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Hello , I m Rachana , I write 2 ss on maaneet And 1 ff ON MAANEET
AN INTRICATE KNOK(COMP SS)
REDIO LOVE FREQUNCY (ONGOING SS)
SHART : RANG GAYE TERE RANG ME (ONGOING FF)

So this is a OS from me , plz read and I want ur commants , plz don't be a silent reader

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It was a arrange marriage of maaneet , everything was arranged by maaneet's parents , all were so happy , maan was also happy , maan's parents , maan's dadima and geet's parents , her brother brij was also happy , but in all this one person was not happy , maan gave a charming smile to geet but geet gave him a week smile ,

Maan was so happy , he was just gazing at her would be wife,

when he meet her for first time, he fall in love with her , like love at first sight

All the guest thinks that they were looked so happy with each other but for geet it was just a drama

After wards they took saat phera and they got marriaged

Maan was so happy like the no boundry of his happyness , perhaps he know about future and geet's intense

people take them to their room teasingly , and left then alone and close the door from outside
geet's heart beat raise as maan held her hand

before geet could say anything further maan lead her inside

maan : geet want u see OUR room ??

geet jerk his hand , maan shocked to see her reaction
he held her from soulders

maan : what happen geet ? are u okay ??
he said with consern

geet pushed him away

geet : don't try to be over smart , ya I am agree that I m ur wife and u have a right on me , so u can do whatever u want from me , but remind one thing I will never love u , and u can get my body but not my heart , got it ??

maan shocked to listen her words
but he try to be as calm as possible

maan : geet , I didn't marry u for my physical needs , I marry u bcoz I love u when I see u first time , nd I don't want ur body but I want u , by ur heart not by ur body

geet looked in her deep eyes , which shows only love , care and consern for her
geet lost in his eyes , she felt that if she listen his caring word for more time , she will melt in his arm
so she directly moved to the washroom , change her clothes and sleep on the bed

maan took the pillow and was about to go to the sofa , when he felf a tug on his hand
he look back and see geet held his hand
maan looked her in confusion

geet : u can sleep here on the bed , I don't mind

maan : but u ..

geet(cutting in) :I can trust u , u can sleep here

maan smiles to litsen that she can trust him , he didn't say a word and sleep beside her kept some distance

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1 month passed


geet never utter a word , she talks so less , when maan met geet on their angegment day , she was totally chatter-patter and bubaly type , and that day she was happy too
maan try to ask her , but she refused

one day maan came from office
he see geet crying on top of her lunges , she crying her heart out , her hair and clothes all messed up and she is laid on the bed

maan immideatly rushed to her , when geet see him , she immdeatly hugged him , maan hugged her with eual fever
his heart feel prick to see his geet's condition like this
he rubbed her back to sooth her pain

maan : shhh geet chup ho jao , don't cry plz , MISHTY dekho ,plz don't cry , look here

he gentaly loosen the hug and cupped her face lovingly with both his palm , and kissed on her tears

maan : geet , what happen , tell me

geet nodded her head to no no

geet : kuch nahi

maan : dekho , if u will not tell me then how can I solve that

geet : nothing maan , leave me

she tried to go but maan pinned her to the wall

maan : geet , I said tell me

geet : kuch nahi kaha na !!

maan came really close to her , his hot breath falling on her lips , that making her nervous and fell restless
he pressed her whole body under him , she shiverd with his tough
their lips only 1 millimitr away from eachother

geet looked down

, maan : geet , kya hua ? ( what happen ?) why were u crying ??

geet hugged him immedeatly and again cried

geet : he cheated me maan , he cheated me

maan took her in his embrace and rubbed her back for sooth her pain

maan : kon Geet ??

geet : maan he .. he' VICKY told me that heloves me, but he cheated me ..he cheated me

she still continuosly crying

maan loosen hug and made her sit on the bed , and made her drink the water
he sit beside her

geet : maan .. that day , when our angegment took place that day

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Flashback

Geet was so happy on her angegment day , not for that she is now fiance of MAAN SINGH KHURANA
but bfor a day ago he and vicky decided that they will runaway and got married

She loves vicky from the collage days ,

After angegment ceramony ,

Geet : mom plz I wanted to go for this trip plz , after my marriage I can't go with my friends plz

Geet's parents agree to send her in trip

Geet was not going for trip , it was her & vicky's plan to run away and get married
so noone know about their love bfor marriage and after marriage noone can do anything

Geet on phone : vicky ,plan is suceesfull I m coming

Vicky : that's great sweet heart

Vicky & geet get marriaged and vicky's friend arrange their SR room , geet gave herself to vicky , as she was trust him blindly

Next day morning ,
geet was sleeping in vicky's arm , when a phone rang , she open her eyes and see vicky is still sleeping in her arms , she slowly removed herself and took pick the phone

Geet : hello , who's this ??

Caller : hello, who r u ??

Geet : ji me geet , to whom u wanted to talk and may I know ur name ??

Caller : may I speak to vicky , I m his wife tina

Geet felt that her whole shatterd , that phone loose from her hand and cut into many picees
teares were rolled down from her eyes

Vicky get up , and back hugged her

Vicky : kya hua jaan ?? aur ye phone ??

Geet jerked him ,

Geet : stay away from me vicky , only for u I left my parents and my house and u cheated me

Vicky : but geet , what happen ?

Geet : don't act like innocent , u married , rit ??

Vicky : geet , listen me tumhe batane vala hi tha

Geet : kab vicky kab batate muje ?? all mens are dogs , u married me only fr ur desiers , to get my body he na !! now I can't give my heart to anybody to hurt it like this !

