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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
cute one
Dev gone 😕
Maaneet so sweet 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
Dev gone
What new twist next part

Waiting 4 d update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
geet whole day thot of ways 2 set dev ryt nt wanting to let maan dwn
n here maan himself asked dev 2 stop cmin bk coz geet was worried!!
awesm..!!

bt i think geet is d only one who can set dev ryt!!
Edited by nats0101 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Hey, I read all the updates. It's a fabulous ff. Marvellous writing,
I like this maan and geet.
Mainly geet innocent, so confused sole yet matured and bold with inquisitivness.
I really enjoy this ff.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
😆Haila Subah hi ek Update??? 😲
I luv second saturdays!!! 😆
Reserved! I'm neatly placing my bada sa handkerchief here! 😆

~Edited~

Here..I'm really confused about Dev...Y'day after reading Shikha' comment and todays' update. I thought a li'l bit abt Dev. 😆

Ok Yes..I actually shifted my attention from Maan Sir (It wasn't easy though!😆) to Dev and these lines caught my attention!

As if nothing mattered. How can nothing matter to someone like him? He had everything to live for. A caring, loving family. Loads of wealth. A huge company. Girls falling over themselves to be with him. What else did a normal person need for satisfaction? Everyone worked for what he had all their lives. And yet nothing mattered to him. Was he just plain lazy? For someone like her it was hard to imagine that anyone could be so aimless. He was like a rebel teen who refused to grow up.

What's with this person ? As Shikha said, probably his elder brother grabs everyone's attention , he somewhere knows that girls run behind his money ...All these things might have made him bitter ...Anyone likes to be loved ...that's probably the thing missing in his life but here something hit me..From when did Dev started becoming like this what's root cause? Maan's behaviour? Other's behaviour?

I'm sure that none of the family members hate Dev ! They might have been very loving towards him! The what's the problem?? His own foolish thinking or insecurities?

Maan's anger too must not have been right from the beginning . Dadima still loves him ...Annie cares for him ..chalo we have some reasons to say that he feels lonely due to some reasons...but what about being Aimless??

Did the bitterness in him made him like this? The Dev he is now? Probably the bitterness in him took the shape of this careless person he is now...He probably pretends that he doesn't care! Some things in his life should have made him bitter and that took the shape of Dev he is now!

Whatever it might be..I won't say that he isn't wrong ...HE himself changed his ways and he himself did that to him.

Many of us feel frustrated with many things around us ...We start turning bitter..We might do things that might not have a very good effect on us..Now this can be harmful if these feelings overpower a person then the person himself becomes a spectator of his own destruction. This happens because of one's own insecurities and foolishness.

Otherwise it would have made him more aggressive and he would have strived harder to make his own identity .

There might be many reasons behind his behavior but what matters is how does one deals with such situations and Dev surely didn't chose a very 'beautiful' path. I'm not sure if anyone's lovey-dovey words would change him .

So probably now someone needs to make him face something ...The guy needs to be slapped on his face (well not literally 😆 ) and be told..Look ...you better stop destroying yourself ...you better change your attitude 'coz they are people who are getting affected with this attitude of yours. Simply because they care of you and they can get hurt! That guy needs to understand that his own family members care for him who get affected by his dangerous attitude..this might make him more frustrated but he might feel guilty too..that might make him change his ways.

Here I'm not supporting Maan ,Yes Shikha is right ..Maan might not have been very perfect in Dev's case!! He might have made some mistakes but Dev is not a kid and he needs to take decisions for himself 'coz the truth is he himself can change things for himself and no-one else. Such is life! What he needs is someone who can probably make him realize and this is jst my way of understanding his charecter ,it might sound completely stupid.. 😆 Never mind! Probably that's way my mind is working these days!!! 😆

~Edited~

I re-read this and I'm seriously embarrassed!! 😆😆

Why the hell do I even think of writing about any character of this FF!!

