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Posted: 13 years ago


Part7:

It has been a month since geet started her new life in delhi happy and independent the way her mother wanted'. Geet is actually living a dream now bt scared wat if this dream turns out to be the worst nightmare?? Her hearbeat raises rapidly wen such thoughts pass through her god the insecurities can eva leave her??


Rano wud call her almost everyday from gurvinder's phone making sure that nobody is watching her. Gurvinder has become biased towards rano as slowly he has started treating her like his mother while he pretends as if he is really rude with rano infront of darji and brij '. Geet thanked her babji for giving her a new life with new frnds. She cudnt have wished more she even got an other mother who is equally loving and caring like rano mama, gayatri juneja. Geet is a perfectionist professionally and gayatri admires this side of hers very much


Geet so much gels with the children that one word and the children wud easily obey to her. She knows where to pull the string. Geet now stays almost stays in juneja there as if its her own. Pooja being a doctor is very less found in the house and this void is now slowly filled by geet in the heart of gayatri and prem. Even prem and pooja started liking this nave and innocent girl. Slowly her bond with prem tightened so much that he started feeling as if she means more than pooja to him. He is actually shocked with the turn of events in just a month and also he understood y heer is being so protective for this girl. He now has two siblings geet and pooja in true sense. Prem shows so much of affection towards geet (which he cud only do with pooja) infront of everyone seeing them gayatri wonders how prem has changed so much as prem was an introvert towards females.


Life is neva so beautiful to geet. Everthing seems so blissful now. She can do wateva she wished for she now has all the rights how much she desired wearing those western outfits yes she can now!!! geet ke dil ka har muraad jaise pura ho gaya and now she is into the dance classes she joined them her passion of dancing from childhood is now fulfilled .Her situations neva helped to do it not anymore'' after skul hrs she wud attend her classes even there she has made a very close frnd neha. Now geet's world is complete, she has all the rights in her life to choose for bt poor soul has become so busy these days that her chotu started missing her very badly and now she is on a mission to manaofy her chotu.


RANDOM PARK,DELHI:

It was a sunday mrng and geet took her chotu for a walk in the park. She got very busy watching the soulful morning. Her heart felt so much in peace observing the tiny miny birds around chirping, singing and the dew drops on the leaves wen suddenly discovered her chotu missing. She started panicking and shouting on top of her lungs finding her cursing herself for being so careless around her chotu


Geet: chotu where are u?


Chotu lost her way. It's been an hr now She wanted to be badly in the arms of geet. She was terrified, frightened and all scared looking onto the crowd trying to escape.'. She ran fast in the park to find geet bt got horrified as many ppl were running as if it's a marathon and to hide herself she settled herself between two strong legs.


Maan was sitting in the park after a jogging for so long relaxingly under the shadow of a tree on a bench. He was talking to Prem on his bluetooth abt the meeting that was scheduled wen this puppy from nowhere made way between his feet and started licking finding them soft. That irked maan so much he finished his talk and looked at the puppy. Chotu started back at him with puppy dog eyes getting frightened with the red angry eyes. Maan was fuming in anger bt cudnt do anything and looked around for the owner of the puppy bt finding no one he thot of punishing her for licking him that way(ab chota sa bacha hai he cud spare her atleast uff). Then his sight fell on the meshed empty dustbin near the bench he placed the puppy under the dustbin. That's exactly wen geet came there shouting for her puppy. Chotu recognised geet's tone and she started barking. Maan looked at chotu all annoyed


Maan: thats enuf of u doggy don't shout like that


Geet heard chotu's barking and also maan's reply to her.. she ran to him like a tornado stood infront of him, looked at him with anger filled eyes.


Geet: meri chotu kaha hai?


Maan was dumbstruck with the beauty standing in front of him. Her cheeks became red due to her anger, hair completely curly. They were falling on her face as the fresh mrng gush of wind was blowing around and the cloths she wore'''. fitted black tracks and white sleevless top were flaunting how perfect her body was.(ek mahine mein itna change in geet uff babaji)


Maan(st): BARBIE DOLL (that was the name stuck his mind watching the girl).


