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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update yar...
its the best so far...
sameera is dead...
how i cant understand...😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
sweety, lovely ss...I just cried my heart out reading all the 5 parts 😭😭
how can fate be so cruel 😭😭 to separate maan and geet, and now sameera is also dead😭😭

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Nyc Concept dera
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update 👏
really thrilling.. Sameera died.. People want to kill Maan.. and who is the girl that got shot 😲 😲
waiting for next update 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

EK DUJE KE VAASTE ...
an un-conditional bond of pain ...😭

teaser for part 6



DOCTOR :- ...unko goli unke left shoulder ke paas lagi thi...aur andar tak penetrate kar gayi thi ...usko nikal tou hum ne liya magar phir internal bleeding buhat hugai ...aur upar se unke checkup ke waqt hi humein pata chala ke unhoon ne kuch nahi khaya hai kafi time se ...so woh buhat week hugayi hain blood lose ki waja se ...aur abb unhe life support system par rakha gaya hai ...magar agar unhoon ne agle 24 ghantoon mien respond nahi kiya tou humien life support system se unhe hatana hoga ...aur phir kuch bhi hu sakta hai ...i am afraid agle 24 ghante unki zindagi aur maut ka faisla karienge ...

hearing all this RV stood frozen at his place ...not able to believe the turn of event in their life all of a sudden ...
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while all the other family members were standing there in tears ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb...
me waitinggg😍
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wow lovely fearful teaser...waiting...
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Ek Duje Ke Vaaste ..
.. an un-conditional bond of pain ...😭




hi every one h r u awl ??

hopefully u awl r liking n enjoying the story ...thnxxx for ur lovely comments n sorry for delaying this i just recieved my copy of DEVIL's DESIRE so i got engrossed in reading it ...n guess wht i ve recieved it today even after updating the teaser n still i am half way done with the story ...its an awesom one by ANIEE.H ...

luv ya ... 🤗 n

ENJOY THIS ...😊

PART 6

adi said he will get him out from here without any fuzz ...and headed 2wards maan .. but by then geet n meera saw a gun man at the upper floor of the hall aiming towards maan ... his finger where all set on the trigger and gun was focused on maan ... they both cld'nt w8t anymore like a statue ...n both geet n meera ran 2wards maan ...and then maan felt a girl pushed him aside ...😲



and there was a sound of gun shot ... every one panicked and maan saw a girl lying on her stomach on the ground ... his heart beat was rising with every second ... he was praying with every step he took 2wards her ...hopping its not her .. but all his prayer went in vain when meera turned her on her back to see her ...

he felt as if death took over him ...his heart stooped for the second and his breath caught in his throat seeing the very person he loved the most in the world... lying there with blood on her shoulder and hands ... for second he thought it might be a dream ...the worst dream ever in his life ...but it wasn't ...his trance broken ...his all hopes n prayer went in vain the moment he saw her eyes opening and fingers spreading in the process of reaching him ...and tears falling of her eyes ... the only word came from him was MISHTY...



he imediately ran to her and took her in his arms ...trying to feel her ... a smile was lingering on her face ...seeing her love safe ... while tears were making there way out from his eyes ... he parted her from the hug when her hands tried reaching his face to wipe his tears ...

she stared him with a smile on her face while he was continously gaping at the wound on her left shoulder ...and she said ...

Geet : mien dar gayi thi ...aapko kuch hujata tu mien tu mar... cutting her in between by placing his hand on her mouth

Maan said : dont u dare say that ...kuch nahi huga tumhain ..kuch nahi ...mien tumhain kuch nahi hone doon ga ... samjhi tum ...kuch nahi ( Geet was smiling seeing him the way he has always been ...scolding her when she got herself hurt ... )

Maan said ( seeing her charming smile ...he placed his one hand on her cheeks ) : kyun kiya mishty ...kyun ...( a tear scaped from his eyes ..fearing to loose his most precious relation ) ...ek baar bhi nahi socha... kyun ..!!

seeing her shoulder ...blood was oozing out her wound ...and he was feeling its pain ...yes its the way it has been always ...in their relation ...they feel each other pain more than the other person himself could ...