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

THANKS GOD DEV IS GONE

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kasturi11

Amazing update.loved it.
Today I had an discussion with my hubby abt how people push on others there perspective of thinking n ESP him literally had a fight n came up for peace of mind.saw ur update n read it then I felt it would ve been nice if I had read before.these lines made me think
"i, things do not happen in the way that we want all the time. Sometimes people and things are forced down our throat. However bitter they are, instead of trying to spit it out or swallowing whole, why not try chewing? I am not asking you to stop fighting Vicki. Hold your fight"
Ur really amazing dear.learnt a point.better chew than spitting out but fight
Wow dear.thought of mentioning it as ur writing gets out a zeal frm normal person.every update has it's own say.I am loving it
Keep going dear

Yeah these lines were totally awesome..Well excess of chewing things might make people frustrated souls but some amount of chewing actually helps..In those cases we try to adjust ourselves according to the circumstances! It's very much needed sometimes!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

nahiii...dev gone...we wer analysing his character in depth...and yahan aake dekoon toh woh nalayak gayab ho gaya..😆..actually i found teh character of dev very intriguing...we cant dismiss him as a shallow guy...he really seems to be a layered character for him...as rightly put by G, he was a rebel, not like G, but nevertheless a rebel, who wanted shun responsibilities and life's harsh realities...in short yes he refuses to grow up...not becoz he has had a sheltered life, but coz he turns a blind eye to anything unpleasant...he seeks solace in more flamboyant lifestyle, which will be a reason of his doom , if left unchecked, coz he cannot lean on the cozy shoulders of his brother throughout his life...someday he will snap ...i really dont know whether my blabber really makes sense...u might have the story well charted out in ur mind, but all i feel is this character has the potential to be explored...but then u always spring up surprises which eventually convinces me that a particular track or character was needed to shape up the future plot ...i still dont understand whether he is character dheela or dimaag se dheela😆

No..I don't think he is gone!! Areh yaar..Soon Geet will get some clueand she will not leave this Dev! His akal will soon get tikanifoyed..He needs to realize hew things probably! (Or we need to realize that our blabbering is of no use ..JO hona hai hokar rahega ...b'coz it's a planned story! 😆)
Jo bhi ho..no matter how many layers his character has but I luv calling him...Yedha Kahika..Maan is always worried about him!

ok coming to the update...she had deduced it correctly that maan had wanted dev under her, coz only she would be able manage him...dev needs to handled by enforcing discipline...handling tasks is easy, but handling ppl is pain in the neck with everyone having their own POV...and what better than handling Dev😆

does she still believe that maan doesnt want to be seen with her in front of dev...or is it we are missing something and i am reading too much between the lines...probably maan really doesnt want to be seen with her before dev, coz he wants to avoid any speculation, since what they share is in its nascent stage...i really am sounding confused

Nooo..Nahiii..I don't think that's the reason if so it'll look odd..considering the way these charecters have been sketched...Nothing can have a simple-single reason!!Hai na! ( Even I don't know what I have jst said 🤣)

when G approaches M for getting her niggling doubts cleared...she does this rapid fire of questions...only to get counterquestioned, leaving her frustrated, with no proper answers for her questions...this shows that maan never answers a question directly ...he leaves the other person to get the answer themself, he doesnt believe in justifying himself or giving explanations for any act /behavior...
This Maan na..I sometimes feel that he is jst not a person but something different..(Oh no please don't think that I'm calling him a God or a shaitaan 😆 )
He is like a book ,a poem ,Someone whom you can see as you wish him to be..Someone whom you could see as you would like him to see!! He is like a sea..He is like 'Life'!
Please someone save me..I'm hopelessley in love with this guy..I soo desperately want to read from there "And then Ms. Geet Handa enters his cabin" !! The interview wala day!!

today i found V showing a bit of irritation when pinky suggested G shud do something, having all the luck being surrounded by hunks😆...

i really missed vicky...and his mooning (not literally ) over G😆

I missed Vicky too..I like him! Well I like everyone here!!

