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Posted: 12 years ago
tis very very gud.

but epilogue?

when is geet known d truth?

pls give an interesting and nice ending.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hwcan geet did dat?...is she a human being or an animal...i hate her...

wonderful update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting
please update soon cant wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
ANGEL'S DEVIL

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Epilogue


now maan started to laugh like a maniac...after sometime he stopped laughing...
u are right...that's what i tell myself always...
he said in a deadly whisper...
HOW CAN I LOVE SOMEONE WHO KILLED MY PARENTS??

what are u saying!! she whispered..
WHAT DO U MEAN!!

it was U geet YOU..who was the cause of my parents' death...
NAHI!! this can't happen..u were orphan
I WAS NEVER AN ORPHAN...YOU WERE...then maan sadly smiled..

my mama & papa always went to a particular orphanage as they didn't have a kid for many years..then i was born,bt just because i was born..they didn't stop going there...then u came in that orphanage...own their hearts...we were happy until that day...

***flashback***
maan's parents were in a park with maan & geet..
they were playing with other kids & mr & mrs khurana were just sitting on the bench watching the kids playing..

suniyji..kya app vi wahi soch rahe hai jo main soch rahi hu???

mr khurana looked at his wife...hmm..bt hum geet ko apne ghar me layenge kaise..maan ki patni banana hai to hum use adopt to nahi kar sakte..

wahi to problem hai na...kya kare??

accha main orphanage se baat karta hu..

hubby ji..u are the BEST..mrs khurana hugged him & giggled.

are biwiji aaj bada pyaar aa raha hai apne pati par...

before mrs khurana could answer him they head a scream...it was maan's

they ran to that direction...

geet was missing & little maan was crying...

maan ..maan geet kaha hai!!

wo bure log unhe le gaye..

kaun..before maan could answer they saw geet in a lady's arm..

Kiran i am going after them & u take care of maan..& call the police..
bt...
avi behes karne ka waqt nahi hai


he ran after the couple who were running away with geet...


the couple were none other than the scandalous Dev's parents...


well apparently they thought geet as khurana child (cause she was almost always seen with khuranas) & thought of kidnapping her in order to get some money..


in order to stop khurana from following them they shot him...& the bullet directly went through his heart...


mrs khuarana screamed seeing him..she could no longer keep her calm & ran behind them ...while little maan was following his mother..though he could not really understand what was going on...


& before mrs khurana could catch them...a truck suddenly hit her...it was too much for little maan..all he could understand that his mommy & daddy were hurt...BADLY...



on the other hand..when dev's parents realized their mistake..they thought to abandon her..bt then thought better...they thought geet to rear geet up...they thought..jab badi ho jayegi to kahi job karke hume khilayegi...kam nahi karna padega tab..kyuki dev ka jaisa chalchalan hai..wo to koi kaam pane se raha..aur agar kuch nahi to bech hi denge...kyu ki..dekne se to lagta hai bohut khoobsurat hanne wali hai...

the police ..who arrived late...only to drag the two bodies at one spot, where little maan sat..patting his mommy & daddy's heads..babbling what he saw his mom doing many times...pain ,pain fly away...pain ,pain fly away...he knew..soon his mommy & daddy will be alright as he was making all the pains fly away.


agar biswas nahi hota to ye dekho..ye..aur ye...he threw one after another pics with his parents towards her...she looked at them..tears streaming down her eyes..


TUM HO MERE PARENTS KI MARNE WAJAH..TO PHIR KYU!!!! KYU MAIN TUMSE PYAAR KARTA HOON!! KYU MAINE TUMHE ITNE SAAL DHOONDA..KYU!! KYU!! KYYUUU!!


then he dropped himself on the sofa..as his he had no strength left in him..bohut roka maine apne appko rokne ki..lekin meri chahat..mera junoon..mujhe tumhare karib lata chala gaya...samaj nahi paya ki kya ye sahi hai??!! ya galat...par jab maine apne dil ki suni...to dekho...he again laughed softly..dekho...


suddenly he caught geet's arm harshly. his eyes were bloodshot red..he screamed as tears made their way through his eyes..

DEKHO TUMNE MERE SAATH KYA KIYA!! KYU GEET KYU!!!..


for the first time..shocking him, she laughed through her tears...she whispered...


i am happy that i listened to my heart.. instead of dev's words...

what??


before he could ask more geet slopped on the ground...

GEET!! sheer terror run through his spin..even now..his heart couldn't afford to lose geet...

he crouched down beside her..she kept her head on his shoulder..leo & augene are alright..maine unhe sirf drugs diye hai..jo unhe 24 hours ke liye sula denge...


aur...her breath became laboured...maine dev ke food pe poison milaya tha..par isse pehle ki wo jaanlewa baan jaye..maine wo consume karliya...

KYU...phir tumene kyu jhoot bola geet?? he cried in agony...


dil ki to sunli..lekin mera dimaag jo kos raha tha mujhe..apne hi parents ki murderer ko chahne ke liye..issiliye socha..agar tumhare...agar tumhare naf..nafrat se...mere death ho to...

geet don't leave me...i love u geet..i love u...she smiled looking at him & slumped in his arms...i LOVED you too...maan...


GEEETTT!!!!


he ran toward the hospital with geet i his arms..everything was happening so fast...

i am sorry mr khurana...

no..no..NOOO!!..GEEET!!..U CAN'T LEAVE ME..U CAN'T ..U CAN'T..he hugged him with sheer force...

with that jerk..a heartbeat in the monitor was shown...the doctors immediately removed maan from geet & tried to give her electric shocks...one try...two try...maan snatched the machine & himself gave her the last shock..screaming ..COME BACK TO ME

*****

with a deep breath...geet opened her eyes slowly..there was maan sitting beside her with all the world's love in his eyes..only for her...

he pulled geet more towards him & placed his hot lips on her soft ones...

my devil.. u almost scared the life out of me...phir kavi aisa mat karna..he said kissing her...indulging himself in her sweetness..

my angel...my life....she said in between the kiss ...a prelude to their new life...


here the angel's devil is completed...& it's for u guys to decide...who was the angel..& who was the devil...innocent & pure rabbit or the rude beast...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Epilogue is Tooo small
But the story was interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg
ek part mai itna kuj
happy to know that his pets r finr
bt maanu's past was painful 😭😭
poor baby lost his parents
bt finally my maaneet r together
4 ever
lvd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome epilogue ...loved it
past scene were painful
loved da happy ending
thank for sharing Urmela story n pm


Edited by Ru_21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!!! i didnt read last part but after reading that never expected GEET would have done that!!!
but MAAN ka falshback bi bahut bura ta...
n jab GEET ne sach kaha i felt relieved that she didnt do any wrong!!!
but her poison!!! anyways she is fine finally!!!
n they both accepted each other finally!!!
but it seemed like u rushed the epilogue... it could have been more with more wordings... but it was very nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great epilogue
will really miss this story

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great ending
it's a beautiful story and a amazing
thanks for the pm

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