Geet : JIS KE LIYE APNI POORI ZINDAGI JEE ...AAJ USS HI KE LIYE APNI JAAN DENE SE PEHLE KYUN SOCHTI ...AGAR AAPKO KUCH HOJATA TOU MIEN ISS SE BHI HAZAAR GUNAH DARD MIEN HOTI ...😭

Adi: maan sir please ...jaldi chalye... gari aagayi hai ...hospital lekar chalna hai inko ...

...AT HOSPITAL...

Dadi came there ...hearing about the attack on maan and seeing the footages on tv ..maan holding that girl like its his life ... dadi came to the hospital and the sight took her breath away ...seeing her child sitting there with tearful eyes and hands folded ...head rested on the hand ... fear .. tension ...was clearly visible from his face ...the most powerful business man of India was sitting there helpless ...

FEAR n MAAN SINGH KHURANA ...

dadi was seeing him from last 15 min ..he did'nt moved an inch and tears did'nt stop at all ... she was wondering why is he fearing soo much for that un-known girl ...he was'nt even scared THIS MUCH at the time of sameera's death ...even though he blammed him for that accident but ..

what she was seeing was beyond her imagination ...her strong hearted grand-child in tears... her confusion took a toll when the nurse came and gave some of geet's accessories which she wore .. maan was all the way lost in the accident that took place ...and was engulfed in his fear to loose his mishty ...

so dadi took them and saw their KHANDANI RING .... now she was suspicious about this girl ...coz first she thought maan's condition is like this coz she saved him but this ... she kept her hand on his shoulder to bring him out of his thoughts ... maan looked up with tearful eyes and hugged dadi from her waist ..

Maan : dadi maa ...dekho na kiya hogaya ..meri waja phir mishty ko chot pohanchi ... mene pehle uska maasoom dil tora aur ab usse iss haal tak puhancha diya ... sab meri galti hai ...usne meri waja se apni jaan khatre mien daal di .. pls dadi ..mishty ko bachalo ...uss se kuch hugaya tou mien nahi jee paoonga ... mom-dad ke baad wahi tou thi jis ne mjhe dobara hasna sekhaya ...agar uss ko kuch hugaya tou mien kabhi apne aap ko maaf nahi kar paaunga ...please usko bachalo ... woh meri zindagi hai ...meri khushi ...meri jaan ... mera sab kuch hai ... please usse bachalo ...i promise mein uss se phir se kabhi door nahi jane doonga ...kabhi koi takleef nahi doonga ..but please abhi usse bacha loo ...dadi please...😭

even dadi was in tears seeing maan like that ...she never thought she will see him like this ...begging for the life of that girl like a small kid ...he was indead scattered and broken seeing his Geet like that n sound of that gun shot was echoing in his ears n her angelic face her tears ..her smile everything was making him week every passing second ... composing herself to made him believe that nothing would happen to her ..

Dadi said :- Maan bete aap hausla rakheye kuch nahi hoga unko ... aapka pyaar unki taqat bane ga... humien yaqeen hai ...woh zaror theek hujaiengi ...aapke liye ...aapke pyaar ke liye .. please apne aap ko sambhalye ...dekheye humari taraf ( making him face her ) sambhalye aapne aap ko maan ... dekhye unke theek hone ke baad aapko hi unka khayaal rakhna hai ...hai na ? ( he nodded ) tu phir ...app agar aise toot jayeinge tu unko kaise sambhalien ge ...



by the time maan composed a bit adi came with RV ..Armaan .. Meera .. Dadi got to know about maan n geet from adi ...as he is the only one knew everything about his love ...

dadi was feeling at fault and guilty to made him do something beyond his wish ...

while meera revealed the whole truth to Rajveer n said that

GEET AGREED TO MARRY RANDHEER JUST BECAUSE OF HIS DAAI JAAN ...SHE BOUNDED GEET IN A KASAM THAT IF SHE DID'NT AGREE TO MARRY HIM DAAI JAAN WILL END UP HER LIFE AS GEET IS HER LAST RESPONSIBILITY ...N SHE CANT ALLOW HER TO SPEND HER LIFE IN THE MEMORIES OF A NON-EXISTING RELATION N SPOIL HER LIFE ...😡

every one was in the passage outside the ICU ...w8ting for the doctors to come out...

while maan was standing in front of an idiol from past 4 hours and praying for his love ...his angel ...his MISHTY to be safe n secure ...