Geet "Ya how is it going Vicki? Any new projects? What happened at the presentation?"

Vicki "Presentation went good. But Sasha was saying that we need to remove some of the notes you had written. She was saying most of it was unnecessary."

Geet "What! Everything I had written was useful! Why would she want to remove it??"

Vicki "I know but what to do! She has the final say. I have to make some changes too. Minor things here and there. Hope you wont get upset about this Geet. I know it meant a lot to you."

Geet had no words. She felt a weird sort of pain. As if someone had pinched her baby.

Geet "Vicki, I know you are trying your best. Do what you think is best. It is not my design anymore."

Vicki looked crestfallen.

Geet "Vicki, don't get disheartened by this. The design was only a first draft. Fat chance that it was going to be accepted as is. Sasha has more experience in dealing with all this. So it might be good to listen to her. Why don't you trust her for a change?"

Vicki "Trust! How can I trust the person who cannot see me smiling Geet?"

Geet "Vicki, sometimes one is cruel to be kind. May be this is her way to make you better. I have learned the hard way that things are not always as they seem."

Vicki "Are you siding with her now?"

Geet "I am not on any side Vicki. I just want what is best for you. Ok you can do one thing."

Vicki "Yes tell me."

Geet "For this one project, do whatever she tells you to do with your eyes closed. Full trust and faith. Don't question her decision or motives. And see how things turn out. If you feel the results are not what you deserve then from the next project we can think on what to do."

Vicki "Geet, you are talking like this! You, the person who taught me to fight? What is happening to you Geet?"

Geet "Vicki, may be it is not always about fighting. Initally you were fighting in one way and I taught you to fight in another way. May be sometimes not fighting is the fight."

Vicki "I don't understand Geet."

Geet "There is again nothing to understand Vicki, things do not happen in the way that we want all the time. Sometimes people and things are forced down our throat. However bitter they are, instead of trying to spit it out or swallowing whole, why not try chewing? I am not asking you to stop fighting Vicki. Hold your fight. Remember it is all about making your importance felt. Sasha's trust on you is more important than your trust on Sasha. Trust is never a one way street."

Vicki "Ok Geet, I trust your words. I will just go along with this project."

Geet "But don't stay quiet if you are not comfortable with something. Voice whatever your opinions are and if she denies you instead of arguing try and think of the reason behind her actions."


the above convo seemed very intriguing to me...G is someone who doesnt lose hope...and she always has this neverdying fighting spirit in her...and i agree with her on one point, when u r in a situation which leaves u with no choice, rather than fighting or cribbing about it, and developing all negative thoughts , its better to accept the inevitable and try to get done with it...
this entire convo was insightful and just made me develop respect for her all the more...she exhibits a rare maturity which is beyond her age and a matching IQ and EQ, which not only makes her dissect a problem, resolve it objectively but all show empathy where required...logic and empathy rarely go together


Geet "Sir, I am so sorry. Dev is not in today. I did not realize until now. I got so caught up that'"

Maan "I myself asked him not to come in today."

Geet stared at him "Why Sir??"

He did not reply. Of course for her sake!! She had been upset the last couple of days because of Dev. She was so overwhelmed. She had no words. She just started crying and embraced him over the shoulder tightly. How could she ever stay away from this man?

Maan "Geet, stop crying please'.he is gone now. He will never come back."



the first thing i realised is was maan saying

Maan "Geet, stop crying please'.he is gone now. He will never come back.".. was D a monster that maan is saying he is gone and never come back...i felt like the hero is consoling the heroine that the villain is dead...so stop pouring ur tears 😆.

Nahi Geetu..Nahi..bas rok lo in aansuon ko..Tumhari aankhon se behta hua ek ek aansoon .. yaha..yaha (showing his heart) chubta hai!! Bas Geet bhool jao use ek darawna sapna smajhke..Bhool Jao Geet!! Ab kabhi bhi tumhe us darwane monster ka samna nahi karna padega!!

