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Posted: 13 years ago
di iam waiting along with my maan...😍


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Part 11:

It was a beautiful evening wen geet was returning back with her chotu finishing off her dance classes. The sun was sneaking out after the long drenching rains making the sight around look even more divine, pulchritudinous, radiant. She cudnt come on her scooty today as it was difficult for her to drive in the rain bt to her luck rain stopped out of the blue. Cool breeze was blowing around and she was enjoying thoroughly. She was walking carelessly not watching around and suddenly she hit an empty can of coke it made jerking sound and her devilsh mind caught a naughty thought


Geet: kyun chotu khela jaaye thodi der?


Chotu looked at geet in astonishment she was unable to understand her question. She looked at geet putting her tongue out. Geet let her down from her arms and hit the coke bottle with her leg hinting chotu to mimick her and this chotu being a badmaash did the same and soon both got busy playing with the tin taking it to be a football.


Both of them got so engrossed playing that chotu hit the tin jumping to a zenith with its head'''. that was it tin raised to extreme cusp and it fell into a puddle nearby spilling the water on to the black limousine which was parked beside the road making it muddy, sullied, dreggy. The driver who was resting inside the car who was waiting for his boss to arrive any moment was enraged. He came out of the car and looked at it and then geet.


Driver: yeh kya kar diya gaadi kharab kar diya tumko pata bhi hai yeh kiski gaadi hai?


Geet: bhaiyya gaadi tooti toh nahi na phir aab itna over react kyun kar rahe ho? Saaf karlo


Driver: aisa nahi chalega aapko mere sir ke aane tak wait karna padega warna who mujhpe gussa karenge


Geet: aapke sir kab tak aayenge?


Driver: pata nahi shayad jaldi bhi aajayenge


Left with no option geet sat on the raised platform near the car and the driver in the car. To add to his misery a heavy truck passed through and did the same to car now it got more grimy bt our princess was in her lala land listening to the songs in her cell phone raising the volume to the peak.


After and hr a man walked down the building in his office attire glancing at the car which was parked on the opposite side of the road. All of a sudden his sight fell on the car which is looking eva dirty he stomped towards the limo and called his driver asking for an explanation.


Driver: maan sir maine nahi uss ladki ne kiya' driver told maan as to wat happened showing geet who was now busy eating NO!!! licking dairy milk silk with the earphones still on in her ears. She was enjoying the chocklet sharing it with her chotu. Maan walked towards her. He looked intently her lips as she was licking the chocklet, uff they were so tempting and inviting he just cudnt stop staring at them he was getting carried away with an urge to take them then and there wen the honk of the vehicle behind broke his reverie. He recollected was he upto now.


Maan(st) : oh so she is training her doggy to do such things. Both of them will excel themselves in licking shrugging his thoughts away he roared


Maan: GEET!!! She did not pay heed he called her again madam was busy still she did not respond due to the earphones left with no option maan harshly removed the earphones bending down. Geet was mum actually shocked as now she understood that maan is the owner of the car gathering her wits together she spoke


Geet: aapne bulaya?


Maan: nahi maine chillaya


Geet: oh mujhe laga ki aapne bulaaya


Maan: shut up geet wat have u done to my limo?


Geet: who actually kya hua ki main aur chotu khel rahe the road peh coke tin ke saath u know and suddenly it fell into a puddle of mud spilling the dirt on ur car '''''''. It was then geet realized that she was blabbering continuously wen she was supposed to be quite. She let her head down


Maan: ruk khun gayi bolo!!! tumhe itna acha kaam jo kiya hai so it wud be obvious for u to boast that out and u look just like ur chotu (iss baar maan cautious ban gaya) licking the chocklet.


Geet: sorry I am really sorry


Maan: sorry kehne se kya hoga? Keep ur sorry with u and do as I say


Geet: tell me wat shud I do now


Maan: CLEAN THE CAR


Geet: wat?


Maan: You heard me right I said clean the car its ur punishment


Geet: par servicing centre''''''she was abt to continue bt maan's angry glare and she shut her mouth


Maan: car is mine so I feel I have a right to choose as to who will clean the car. I have a meeting to attend in two hrs so make it fast I am giving u an hr


Geet: dust ''. Danav''''.. geet was cursing him under her breath which did not go unnoticed by maan


Maan: tum pehle kaam karlo taane baad bhi de sakti ho saying this maan turned towards his driver asking him to get all the necessities for geet to clean the car. Geet gave maan an angry glare


Maan: yeh tuff looks baad mein do I have meeting dammit make it fast( kyun jhoot bol rahe ho maan sir? Aapko toh badla lena hai na? u can easily get an other car if u make a call to adi that too in 15mins)


Soon driver gave geet a bucket of soapy water and a cloth, taking them Geet turned towards car cursing maan


Geet(st): babaji mujhe itna himmat dena ki main iss aadmi ki murder na kardoo. Mere hi saath aise kyun karte ho babaji? Kya galat kiya maine? Musibat ko speed post mein aap mere pass hi kyun bhejte ho??


