were busy roaming all over her back sending shivers down to her body '..turning her crimson red '.not able to bear his sweet torture she moved back n turned ...


but maan holded her hand n moved towards her close enough to feel her hearts beat getting higher '.his hot breaths falling her nape was making her shiver '.not able to control she turned n hugged him like never before n maan engulf her against his body never to leave '.His hands went towards her shoulder to unpin her duppata 'while she just pressed herself more towards his hard chest hiding her self in to him '.


The moment her dupatta fall off her she gasped in the hug n moaned his name ' n the long awaited words came from her throat like a melody ...


.Geet : I love u maan '''..😳


With this he parted her n gazed her ever so lovenly '..the moment was divine '.just like the moment when he confessed his love for her 'taking her again into the hug 'he said ...


Maan : I love u too mishty '.i love u soo much '

MUSIC STARTES FROM HERE ''''..do listen the song its really awesom ..


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=neMj84LpIb8&feature=fvwrel


The second moment she found herself in his arms near the bed n he placed her on the bed towering over her '..caressing her face with one hand n putting the loose hair strands on the back of her ear kissing her forehead '


he started removing her jewels followed by a kiss with every jewel '.N she was getting even more red with a blush if possible with each of his kiss n moaning his name '.



Dhaage Tod Laao Chandani Se Noor Ke

Ghoonghat Hi Banalo Roshini Se Noor Ke }2

Sharma Gai To Aagosh Mein Lo

Ho Saaaso Se Uljhi Rahi Meri Saasein


Removing her jewels '..n freeing her hair with the tight hold of pins 'she hugged him tight n hid her self in him n he took her lovingly in his embrace '.smiling at his nave shy mishty '.

[Bol Na Halke Halke 2Hooth Se Halke Halke Bol Na Halke ]2

[Bol Na Halke Halke 2Hooth Se Halke Halke Bol Na Halke ]2

MUSIC''.


He started placing soft kisses on her nape n back of neck '..n his hands were busy roaming all over her back lingering his finger tips on her blouse strap '.While she just kept clutching his shoulders '..n gasping with each of his kiss '.nothing was this much pleasurable in her entire life '.this feeling was making her forgot the whole world n now even her ownself just wanting to melt in his arms '..

Aa Neend Ka Sauda Karein Ek Khwaab De Ek Khwaab Le...


Parting her from the hug 'he started kissing each n every corner f her face 'from her fore head till her chin '.placing soft kisses on her eyes ..making her open them ..he stopped for a second gazing in to the beautiful almonds of hers''''.

Ek Khwaab To Aankhon Mein Hai Ek Chand Ke Takiye Tale...


'.tracing her nose tip on the jaw line '.while his hands kept caressing her back over the cloth n rubbing her bare waist 'arousing her 'making her wringle in his hold '.n his hands finally got rid of that strap blocking his excess to her back '.n she clutched her shoulder even more tight with the sudden act '

Kitne Dino Se Yeh Asmaan Bhi ''.

Soya Nahi Hai ''''.

Isko Sula De.'''


He stopped n gazed in to her trying to read them '..whether to go further or not '.removing his hand from her back n lifting her face 'he said ..


Maan ; MISHTY 'I ..


But she placed her soft palm on his lips n places his hand again on her back wit her shivering hands n lowered her lashes '

[Bol Na Halke Halke 2

Hooth Se Halke Halke Bol Na Halke ]2


this was all what he needed 'a smile kept on his face seeing her acceptance '.he was feeling the most luckiest person in this moment '.

[Bol Na Halke Halke 2

Hooth Se Halke Halke Bol Na Halke ]2

he kissed her palm n then her bare back '.n got rid of her blouse '.gazing at the velvety soft skin of the angel sitting nude in front of him trying to cover herself with her shivering hands 'he placed her shivery hand on his sherwani guiding her to open his sherwani '..she was trembling 'this new sensation was making her whole body shiver '..with his support she pulled off his sherwani 'now both were sitting infront of each other with nude upper bodies '..geet's face was red with the blush not able to meet his gaze 'she hide her face in her palm turning on the other side '

Sargam ''''


N maan started placing hot wet kisses on her nape n colar bone '..while his hand went her abdomen closing the gap b/w their bodies '..she turned n gazed into his eyes which were now showing emmense love and an alluring desire '..she moved forward n placed her trembling lips on his eyes ..making him groan '.n he tightened his hold on her waiste 'bending forwards taking her into is hold they both layed on the bed with maan towering her with his upper body '.

Umrein Lagi Kehte HueDo Lafaz The Ek Baat Thi...

Gazing every inch of her face n her neck he started placing soft sensuous kisses on every inch of her upper body '.making her moan his name 'n increasing his desires '.

Woh Ek Din Sau Saal KaSau Saal Ki Woh Raat Thi...


She was long lost in his kisses which were becoming wild with each passing second '..his kissing sucking biting 'n then kissing the same area again '.her whole body was heaten up by his passion '.both could feel their arousal '.n this new feeling was making them lost this moment wanting it to stop for the whole n they could live their whole life like this being in each others arms ''.forever ..


Kaise Lage Jo Chupchap Dono

Palpal Mein Puri Sadiyan Beetadein

[Bol Na Halke Halke 2
Hooth Se Halke Halke Bol Na Halke ]2

Kissing her thoroughly 'he marked every inch of her upper body with his love '.n then goes towards her mouth n placed an intense passionate kiss 'to which she responded with equal passion '..