Krathi(maan's elder brother dev's daughter) likes barbie dolls so much, he always gets her the lastest arrivals in the market' he just cudnt stop himself from comparing this girl with the doll. She was that perfect in her appearance. Her looks were something which nobody can eva resist.


He was so lost in starting her that his trance was broken wen she moved away from him as she saw her chotu under the dustbin. She picked up her puppy. Checked her out franatically, carassing her. Chotu started licking geet getting scared. (jaan mein jaan aagayi)She turned around


Geet: oye hello yeh koi tarika hota hai meri chotu ko dusbin mein dal diya?


Maan was baffled listening to the way this girl was talking to him nobody dares raise their voice infront of him and this girl has the audicity to do it


Maan: yeh kya tarika hai baat karne ka? Oye? Tum pehle thik se baat karna seekho phir mujhe tarike sikhana he spit out


Geet: mujhe mat sikhayiye kaise baat karna hai how dare u put my chotu in the dustbin?


Maan: wat? Ur dog was licking my feet u dumb girl so I had no other option


Geet: how dare u call mu chotu as doggy? Ek aur lafz kaha na meri chotu ke khilaf toh main'. Main haan main mardalongi aapko


Maan: ek baar apne aapko aaine mein dekho u hardly weigh 45kgs kamse kam apni personality dekh ke toh baat karleti? Tum? mujhe Maardalogi??(he said mockingly)


Geet: how dare u comment on my figure?


maan: u stupid senseless girl do u know whom u are talking to?


Geet: I just don't care who u are and wat u are for me u don't exist and after talking to u I understood how arrogant u are das sar vaala ravan aur haan dust daanav this is wat u are


Maan: chup!!! Bilkul chup!!! Are u in ur senses? Don't mess with me yeh tumhari jo akad hai na who main thik kardonga' he was abt to continue just then his phone rang again it was daadima he had no option than to answer taking the oppourtunity geet left from there to avoid the fight all terrified coz by now she understood looking at his guards that he must be a VIP


Maan picked up his call watching her retreating figure promising himself that he will set the score once he finds her again.



SO HERE STARTS THE ACTUAL JOURNEY OF GEET

yaar plz like the update special thanks to maneetlover1,remya_pillay,world-of-dreams,shrutheajay,deepa, for ur loving comments

and to all those who has atleast commented 🤗

and to the silent readers who liked the update 😊

no precap will update soon depending on ur likes if u gimme likes fast ill update fast😉


previous part: part6

next part: part8

Edited by dreamyharika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update...
So Geet's presence changed every1 around her..
Loved maneet's first meeting...
Barbie doll!!!wow!that was different...
I hope dev's daughter s studying in the same school where geet s working...!!!
i think when maan wanted geet to fall for him he shud first make chotu fall for him 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
wow maaneet meeting wth the help of chotu
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Posted: 13 years ago

amazing update

seriously she changes alot in one month

can understand jab ek saath itni feedom milti hai toh kaisa lagta hai

but we should be very careful wid watever we r doing while using dis freedom

nd 1st meeting me hi he consider her as a DOLL

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
chotu😳 too cute...
loved maneet's first meeting...
waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant update.loved it. sorry my like button isnt working[
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan feel for geet love at first sight?
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Posted: 13 years ago

toh...nw d journey begins fr geet...coz she met her soulmate n as usual jhagde se...maan aur geet mile woh bhi pyar se...ho hi nehi sakte...

awesome update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
oyee😉
UPDATE plzzz
super awsome update 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow di kya meeting hai indono ka..pehle meeting mein jhagda...ye toh maaneet ke saath hi ho saktha hai..
ha ha geet bhi na chotu ke liye itna lad rahi thi after all she loves him alot but fought with her would be lover..lol
wow!!maan compared her with barbie doll..see how sweet my maan is..he fought with her but nice comparison na...ab geet ki khair nahi she messed with msk...geet bachke rehna zara mere maan se...
cont soon di..will be waiting for next part

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