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Posted: 12 years ago
part 52

wow nice part

so geet went to save shanti and oh she was lying unconscious ...

maan was caught and he told vinod and karthik everything so all headed to girl's rescue

oh geet's plan nice ...

trapped sid

and waiting for last part ...

but don't know will we get or not ????

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part.
Bt maan ko goli lagi kya?
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FINALY SID GOT WHATHE DESERVED
HE SPOILED SO MANY LIVES
BUT MAAN IS HURT

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loved it
sacha pyaar jeet jata hain hamesha
the update was awesum
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Update dear...
Love it...😛
This ff is going to end...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 53:


note: plz add 'maneetmaneet' to ur buddy list for pms.


Maaan''.. shouted geet.

But before it bullet hit maan, vinod came in the middle and shot in his shoulder. Police punched him and took the gun from him, and arrested sid. They called ambulance for vinod.

Vinod fell on the floor in pain. Maan, geet and karthik rushed to him.

Bhai.. bhai called geet.

Vinod smiled at her and told I am fine gudiya, its very small. Karthik go and bring shanti, she might be very afraid.

Karthik nodded and went to the other room as geet told him she is there. He opened the door and saw shanti unconscious. Seeing her in that position his heart pained and tears formed in his eyes. But he is happy that now all the problems are cleared. He went near shanti and caressed her face.

Shanti.. shanti.. called karthik.

She stirred a little. She slowly opened her eyes and saw karthik. She felt like her life is back to her. She hugged karthik tight and cried. Karthik too hugged her back and caressed her back to calm down.

Shh, don't cry shanti, everything is fine now. See you are back to me convinced karthik. She calmed down and asked geet tho thik hain na? usko kuch hua tho nahi na?

Karthik smiled at her and told geet is fine and everything is fine now. police arrested sid.

Here vinod winced in pain, geet is crying seeing him in pain. A fear a loosing him again is engulfed in her. 24 years are enough, now she cant imagine without her brother. Enough damage is happened because of her not anymore.

Bhai, nothing will happen to you, I am here only consoled geet. Due to loss of blood vinod became unconscious. Maan held vinod's hand on one side and he is consoling geet on the other side. Soon they reached hospital followed by karthik and shanti.

He has taken to the operation theatre. Geet hugged maan and is crying. It became very tough for maan to console her. She is very much upset with what happened. But one good thing is that sid and swetha are out of their life now. Suddenly geet remembered about maanvi.

Maan, maanvi she is alone at home asked geet.

No geet, I called Vicky he is there with her told maan.

Geet sighed in relief, soon doctors came out and told everything is fine, he need some rest. Tomorrow they can take vinod to home. geet smiled through tears and prayed to babaji for making everything alright.

Soon vinod is shifted to ward. All the 4 stayed there as no one want to leave him. After some time vinod opened his eyes and saw all the 4 and smiled at them. Just then a doctor came for giving injection to vinod.

Maan, geet, karthik and shanti stood aside. Vinod smiled at doctor but in return he just got an angry glare from her. Vinod smiled nervously at her.

How are you feeling now Dr. Vinod? Asked the doctor.

Oops she is very angry thought vinod. I am fine Dr. Shilpa Handa replied vinod. But he want to bang his head somewhere for replying her.

Dr. Shilpa Handa, tumko ab pata chala ki aapki ek biwi bhi hain and unfortunately wo aapki bache ki maa bhi banne wali hain shouted shilpa and left the ward giving an angry glare at vinod. He made a baby face when she glared at him but no use. Other 4 looked at vinod in confusion. He looked at them and told wo.. tum sab ki bhabhi hain.

Kya?? Now you are telling us now? cant you say this before? Asked geet angrily.

Ha, I thought but ghar mein sab problems hain tho bolne ka mauka nahi mila replied vinod.

Aur tho aur bhabhi pregnant bhi hain, hey babaji gasped geet. Bechara vinod all are scolding him and no one cared for him. But suddenly he realized what shilpa told she is becoming maa iska matlab he is becoming papa. Omg omg is it true? Crap man now he understood why she is so angry.

When he turned to geet he saw all the 4 are missing. Even though his shoulder is paining but it is very small in front of this happiness. When he came home there are so many problems and he didn't get any time to introduce shilpa to the family. But in all this plan to trap sid he didn't get time at least to talk with her. He is feeling so horrible, how happy she could be when she came to know that they are becoming parents.

Here geet and others are in search of shilpa. They found her in a corridor, her eyes are filled with tears. Geet placed her hand on her shoulder. Shilpa immediately wiped her tears and turned back. She smiled at geet.

Kaisi ho geet? asked shilpa. But geet can see the pain in her eyes.