After the operation doctors came out and told geet's situation to everyone present there ...

dadi along with meera n RV went to see maan ... but they were rooted at their place seeing the most un-believable site infront of them ...maan singh khurana ... the mere mention of his name is enough to make people shiver was now standing with tears flowing out of his closed eyes and head bowed down ...hand folded infront of the idiol ... they never saw him like that ...never in their wildest dream they would imagine maan like this ...specially dadi ..as she has seen his rough n cold side ever since he came back from Dehradun ...

he has always been like that ... never expressed his feeling in words not even showed any gesture which would show his love for others although he loved dadi the most as she is only one in his family but never tried to show it ... but His MISHTY was the only one the whole world who never needed words from him to know whts in his heart or mind same goes with him ... May be that's the reason they became so close n attached ...

RV moved 4ward and placed his hand on maan's shoulder ... Maan opened his eyes and looked at RV with hope to get a good news ...praying every second for his mishty to be fine ...

RV : maan bhai ...operation is over n successful 😊...doctors said u can see her ...but

with that maan rushed 2wards the ICU without even thinking anything... assuming her to be concious and fine .. but

his heart felt thousands of needles peirced in it as he saw her lying on the bed ...pale and with alot of tubes and oxygen mask on her ... he closed his eyes in pain not even able to see her like this ...

..his mishty ..who was full of life ...who made him understand the worth of life ...the only person he had with whom he shared his feelings ...who understands him ...loves him without any conditions ...he felt himself at fault yet again for her state ...he cld'nt take the sight in front of him any more seeing her like that was equivalent to bear thousand death in every second ...and he moved back from the ICU glass window'..



he was walking backward with immense pain visible on his face while Armaan came and placed his hand on his shoulder and said ...

iss tarha tum usko aur takleef de rahe hoo ... uss ne ye sab tumhain bacha ne ke liye kiya ...tumhain takleef se door karne ke liye ..ab iss tarha toot kar tum uss ko aur takleef nahi de sakte ...uss ne humesha tumse pyaar kiya hai maan ...iss dunya mien sab se ziada ...apne aap se ziada ...tumhare liye ..tumhari khushi ke liye woh kuch bhi kar sakti hai ...
aur uss ne kar diya ...

...uss ke paas waqt nahi hai maan jao uss se mil lo ...sirf tumhi usski takleef door kar sakte hoo ...

Maan : ye sab meri waja se hua ...meri waja se aaj uski ye halat hugayi ...sab meri waja se... usne mjh se itna pyaar kiya aur mene... usko dukh aur takleef ke sawaii kuch nahi diya ...

Armaan : agar tum ne takleef de hai tou uski dawa bhi sirf tum hi kar sakte hu ... mien jantu hoon usse ...

bachpan se aaj tak jab bhi usko koi problem hui ...har khushi har gham ...usne sab se pehle tum se ja kar kaha ...

aur tumhare jane ke baad ... tumhari tasveer se ghantoon baat karte dekha hai mene usse ...apni khushi se ziada tumhari success par khush hote dekha...door thi tum se phir bhi jab bhi koi khushi mili tou humesha ek khalli pan dekha hai uski aankhoon mien ...sab kuch ..sab ke'.hote huye bhi woh dhoora pan dekha hai mene uski aankhoon mien...

usne jo kiya us par koi heraani nahi hai mjhe ...mien janta hoon woh tumhare liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai ... magar ab tumhari bari hai uske liye kuch karne ki ...uski zindagi agar koi bacha sakta hai tou woh sirf tum hu ...

when maan was about to head towards ICU ...just then doctors came out from there ...

Maan :kiya hua hai ...woh abhi tak behoosh kyun hai ...operation tou successful hua hai na...tu phir ye ...aap chup kyun hain kya hua hai meri geet ko bolye ..