Vicky stood like a statue and then geet run away from there and reached home and act like she comes from trip and then she married to maan

Flashback ends

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Maan's eyes got wet listening her past , and he feel that why she was saying that u can get my body but not my heart ,

Geet : I am sorry maan , I didn't tell u this

Maan : its okay geet

Geet still hugging him side-way and maan kept rubbing her back to sooth her pain

Maan : geet stop crying , look if u will don't know about him at that morning then afterwards it will hurt u more plz stop crying

His each words only showing concern for her , she felt like she is so special today
she thought one man is marry her to get her and one man is married her but never touched her , but she felt sorry for maan
soon she sleeped in his arm peacefully , maan smiled at her and kissed her forehead , she smiled in sleep

Maan coverd her properly and sleep beside her , still keeping distance

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2 month passed

In this 2 monthes maan always try to cheered her to forget her past
which girl remind her past when her husband is so carring and try harder to get only one smile on her lips

Geet started feel for him , geet was thinking that if any other man was there and get to know about that her wife alredy slept with a onther man anshe hide it bfor marriage they he will give divorce to her , but this is MAAN not VICKY , and after knowing the truth he is still loving her

One day maan : geet let's go

Geet : but where ??

Maan : shhh chup bilkul chup , bahot bolti ho tum , come with me

Maan took her to the police station and geet see vicky behind the bar , her heart feel peace

Geet looked maan in confusion

Maan : geet , I m the maan singh khurana can do anything , tat night u told me about him I inqiure about him from ur collage he was in the same collage and see now he will behind bar
a anger come in maan's eyes and he rushed to the bar and opend it and started punching vicky , dishummm he swas nowhere to stop , vicky's hands , mouth all deeped in blood ,

He stop beating him as he get unconsious

Maan took geet home

Geet : maan can I ask u something ??

Maan : ha ofcource , isme puchna kya he ? ask

Geet : maan , do u still loves me after knowing that I hide u the truth that I sleep with other

(geet feeling hasistent , maan feel her restlessness)

He kept his index finger on her lips

Maan : geet it was not ur fault ''.and plz don't blame ur self and ha I loved u , I love u and I will always love u

By saying this he left the room

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After 2 day

Maan came from office , he enterd in room and see that light is off

Maan : geet , are u there ??

He open the light and shocked to see the sight

There was whole room decorated like SR and geet was standing there in white sari (as she never wore a sari infront of maan)

Geet rushed to him and hugged him , maan took her in his arm

Geet : I LOVE U MAAN I LOVE U ,

Maan's heart jumping in joy , nd he felt like perhaps this moment stop hear , one tear escape from his eyes , he hugged geet more tightly in possasive manner

Maan : I love u too mishty

Geet remember that he had called her as mishty bfor this also , geet blushed Hayeee !!! Butterflies were tickling in her stomach'.

Geet gentaly loosen hug

Geet : mishty ??

Maan : hmm u r mishty , as u r as sweet as mishty

Maan gave her a forehead kiss , she felt shied

Geet : maan , I really love u , I really never feel like this as I m feeling for u , I always wanted to be with u , wanted to in ur arms and I don't know I just want u each and every sec with me ,

Maan smiled on her confession

Geet : maan , when did u feel that u loves me ?

Maan took her hand with his

Maan : at the first time , when my family and me came to see u

A joyful smile teased her lips

Maan : I was never belive in love at first sight but when I saw u , I started belive in love at first sight , when I saw u first time my heart skipped several beats aur mene tay kar lia ab ye zindagi sife TERE LIYE

Geet : maan , I hurt u na on our wedding night

Maan place his finger on her lips , she shivered with his touch

Maan : shhh no more past , only present , and our future and present is we love eachother

She took his lips with her , first he shocked but soon he started kiss her deep

Geet spoke in kiss : maan take me with u

Maaan took her into his arms and both expressed that how much they love each other

Finally they be a one soul

👏

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THE END

(IF I GET ENOUGH COMMNTS I LL POST OTHER OS SAMJOTA = HALAT SE ?)
Edited by Rachanachag - 13 years ago

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awww such an amazing os 👏
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vicky bas... good maan beat him maneet love beautiful



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such a lovely os
do write some more
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Amazing superb and so nice thx for this os
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awesome-desi-glitters-5 os

loved it
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such a beautiful n amazing os...
we all love maan bt in this os m feeling like loving him more n more n also the respect for him has incresed...
after noing the bitter truth he said nothing to geet instead he loved her more... this is true love... without any condition n selfless...
yes he said right dat geet was not at fault... bt yes one thing is ther she ran away from her house without thinking abt wat will happen to her parents when they will no all this... n how much they will b humiliated... this was the only mistake she did...
bt again i will say amazing os
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Originally posted by: divya22

such a beautiful n amazing os...
we all love maan bt in this os m feeling like loving him more n more n also the respect for him has incresed...
after noing the bitter truth he said nothing to geet instead he loved her more... this is true love... without any condition n selfless...
yes he said right dat geet was not at fault... bt yes one thing is ther she ran away from her house without thinking abt wat will happen to her parents when they will no all this... n how much they will b humiliated... this was the only mistake she did...
bt again i will say amazing os


aweee such a lovelyy commnt , glad that u like it ,😊😃
yes geet should not run away bt pyar andha hota he
😆 nd she thought tat perents will forgive her after marriage😲
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awesm
poor geet was cheated by vicky bt maan still stood by her n even gt vicky punished!!
his love was true
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oh lovely os...i loved it so much..only my maan can love his geet without limits...i love my maan...i love my geet...i love my maaneet so much...

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