🤣 🤣

Bechaare Dev ko toh aapne seedha monster bana diya diya!! 🤣

(Stupid jokes 😆 )

.ok my humour was illtimed...but this line seriously leaves me baffled😕


.was he stopped by maan to come to ofice, just coz G was stressed out coz of him or he was being doubtful and insecure about having G and D...though the word insecurity sounds alien to me when used in MSK's context...but then my hyper imaginative mind cannot dismiss that scenario...was dev really that intolerable and unmanageable...or probably she was too young and inexperienced to handle the likes of dev...this was one decision which maan had taken not from a professional POV...he is a man who is unyielding when it comes to his work, and doesnt tolerate any kind of mediocrity...so i was just left wondering whether bringing dev in office...what cud be the possible motives from maan's POV

was he expecting G to put some sense in D with her unconventional means...when M had not been able to reform him , how is it practical to expect G to make D realise the futility of his lavish ways which is leading him towards his doom...was he that confident that G wud be able to get D involved in business, atleast in some kind of productive work, if not by force atleast by persuasion...


was D really brought to KC, so that he cud learn a thing or two about business under the tutelage of G...this seems highly improbably...a def NO..today's update confirmed ...coz if that was the case M would have stopped D from coming to office after witnessing G stressing herself out...
now what i wud like to ask is, will D agree so easily, coz he has developed this fascination , admiration for G, will he not be curious to know this mystic beauty G...and dig out the reasons as to why G is immune to him, and why he is drawn to her...

did M want D to be engaged so that he distances himself away from his wild lifestyle and probably seeing pl work wud make him a bit conscious...

other reasons, i cant think of at this moment...coz my mind had gone into snooze mode.😆

Are the above mentioned reasons less ??!! 😕
😆
i highly advise ppl not to take my permutations and combinations seriously...coz they will only leave with a headache..i seriously have a jumbled mind today...so its better if not ponder over this crap stuff of mine...u will end as confused as me and no wiser than u wer before😆

P.S ignore the typos...i am too lazy to read it...i cant endure the torture of reading my comment lest i delete everything out of embarrassment😆

Black lines lifted from update...and Brown lines are my bakwas🤢

my bakwas is longer than the update😆

and lastly aajkal har update mein kiss milta hai...😆


where are my other chipmunks...the self proclaimed show stopper who litearlly stops the show with her blabber and antics 😆 and the other one with the handkerchief ever ready to reserve her place😆...missing them sorely😭😭

Mine in Grrreen!! 😎
I tried to comment on ever part of the comment..but I failed!! 😳I don't have enough strength on this lazy holiday !! If I'll make few more efforts to make my brain work..My brain will proabaly stop working for the whole day!! 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mollycoddle


ohhh no u r underestimating urself...
we do the analysis...and u try to connect this ff to things or events that happens or has happened around u...i find ur way of trying to relate to this ff more commendable...coz analysis helps in understanding perspectives, but trying to relate or connect it to real life helps in gaining insight and know and understand life better...u pick up the right things and then incorporate in ur life, heading towards ur betterment...what u do, shows that u keeps these events in ur subconscious mind and recall it whenever u find any resemblance with anything that u feel is even remotely related to it...and then study the various perspectives of viewing the problem, or the event, and try to come up with the best alternative available...am i making sense🤪...i guess i shud keep my mouth shut😆

Oh My!!! All this looks so attractive ... it actually does but can we use some simpler words!!
I mean if I do soo much of thinking work..first understanding the Update..then the comments and now such sundar-sundar se comments..I'll go mad!
Waise di..many a times while doing some things or taking some decisions ...no amount of reading can help ...It's jst the moment..The particular moment where our experience works!! The presence of mind!! Hai na!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hw can dev go jst like that ?? loved da update

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