Doctor : relax Mr.Khurana ...unko goli unke left shoulder ke paas lagi thi...aur andar tak penetrate kar gayi thi ...usko nikal tou hum ne liya magar phir internal bleeding buhat hugai ...aur upar se unke checkup ke waqt hi humien pata chala ke unhoon ne kuch nahi khaya hai kafi time se ...so woh buhat week hugayi hain blood lose ki waja se ...aur abb unhe life support system par rakha gaya hai ...magar agar unhoon ne agle 24 ghantoon mien respond nahi kiya tou humien life support system se unhe hata hoga ...aur phir kuch bhi hu sakta hai ...

i am afraid agle 24 ghante unki zindagi aur maut ka faisla karienge ...😭😲

RV .. MEERA ..ADI n Dadi Maa all were present thr n listnening to all this dadi broke down into tears n Adi supported her n made her sit on the bnear by couch while meera n RV stood still ...

RV was in complete shock not able to believe the sudden chage in event in there lifes ...he wasn't able to digest the fact that fate got be so cruel towards Maaneet ...while meer just ran from there shedding tears n RV followed her ...




Standing in a corner supporting his trembling body after hearing all this maan was completely shattered ...fear engulf his soul ...and he was no more in his senses ...he tripped on the ground and covered his face in his palms... numerious flashes of past came infront of his eyes ...

when they met first ...her smile ...the way she cared for him ... her cute angry glare ... her cribbing about everything in school... her taunting about his anger ...every time they were together ...their moments on the
re-union party ...his promise to take care of her ..to protect her ...her painful eyes at the airport ...her retreating figure ...every word spoken by her last time ...and that smile to see him safe ... he snapped open his eyes and wiped his tears ...stood up ...

Armaan : maan ...uss ko tumhari zarorat hai ..

Maan : tumhain ye kehne ki zarorat nahi hai ...mien usse kuch nahi hone dunga ...meri mishty mjhe choor kar nahi ja sakti ...uss ne vaada kiya tha mujh se ...aur mien uss se jane doonga bhi nahi...

putting a strong face he entered in the ICU ...seeing her in such a week state tears skipped from his eyes n his every attempt to be strong was now no more successful walking towards with trembling legs... he sat near her holding her one arm in his and placed a soft kiss on her forehead ... he said ...

kyun itna pyaar karti hoo mjh se ...mene aisa kya kiya hai ...jo tum ne mere liye apni jaan ki bhi parwa nahi ki ...mein tou apna vaada tak nahi poora kar paya ...sameera ke sath apna rishta bhi nibha nahi paya ...mene kabhi kisi ko koi khushi nahi di mishty phir bhi uss ne mere liye apni jaan de di aur ab tum bhi meri waja se yahan hoo iss halat mien ... plzzz mishty mjhe choor kar mat jao ...mien nahi jee paaonga tumhare bina ...wapis aajao mishty ...wapis aajao ...

mien jaanta hoon mene sab ka dil toora pehle tumhara aur phir sameera ka ...par mien yeh nahi karna chahta tha ...nahi karna chahta tha mishty ...mene poori koshish ki sameera ko apni patni maane ki magar nahi maan paaya ...jo pyaar tumhare liye mehsoos kiya ...jitna pyaar tum se kiya ...nahi kar paya mien sameera se ...aur uss din woh ye jaan gayi iss hi liye woh mjhe choor kar chali gayi ...aur ab tum ...

he closed his eyes with his face resting on her hand... tears flowing from his eyes non-stop remembering the day 4 months back when geet left for Spain ...the day Sameera died ''''''.

FLASHBACK...

sorry again 4 such a part but from nxt update hopefully u awl will at least smile a bit enjoy.. 😊

n plzzz do give me ur response it helps me alot in this 1 ...luv u awl 4 ur support n plzz be with me like that ...

PRECAP :-
sameera's death mystry will be revealed n some sweet maaneet memories from their time in DEHRADUN ..😳

PART 7 :-

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 13 years ago
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Still cryingg...😭...very emotional yaar...
Hope Geet 'll be fyn soon...
Update soon dear!!!!
Edited by ...Harshita... - 13 years ago

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