FF: To Sir, With Love(2) COMPLTD - Page 7

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

I'm neatly placing my handkerchief here and reserving this place ! 😆

r u reserving a place for u in a ovie theatre...but then this ff is nothing less than a movie...with frequent intervals 😆

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

r u reserving a place for u in a ovie theatre...but then this ff is nothing less than a movie...with frequent intervals 😆

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

okk i was plain lazy in writing comments to day and was looking for namru and shikhu's comments so that i can badger tham, but my ill luck, she seem to be on hibernation...so have to start my bhashan 😭...all by myself...wanted to write very little ended up writing a whole ram kahani on the update...god save u guys

(lines in reddish or rather maroon (i am not sure what color it is...i guess i am going colorblind😆) are lifted from the update...
black is my bakwas😆

well dev guy seems to be smitten and is sporting this lovesick puppy look...or it that since she is not giving him any bhav...so he seems to be fascinated and wants her as a conquest...its always fun to chase something that is not in ur reach...if thats the case, the G is going to give him taichi lessons soon, starting with a kick on his ass...😆

i love GEetie more than this name dolphin...and am seriously missing geet ka diwana vicky...😳😳😆

G seems to be naturally drawing all the attention of the males around her, with her natural charm,innocence...vicky maan and dev...haii kitne diwane is ladki ke

Geet "May be I need to go change. Seeing me in this attire has loosened some of your screws."...this line cracked me up...😆

dev better see her as a bhaabhi or else i will throw all the screws in the drain...😡😆 and sent NT the bulldog behind him

dev being too inquisitive and trying to pri info from her, about her and Maan...gadha...apne aap ko bahut tez samajhta hai...where is this NT...we never have her when she is needed, she better keeps dev in her control, or else he will go sniffing around ...and better he keeps his paws off G, even if transforms into a saint...😡😆

Yash "Have you tried top aerial view?"..whats the meaning of this line...bloody pervert yash..😡i hope i have got the meaning right...or else i am making kachara of myself 😆

why is dev suddenly interested in the equation between G and M...is it plain inquisitiveness or he is into some matchmaking for himself...is namune ka main kya karoon😡😆 or rather iss namune ko kya naam doon..i know thats lame...but i am in a mood to make lame jokes today😆

Geet "Sir, he is a fast one. He said I was hot and irresistible."

Maan went quiet.

Maan "Geet, don't make it obvious. But drop something and check if he is in your cabin now?"

Geet dropped the paper weight on the desk and bent down to pick it up and checked. Dev was there! This early!!!!

Geet "Surprise of all surprises! He is in early today."

Maan was still silent.

Geet "Sir, is there a problem?"

Maan "Geet, why don't you go and do your work now? I am busy."

are we seeing any hint of insecurity, fear or rather a slight hint of jealousy...coz i am grinning...i am a sadist...and i like when the hero is tortured with jealousy..😆...if yes i am elated 😆

on serious note he might feel that dev is irresistibly charming ( but me and namru have our eyes on maan😳...shikhu has her eyes on chipmunks...so pointless talking about her🥱)

is G seriouslt dimmag se dheeli...cant she see that he is being plain unsettled with dev calling her hot and irresistible...and she is attributing his sudden silence to him not wanting dev to see them together...has she left her brains at home,,, or is it dev ke sangat ka asar...😆

dev is insisting geet on a family dinner...hope he doesnt make G as his GF this time...warna bahut jhoote khayega...😡

Geet just nodded. When a person like Dev was there at home, how could Sir smile?...😆sahi kaha...😆i must say ur dialogues makes me have this permanent goofy grin on my face...sahi pehchana apne devar ko GEEt ne😆..(i am a bit in a filmy mood...so thats the reason being my stupid comments...i think its time to say yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi😆

Dev was satisfied with this answer. There seemed to be nothing between Bro and Geet. Just work. But he still had nagging doubts. He always had these kind of doubts when a girl was not really attracted to him.

dev tum toh gadhe ke gadhe hi rahoge...dont make conclusions so fast,,, coz u r soon going to see all of them turning wronf...keep ur doubts nagging u😆

Geet "Sir, he was trying to invite me to your home for dinner today. He insisted many times. I refused Sir. I did not feel it was appropriate. Hope you don't mind Sir."