Bhabhi mujhe maaf kijiye, jo kuch bhi hua meri wajah se hua. I am so sorry for what happened apologized geet.

Maan thought shilpa would be angry on geet.

Geet, don't be sorry, I know what all happened. Isme tumari koi bhi galti nahi hain. Bas aaj vinod ko aisi haalat mein dekkar thoda gabra gayi thi told shilpa and hugged geet. geet is so happy to see her sweet sweet bhabhi.

Geet broke the hug and told bhabhi aap aaram kijiye, you go home. I will take care of bhai. Arey bhabhi ek min, yeh hain maan mere pati, yeh hain karthik mere devar aur yeh hain shanti meri best friend and sister.

Shilpa looked at her amused and others burst out into laughter seeing the way she introduced them. Geet sach mein tum bohot cute ho told shilpa and pulled her cheeks. Geet shied and looked away.

Bhabhi congrats, main bua banne wali hu yay.. shouted an excited geet. Shilpa blushed. Later they left vinod and shilpa alone and all of them left to home to freshen up. They reached home and went to their respective rooms. Geet lied on the bed and looking at maan who is taking out his clothes to freshen up.

Maan.. called geet.

Hmm answered maan.

Maaan.. called geet again little bit louder.

What geet? asked maan and sat beside her.

Thanku very much told geet and hugged maan by his stomach. Maan caressed her hair and asked why this thanku?

For coming in my life, its all because of you today sid is not in our life told geet.

No geet, that day 2 years back you were very tensed and feared of sid for what he did. But today you overcome your fear and did all this. I am just there for you always as your support. We both are strength for each other jaan. But promise me one thing if there is any problem in the future don't hesitate to tell me. Tumko tumari maan par barosa hain na? asked maan.

Geet got up and looked at him with teary eyes. I am sorry for what I did maan. I trust you more than my life told geet and hugged maan tight. Today she is feeling lite at heart, its like all her troubles are over. Now she can spend a happy life with her maan. Maan too hugged her tight. They were in the same position for a long time and they fell asleep.


Here karthik and shanti got ready to go to the hospital. They knocked maneet's room door but they were sleeping and didn't open the door.

They thought not to disturb them and went to hospital. Soon vinod is discharged and they all came home. Shilpa was little hesitant to come as elders still don't know that vinod is married. But karthik told bhabhi aapka hi ghar hain. She is overwhelmed and was really happy.

Geet got up and saw maan is sleeping peacefully with a smile on his face. She kissed her forehead and cheek and went to washroom. She got ready and came down. She called Vicky and asked him to bring maanvi back.

She went to the hall and heard a car sound. She came out and saw vinod and others are coming, when they were about to enter into the house geet asked them to stop. Shilpa thought geet don't want her to come now. she felt disappointed. Geet went inside and came out with in few minutes. She brought aarti ki thali to welcome vinod and shilpa. Shilpa is overwhelmed with their love and had tears in her eyes. Geet took their aarti and welcomed them. Shilpa hugged geet and thanked her.

They took vinod to his room as well as shilpa.

You two take rest, I will prepare lunch for all told geet.

I will help you geet told shilpa and was about to get up but geet stopped her.

No no bhabhi you and bhai has to rest, see how weak you are looking told geet.

But..

No buts and ifs bhabhi, take rest told geet sternly.

Mrs. MSK murmured karthik who inturn got a angry glare from geet.

Tu ruk main ayi warned geet to karthik and karthik ran from there but geet too ran behind him. They both are chasing each other. All of them laughed at their childish acts. Here geet and karthik are tired of chasing each other. They both stopped and laughed at each other.

Acha, I will prepare lunch now told geet and karthik nodded. Shanti went to Delhi to meet her dad and also to tell handa's and khurana's what happened because they are very tensed thinking what is happening here.

Geet is in the kitchen cooking, here maan got up from his peaceful sleep looked here and there with dropy eyes, he didn't find geet. he sighed and went to washroom to freshen up. He came out and wore his tracks and pants and went down in search of geet. then he came to know vinod and shilpa are back, karthik told they are taking rest. So maan thought not to disturb them and he found geet is in the kitchen. He made his way to kitchen and found geet busy in cooking. She didn't see maan came and engrossed in her work. Maan tip toed and hugged her from back. Geet startled due to sudden hug and looked at maan. Maan nuzzled and kissed her cheek.

Jaan I am hungry told maan.

Just 30 min maan, lunch will be prepared told geet continuing her work. Maan is caressing her bare skin making her difficult to concentrate on cooking.

Maan please moaned geet.