Maan: geet!!! Geet looked at him


Maan: tum upar dekh ke kya gul khilaogi? Ek hi jagah aise hi clean karogi toh gaadi ka paint nikal jaayega. Stop staring at me and get to work


Geet cleaned the car looking at her chotu who drifted to sleep on her bag. She got an evil thought in her mind. She cleaned the car and took out the chalk piece and wrote dust danav in caps, bold hiliting them that's wen a speeding truck did the same again this time making sure that the car looked even more horrid so was geet, along with the car she got ducked. Maan came out of the car looked at geet and his car noticed the words she wrote on it and gave an angry glare to her.


Maan: aise kaam karogi toh aisa hi hoga tumhare saath he said smirking looking at the condition of geet she was muddy her top which was white turned brown with mud stains and before she cud revert back maan ordered his driver to drop her at home making a call asking adi to send a car for him. Geet who was following his convo on the phone(kaha tha na maine dust danav u r right geet)


Geet(st): oh toh jaan ke mujhe pareshaan kar rahe the main bhi dekhti hoon agar badla nahi liya toh mera naam bhi geet nahi


Geet reached home thanking the driver she reached her home after taking a bath she saw meera was busy packing


Geet: meer why are u packing ur luggage baby? Are u going somewhere?

Meera: geet woh''..woh


Geet: since wen did u start fumbling with words my dear? Anything serious? Bolna


Meera: woh actually I am moving with yash for few days geet''''. to his flat


Geet: few days?


Meera: jyada din nahi yehi kuch 2 r 3 mahine yash ko promotion mila hai geet so he got a new flat and he wants me to move with him to his flat I cudnt say no to him geet


Geet: tu pagal ho gayi hai meer shaadi se pehle tu '''' chi chi babji iss ladki ko kya hogaya so u will have a livin relationship meer?


Meera: geet its...


Geet: its ok meer take care that u don't involve urselves into things u shudnt...


Meer: I understand geet and I am sorry for leaving u this way bt promise ill be back within 2months


Geet: its ok meer ill manage all I want is u to be happy and yes be careful with that ullu yash aur ek baar heer di ko iss bare mein kuch pata nahi chalna chahiye warna woh naraaz ho jayengi thik hai?


Meera: thik hai I am sorry again saying this meera hugged geet unaware of the storm that was waiting to consume geet


KISE PATA THA ISKE BAAD SAB KUCH BADAL JAYEGA!!! GEET KI JINDAGI MEIN WAHI AKELAPAN USKE PAAS WAPAS AAJAYEGA ... WOH KISIKE KASHISH KE AAG MEIN PATANGE KE KAISE JAL JAAYEGI


PRECAP: annual function maan trying to talk to geet

PARINEETA: iss NACHNEWALI ko toh main dekhlongi.. u don't know geet wat grave mistake u r commiting ...


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previous part: part 10

next part: part 12

Edited by dreamyharika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
kya di reserve karthe rahogi ya update bhi dogi😆
wow me first me first
awesme update as always di
hayee geet aur chotu choo cute
ha ha maan made geet clean hs car
dekha geet maan se panga lene ka natija..ha ha she wrote dustdanav that too in caps n truck ne kharab kardiya uski dress
maan ka badla toh pura hogaya i thnk n nw geet's turn
omg again geet is alone meera chali gayi yash ke paas
precap toh darawani hai pari kya karegi geet ko...cntinue soon di
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Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maneetlover1

di iam waiting along with my maan...😍



haye!!!😍 gimme 5 mins edit kar rahi hoon jaan😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
geet kitni cute hai nd her doggy...oppsss chotu
sooo cute
nd geet cleaning maan car
nd meera going to yashhouse precap seems ionteresting
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
bechari geet puri gandi ho gayi gadhi saaf karne ke chakkar maine...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update a lot...
Geet s really naive and dhamaka...
Unknowingly she made the car dirty..
then she waited for the car's owner..means maan!!
She s such a single piece..
Maan s torturing geet so much...
Looks like god too dint like that she wrote "DushtDanav" on car 😆
Geet s again going to b alone???
precap s confusing.. i mean maan s trying to talk to geet..is it related to krathi and karthi?
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Posted: 13 years ago

hahahahaha

it was hilarious update dear

poor geet usse maan ki car wash krni padhi...

nd ye maan bhi koi mauka nhi chodta usse pareshaan krne ka

lovely update

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome one...
geet and her chatu😆😆...
precap sounds very scary...
waiting to know the next...

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