He was silent. It was actually quite late and she had missed him all these days. She felt desperate for his touch and wanted some solace. There was too much emotional turmoil and she needed him to make her feel better. But she did not want to try something foolish. (maan seems to be recollecting Nt fiasco...hope he jumps on the bored before his brother sweeps her away...aisa ho toh nahi sakta...but then it will be fun to watch M taking some initiative to woo G...gosh i getting dreamy😍

Maan "Well I have made things easier for you. See!"

Suddenly the room turned opaque! He had blinds installed for all windows.

Geet "Sir! Vow so cool. Now you can have some privacy. Hai na Sir? So nice."

Maan "So where were we? Ah about your plan?"

Geet "Sir'Ok just to satisfy myself can I get one small kiss please?"

Maan smiled, "Ok fine. Since you said please."

someone is doing all the panning to get cozy with G...and G is asking him a kiss as if she is asking her dad a candy...the analogy is bad..i know...but thats what my brain cud churn out in the early morning😆...ohh maan is being meherbaan only coz she told him plzzz...jhoota kahin ka...man mein ladoo phoot rahe the and was waiting for the invitation😆

Geet "Sir you used to watch the show Bodywatch where beautiful people with even more beautiful skin even if they stayed in the sun the whole day just keep running here and there in bright swim outfits?"

Maan "Why that is the name of your channel now?" (maan givin her ideas😆

Geet "I was only asking because Maan Singh Khurana watching Bodywatch, hard to imagine Sir."

Maan "Then what do you imagine?"

Geet "Sir, since you know swimming and all, you can be on Bodywatch! That will be so cool hai na Sir?" (G is getting vivid in her imagination with each passing day..madam ko maan ko bodywatch mein dekhna hai...naughty gal...yeh innocent se hamari tarah pervert ban gayi🤣)

Maan smiled, "Geet you and your lame ideas. So if your small kiss is finished, will you go home now? It is getting late."

was baywatch changed to bodywatch🤣...i fell off my chair laughing like a lunatic...pehle KJO ko Jko bana diya...now baywatch ko bodywatch bana diya...

sheesh tumhare charan kahan hai...main poojna chahti hoon😆

waiting for the other devils to comment and me will come back again with my expert analysis, ripping their comments part by part😆..

so beware🤣...i am in a very crazy mood, so my comments will sound crazier than me...hope ppl survive reading my ramblings...😆.

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

I'm neatly placing my handkerchief here and reserving this place ! 😆

~Edited~

Ahem...Ahem!

Chal Shuru Ho jaa ladki!

The Update was toh mindblowing Ji!! I lubbed it!😍😍 I almost fainted while reading the last part and the worst part is there is not even a single person like Maan in my life to catch me and smile !! 😆

Ayyayyo Maan whatu are you tryingu to do Baabu!!!?? Don't give us such jhatka's Sirjee !! Now toh you are making things more convenient for Geetu!! Are you the same Dusht Daanav?? Yeah you are 'coz you are making us suffer like this na Maan Babu!!

Such romantic lines after the huggu..only geetu can do thisu!

Don't make things to goodu..I'm not able to stop thinking about these people amma! Show some taras on us ji!

Ayyo Devu..mind it bhaiya..She is your hone wali bhabhi yaara !! 🤣

You won't believe but I'm going crazy..That 'Butterfly Effect reminded of Kutcher Ji!! 🤣

Ok I accept that such theories only remind me of movies!! And I have even tried to apply that theory here!! That feeling is so stupidish when you unnecesseraly conncet two things..but never mind it gives us a reason to laugh at ourself! 😆

Geet shares everything with Maan Sijee..I lubb their moments. 😳

I love admiring Maan too!! He is truly a magicianu!! 😳

You know what I have this habit of recalling all the incidents that happened during that particular day while standing in one corner of the metro. And believe me today I was doing the same and I spent a some nice amount of time of my journey thinking about this FF 😆...thinking why do I like this so much and this is probably the first time where I'm writing such long comments..This FF is a perfect blend. It has some brilliant stuff and at the same time it has his own light-hearted moments..It has nothing which might make a reader feel that this Maan and Geet are two amazing dreamy people whom we can simply adore and we cannot relate ourselves to them.