But maan's passion increased and started tickling her stomach making her lose completely. She left the dough and clutched her kurti tight controlling her desires. Maan is giving her wet kisses and her moaning made him completely lost. Maan made her face him and was about to kiss her he heard his princess voice. Maan and geet came back to their senses and looked at each other and smiled. Maan left the kitchen and saw his princess is running towards him shouting da.. da..

Maan smiled and took his princess in his arms and kissed her forehead. Maanvi smiled broadly at him and kissed his cheek wetting it.

I mis u da.. told maanvi cutely. (I missed u dad).

Aww me too missed my princess told maan and kissed her once again. He saw Vicky and smiled at him. Maan, Vicky and karthik chatted for some time in the middle listening to maanvi's cute talks.

Da.. yeteld I ate icecle told maanvi clapping her hands. (dad yesterday I ate icecream). Don tal ma (don't tell to maa).

Maan smiled and asked what happens if I tell to youe maa.

Maa sld me pouted maanvi. (maa will scold me).

Maan smiled heartily at his daughter's cute complaints. How much he missed all these. He missed pampering his daughter, his princess for 1 and half year. Suddenly he felt suffocated, tears forming in his eyes.

Princess play with chachu I will come now told maan and left from there. Maanvi went to her karthik and Vicky chachu and playing with them. Geet came there and saw maanvi playing.

Where is maan? asked geet.

Don't know geet, he went to his room told karthik. Geet nodded and made her way to their room. She opened the door and told maan lunch is ready, u told you are hungry na?

But she didn't get any response from maan, she went near him and touched his shoulders. Maan turned back and hugged her tight.

I hate you geet I really hate you told maan.

Geet is shocked and sad listening to him. Why you did this to me geet? I know we promised each other that we will not talk about this matter again but today after seeing maanvi I felt suffocated for not being there with her when she needed her papa. I didn't took her in my arms when she is born. I didn't name her, I didn't see her first talk. I didn't see her when she first walked on her own. I didn't there when she cried at night. Why geet I hate you for doing this to me geet cried maan.

Geet broke the hug and cupped his face. Her heart ached seeing his in tears. I am sorry maan, I am so sorry. All this happened because of me. I know I didn't give you any happiness, I am helpless maan. I am sorry maan told geet and hugged him tight crying.

Maan too hugged her back and told sorry geet I got emotional seeing my princess today. Sorry for making you think about all those things jaan. From today our new life started with our princess. Now today there will be only happiness in our life. Don't cry jaan I am sorry too.

They both cried their heart out letting out their pain, grief which they both bottled up for 2 years. Today their life gonna start again, a new start..

(This a from movie fanaa, just a small bit of the song)

rone de aaj hamko tu aankhein sujaane de

Let me cry today; let my eyes swell.


baahon mein le le aur khud ko bhig jaane de
Take me in your arms and let me drench you with my tears.

hai jo sine mein qaid dariya voh chuut jaayega
The river imprisoned in my breast will break free,

hai itna dard ke tera daaman bhig jaayega
and the pain is so great, it will wash down to your feet.

jitne paas paas dharkan ke hai raaz
As close as my secrets are to my heart,

jitne paas buundon ke baadal
as close as raindrops are to the clouds,

jaise saath saath chanda ke hai raat
as close as the moon is to the night,

jitne paas nazaron ke kaajal
as close as kohl is to the eyes,

jitne paas paas saagar ke lahar
as close as the waves are to the sea,

utne paas tu rahana hamsafar
stay that close to me, my life's companion.

tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan
When you're with me, what use have I forthe world?

tere pyaar mein ho jaayuun fanaa
May your love annihilate me.

Geet broke the hug and both wiped each others tears. Maan held geet's hand and told aaj se har subah tumse shuru aur har raat tumse katam.

Geet smiled and nodded and placed her hand in his. Aaj se har subah tumse shuru aur har raat tum par katam promised geet.

Maneet: adhuuri saans thi

My breath was incomplete;

dharkan adhuuri thi
my heartbeat was incomplete;

adhuure ham
I was incomplete.

magar ab chaand puura hai falak pe
But now the moon is full in the sky,

aur ab puure hain ham
and we are made whole. (from movie Fanaa)


precap: Back to delhi..


guys do u want me to end in next update or need maneet marriage and their HM.. 😕

pls do reply.. 😃


love

jyothi.. 😃


Edited by jyothikrish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
plzzz don't end...give us maaneet marriage n their hm update...
want to see some romantic moment...and
some cute moment of maanvi maan n geet...
yupieee me first...
Edited by pari1689 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was an update.awant a short marriage n then a short SR.You know i m getting bore of reading about their detailed love making in every other ff'.

It's my way of thinking.All depends on u


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Posted: 12 years ago
love it...
marriage n HM :)& happy. Updates.

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