[Bol Na Halke Halke 2

Hooth Se Halke Halke

Bol Na Halke ]2


his hands moved towards the end of her lehenga ..lifting it up n reaching her inner thighs ..he rubbed them in the most sensuous way possible ..making her come out of her trance n she opened her eyes '..his deep dark desiring eyes were making his intensions clear n her eyes full of love '.n the red colour of her cheeks indicated her permission '.

Dhaage Tod Aalo Chandani Se Noor Ke

Ghoonghat Hi Banalo Roshini Se Noor Ke...

Sharma Gai To Aagosh Mein Lo ...
Saaaso Se Uljhi Rahi Meri Saasein...

Within no time they both were lying without any barriers n maan was all over her kissing her madly ..marking her his ''..n geet was lost in his love 'passion n the intense kisses '.massaging his nape with one hand n other roaming all over his back feeling him like never before 'scraching his back with her nail '.moaning his name ..

[Bol Na Halke Halke 2

Hooth Se Halke Halke Bol Na Halke ]2'


and he slid into her which made her moan his name in pain n pleasure ''..touching her soul ..making her his forever '.eliminating all the barriers b/w them 'a moment they would cherish forever 'few drops of tears fall from geet's eyes n maan bends dwon n sucked them kissing them away '.looking at her face like asking her if u are okiee '''n she just nodded with a smile '.n closed her eyes with his thurst '.which made him penetrate deep inside her '' a feel of being complete engulf her n she felt to be in heaven being in his arm ''.

[Bol Na Halke Halke 2

Hooth Se Halke Halke Bol Na Halke'''''''

the fragrance and the messed up bed with the shattered cloths and blood stains on the sheet was giving the best idea of their long love making...


now it was probably 4 or 5 am in the morning ...


the two love birds were sitting on the step leading to a large balcony ...covered with a white silk sheet ...in each others embrace ..tightning the hold with each blow of cold winds passing ...


her head was placed perfectly set in the crock of his neck and he was holding her like the most treasured possession of his life ...n y not.. after a long time of seperation they were 2gether ...


with each other ..forever stairing at the shimmering sky filled with glittery stars ...they were feeling to be the most blessed one in the whole world ...finally they moment came after which no one will be able to seperate them ...remembering each moment of their past ...every time they met ...and got parted ...every second they were away from each other ...


the longingness of 10 years were making them want to feel each other all the more ...cuddling more in his embrace she said ...


Geet : I love u MAAN...


Maan ( placed a soft kiss on her shoulder ) : I love u too MISHTY


Geet : maan ...finally hum aaj ek hoo hi gaye ...


Maan : haan mishty ...aur aaj iss pal ke baad ...mien kismat ko bhi ye mauqa nahi doon ga ke woh humien alag kare ...


Geet : 10 saal maan ...10 saal guzar gaye ...yaqeen nahi hota jis insaan ke bagair 10 min bhi nahi guzar sakti thi ... mene apni zindagi ke 10 saal uss se mille bagair guzaar liye ...


Maan : sach kaha tum ne mishty ...kabhi khawaab mien bhi nahi socha tha ke mien khud tumhain apne aap se door karoonga ...aaj bhi jab woh waqt yaad karta hoon tou apne aap se nafrat si hone lagti hai ...


maan wiped off the tear trails from her face ...and said ..


Maan : ab aur nahi mishty ... buhat aansoo baha liye tumne ...ab nahi ab mien tumhain kabhi roone nahi donga ...


Geet : par mien aapse abhi bhi ghussa hoon ...agar aapne dobara waisi koi stupid si mannat mangi na tu dekhna ...


she made a funny angry face to which maan only smiled ...


Maan (st) : mishty i am truly blessed to have u in my life ... abhi bhi tumhari aankh mien aansoo aye tou meri mannat ke bare mien soch kar ...geet ke babaji aapne bhi na poori dunya mien ek hi piece banaya hai aisa ...par mien sach mien aapko aaj thank u bolta hoon meri mishty ko wapis meri life mien laane ke liye ...


seeing him smiling and lost somewhere it angered her ...


geet pinched him slowly on his arm ...


Maan : ouuch Mishty kya kar rahi hoo ...ab ye kis liye tha ..


Geet pouted cutely and said : meri batien na sunne ke liye ...


Maan saw her cutely pouting and had a mischievious grin on his face and said :mishty tumhain nahi lagta ke tum aaj kal kuch ziada hi wild hugayi hoo ...


Geet blushed hard realizing his meaning ..and maan lost in her redish cheek placed a sensuous wet kiss on her cheek and geet was caught off gaurds ...cant do anything against his paasion which always turns her on ...and they were by now in their world of love ..passion ..and where there is nothing accept happiness ...😊




so this was the start of a new bond ...😃

hopefully u awl enjoyed it ...


thnks once again for awl ur lovely response throughout this story...


n the same request ...plsss give me ur precious comments so that i can knw where i lacked or which scene u liked ...


luv u alot ...🤗

dont 4got me ...

ill be back with another one ...soon ..😳

till then miss me 😛..luv me 😉...n keep dreaming about our maaneet ...😳


Edited by sobia4maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely story
do write soem more
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updates..
finally they were one after 10 yrs of separation
thx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum one...
Loved their sweet romantic moments..
Loved RV and meer's plans...
Superb ss..
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME SUPERB FABULOUS FANTASTIC UPDATE👏

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