This FF has things to we can relate ourselves to... which makes it simply fantastic!! It creates an ease..It usually happens that many a times we simply admire few things around us , very intellectual ,absolutely brilliant but we think twice before questioning or putting our point 'coz of some invisible line that is usually created , but in some in instances we simply forget about everything and feel so comfortable . Inspite of the brilliant stuff written here it has this beauty in it which makes it so magical. It's jst like the ppl around us ,we respect few ppl due to some or the other reason but the ones most close to our heart are ones whom we not only respect but enjoy admiring them . This FF is just like that!! Extra-Ordinarily Simple !

These Maan and Geet their characters don't have an boundaries ,there's no one way which we can define them which is the main reason which makes us more closer to these characters. This Geet has the power to sounding brilliant and stupid at the same time! 😆 I love this about her!!! 😆

Again for the nth time I'm stating the obvious and I have no idea why I keep doing this !😆 ..I seriously don't know!! I luv everything abt this FF!! 😃

i think we are forming some mutual admiration society, praising each other..😆.its only shikhu i love to pick nooks in her comments and make her answer back and then starts our tu tu main main...😆

with u, i feel like pampering u...😆 and indulging in ur antics😆

and whereas me and shikhu are kadva karelas🤣

dhanya ho yeh ff, dhanya ho yeh writer...dhanya ho is ff ke readers and finally dhanyam ho gayi main😆

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

dev's facade of a playboy cannot fool many...it is just that he has always been dominated by maan, who has happened to grow up early and take responsibilities...and then dadi and annie too have adored maan, although dadi loves and pampers dev, but dev must have missed that adoration and the pride that his family had easily bestowed on maan...

maan is not a man of words...and thats where he fails when he comes handling dev...he is someone who expects to be followed...as much as he is good in understanding human psychology and getting ppl do what he wants, he cannot strike that easy rapport and comfort level with a person just through convos...

his diversion into business had alienated {atleast at emotional level) from his family, since we see that he has his family but, they cant see what he undergoes...and the family support (emotional support or better word would be moral support) that he may need is lacking...dadi with her age related issues, annie who is childish...and dev with his playboy ways...i dont blame dev at all...coz like maan, he too is longing for the love, and expects ppl to love him for what he is, and not judge him by his lifestyle...G cud become a friend who cud guide him to a direction...where he could make something of himself...

maan and de have missed out on that sibling rapport...and now it seems to late build up that rapport without feeling awkward...thats where G may come into picture to thaw the ice between them , making D realise how he needs to buck up and do something productive...and maan in changing his approach towards D


maan must have seen the possibility of D falling for G, but he is trying to guage the reaction of G, since MUs started between M and G, post dev entry...
no matter how astute businessman he may be, with fantastic business acumen and ability to read ppl, not everything goes as planned...who wud have thought G might have taken D for her swimming lessons😆...and he just must have felt that its only him who is able to appreciate G and here we see V and D standing in queue to talk to her😆

i have no ide whether i have made any sense or not...so shikhu...no need to reply on this and embarrass me😆...

and regarding ur SSC...all i will say dont use such fancy words for urself...doesnt go with ur antics...showstealer..

u shud be stupid sarcastic chipmunk😉

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

Firstly..I'm not staying away from this content...!!!!😆

😲😲😲

You have toh left me speechless meri behna!!!

which behna r u talking about😆

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

i think we are forming some mutual admiration society, praising each other..😆.its only shikhu i love pick nooks in her comments and make her answer back and then starts our tu tu main main...

dhanya ho yeh ff, dhanya ho yeh writer...dhanya ho is ff ke readers and finally dhanyam ho gayi main😆

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

I know this is quite strange...Now a days.. something or the other happens everyday which makes me feel hopeless and then I feel like I'm turning bitter these days .. so I'm jst trying to escape that thingy by finding all the nice things in this FF!! 😆

This one gives me some strange happiness!!! 😆

yup...i agree...i just wish i read the updates the whole day, with sheesh by my side, dishing our updates for us every hour...how much fun it will be naa...but then poor sheesh ke fingers...😆...have i told...i am very greedy😆

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

which behna r u talking about😆

small kiss😆 glad that they are able to xpresss themselves
n intelligent maan for installing the blinds
n dev is full flaterred by geet n to add to that geet is not even getting attracted to his charm thats why he is trying more to impress geet
n god he called geet for dinner ye banda kabhi nahi sudherega
in normal terms its ok to get impressed by geet charm but we all know our geet is maan ki geet

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thank you once again for writing such a wonderful FF